The RP School-Tutors Needed-Learn past the basics of RPing

[Smamm]

I can always take up a class. |3 I just joined as both a tutor and student so... |3

[koolkatkoolkat123]

I'm not a tutor or anything but I thought I should post this link for I Ride Horses.Its the link to our class
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=467932

[Remorsa]

(( think you can fit me in? ))
Username: remorsa
How long have you been role-playing?: I have been role-playing for a long time say around 5 years off and on. I'm kinda rusty due to a large gap of inactivity because of past role-play problems...for example: fighting, to much drama, and the rp just dies out. After this happened a few times i decided to give rp a break. Now I'm back and wanted to touch up my rp skills. This is an awesome thing your doing by the way. Wish I had this when I was a noobie. i would love to be a tutor, but i don't have the time...
Favourite type of RP: mystery, animals, mythical, historical fiction, time period rp, creative RP plot not just the normal power ppl/werwolf/wolves/vampires....basically no roleplays based on movies or books unless it's just an idea that branched off of the movie or book then that's fine. I tend to lead towards the human rp not animals, but every once in a while i can do animals not all the time though.

Timezone: Eastern Standard Time a.k.a EST
Do you agree to not take the criticism personally and do as your mentor says?: I agree. I'll take all the criticism I can get.
What level of role-playing do you consider yourself?: semi-lit, maybe literate, I'm not exactly sure how to rate myself....
Are there any certain times you cannot be on?: week days 6am-4pm sometimes later due to the homework load.

Odaus walks through the tunnels and then an idea comes in his head. Doesn't Synfrei hang out at that shack? He takes a few left and right turns leading him to the underground tunnels that he made himself. He turns on a mini flashlight which eluminates the tunnel in a blue haze. Now, which way should I go? It had been a while since he came down these paths, he questions himself looking at the few tunnels branching off the main tunnel. As he dragged his fingers along the wall of the tunnel, the rocks weaving his hand every which way, until he smoothes the dirt in a certain spot finding a small ember pebble. This signaled the way to the shack. He looked at the correct tunnel and bent down smoothing his hand across the dry dirt, checking to see if there are any fresh human or animal tracks. As he observes there are no tracks to be found. He resumes walking to his destination. The last time he had come through here there was a huge spider that had made the tunnel it's home, but he took care of that by scaring it off with a torch of fire. There were still cobwebs sticking to the top of the cave, but no spider to be found. He gave a sigh of relief, not wanting to deal with that whole problem again especially if he didn't have his torch. As he came closer to the end of the tunnel he could see streams of light coming through the cracks of the boards that now resides above him. He listens in to the conversation and hears a new voice in the group. Kaala has her hands full once again. It never fails for her to not run into another newcomer. Hopefully this one will be on our side. He then listens for a specific voice, rather the style of talking than the voice, since Synfrei changes appearances so many times with that his voice changes also. He hears footsteps above him and the old boards give a loose creek. Trying hard not to be noticed he looks in one of the cracks above him and sees a red haired boy around Synfrei's age. That's him alright. I'm glad he's safe. I wonder what he's been up to. He then resumes walking to the latch and pulls the lever downwards causing the trap floor board above him to open upwards. He sticks his head out of the boards and doesn't bother getting out as his motive is only to find Synfrei and see if Kaala needs a hand with the new comers.

Movi's hold was beginning to loosen up, she quickly tightens it and as she was doing this her flyer drifted to close to the water and she was drenched by a wave. That was close! she thought to herself. If she had came any closer to the waves, her flyer could have gotten wet and that would've ended badly. As she was drying her clothes and tapping her compass she noticed a ship was near by. In her predicament, nice dry clothes and a bit of grub will do her some good. She then noticed a rip in the left wing and the hand Fid was coming loose. She has to land immediately or she will probably be taking a long swim back to the harbor. Her decision is decided. She raised the both hand fids, taking her high into the air at quite a fast speed. Since there was a whole she tilted to the left taking her toward the ship. She miscalculated her height and is headed straight forward the high mast. Oh, I do hope they're friendly.. Unlike last time when she was raided of her belongings and tied up in a cellar for aproximently a day in a half. Then she escaped of course, but all of her materials were gone and she had to start from scratch. Hence wanted for theft. Her flyer ran straight into the mast , the hand fids came loose and she plumets to the ground her flyer lifted up by the wind and flys off into the distance. She quickly takes off her pouches not wanting anything to impail her on the way down. She pushes the button and the knives come out. Her legs catch the rigging and she wraps them around the rope, now hanging upside down. All of her things sprawled out on the deck floor a good ways below her. "Ahoy! Can any of you mates lend me a hand?" she says dangling in the air, her legs tangled in rope.

As King and Kimba are eating Narah is scrambling in a couple human's arms trying to get her weighed. She hissed and tried to bite them, but they had these coverings on that prevented her from harming them. The humans smiled and nodded their heads in conversation as she was being put in small kennel type cage. After much hard work bringing Narah back to good health the humans decide to introduce her to the King and Kimba. They put her in a medium size cage partnered next to King and Kimba's with an iron gate separating lions in case they don't except her. Narah swishes her tail in irritation and hisses at the humans as they put her in yet another cage. Her eyes open wide with curiosity as she sees the lions through the cage. She opens her mouth using her sent glands to take in the smells of the new lions.

(( As you can see in this example my main problem is staying in the same tense. ))

Lea gasps for air as she awakens from a nearby sound. She takes in her surroundings confused and baffled. Where she sits, a meadow of flowers surrounds her and yet right in front of her are dirt tunnels. Two totally different scenes merging together. Despite this bizarre circumstance she stands up and brushes the grass off her clothes, wondering which tunnel to take. She takes her first step out on the dirt terrain and flowers sprout in the place of her footstep. One by one the imprints of her feet fade, the flowers wilting. Little does she know that she is being followed by one of the many hungry creatures that roam throughout the tunnels. As she continues her jaunt down the tunnel she hears a screech from behind her and quickly turns around, coming face to face with a peculiarly odd looking creature. She notices that the screech stops abruptly, but from what? Her pupils enlarge as she observes the creature. It was completely still, like time itself stopped. By the looks of it she does not want to stay and find out what it will do if it comes back to life. She quickens her pace and runs blindly through the tunnel, only leaving a trail of wilted flowers behind.

Ms. Fell responds," That's good, what class are you going to?" She has a curious side all the time similar to her cat Moke.

[rheia]

WolfGirl, Voledemort, and Boom- Okay, so what did everyone have in mind? What would really put you in the danger zone?

Um wow.What would put me in the danger zone? Yeah that would probably be anything that had humans and wasn't Harry Potter or an animal RP with wokves and/or lions.

[Teacup-old]

Alright, I'll make up a canine roleplay. I'll hopefully get it up tomorrow. Maybe even today. I will PM everyone the link. If you want, you can start the form. Any canine will be fine (ex: Coyote, Dog, Wolf) as long as you're not joining with a pet dog. It's going to be a wild canine roleplay.

[rheia]

Alright-y!You really know how to push past the boundaries don;t you?Well anyway I need it and before I forget..Thanks!

[backseatpanda]

Teacup, you really know how to please everyone. c:
I'll scuttle off and start on my form then.

[Verdana]

My class: Just a reminder that I'm still waiting for posts. If ++hott.cold doesn't post today, then please will the next person go. Thanks.

[.:OboeLove:.]

Verdana, would you mind taking in student Roseness? Besides that, the front page has been updated.

[Verdana]

That would be absolutely fine