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[Chry]

I would like some critique please!

Username: Chry
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=6201720#p6201720
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as nails
Deadline for your form: err . . .
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either here or PM, doesn't bother me

[MerryEaster]

I hope im doing this right xD

This is a critique for Chry!
Who the critique is for: Chry
What you had to say about it:
I thought it had a good story and moral. Even if it wasnt meant for a moral type story, i just see one in it. It was really touching and sad. I loved every part of it. I especially love how you named her Rouge(spelling?) I think Atwood and all the other members will enjoy it. I nearly cried at the one part, such a cute story <3

[Chry]

I hope im doing this right xD

This is a critique for Chry!
Who the critique is for: Chry
What you had to say about it:
I thought it had a good story and moral. Even if it wasnt meant for a moral type story, i just see one in it. It was really touching and sad. I loved every part of it. I especially love how you named her Rouge(spelling?) I think Atwood and all the other members will enjoy it. I nearly cried at the one part, such a cute story <3

I had to name her that . . . I prefer "Acai" but gaina said she was referred to as "Rouge" . . . I'll ask her about it if i win lol

And thank you . . . I dont wanna make people cry xD

[MerryEaster]

Oh okay. Im sure if you win her you could change her name.

No problem. But if you do make them cry, it will be in a good and touching way =)

[mokapi]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Mokapi.
Link to your form: It's not up yet; I don't plan on putting it up until the day/hour it's due. Please PM me for the form.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec.
Deadline for your form: This Saturday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

[EarthStar]

I would like some critique please!
Username:EarthStar
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=6198060#p6198060
Adoption Agency you are applying for:Tough As Nails
Deadline for your form:Unsure, 26th?
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?Either, if you post it though I might not see it, so either just pm it or pm me you posted it.

[Skyebreeze]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Skyebreeze
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4310
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough As Nails
Deadline for your form: I don't know, but soon.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either.

[Lady Masquerade]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Plepore37
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4290
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough As Nails
Deadline for your form: Idk....
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? By here

[Noctyrn]

I would like some critique please!
Username: dinkleberry111
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=224894&start=390
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Lenarion adoptions!
Deadline for your form: Today sometime
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please.

[Skylarr.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Minnie:)
Link to your form: PM me for it. (not posted yet)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails.
Deadline for your form: 9/11
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.