The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Lirrie]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Lirrie
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=5851085#p5851085
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tan
Deadline for your form: I dont know
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM

I just need the back story cryticed for now.

[Ranua]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Halloweendude
Link to your form: Click!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN (Tough As Nails)
Deadline for your form: Unknown
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM please.

[gingertail98]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Gingertail98
Link to your form: Here!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: Unknown
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? By PM

I am still working on this form just I want critique before going any further with it!

~Ginger

[June Bug]

I would like some critique please!
Username:
Kamaliah
Link to your form:
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=5852764#p5852764
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
TaN
Deadline for your form:
August 10th (around 9pm est)
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Pm please

Thank you :3

[Desmond]

I would like some critique please!
Username: -3B-
Link to your form: I do not wish to post it at this time. Please PM me. I am going for the Quagga Goennec.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: This upcoming weekend.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

I don't mind several people critiquing my form all at once; in fact, I find it rather helpful. I'll critique one of yours, in return, provided I am not going for that same character. I'd rather not have people going for the Quagga to critique mine, but I won't turn anyone away. Help?

[mokapi]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Mokapi.
Link to your form: It's not up yet; I don't plan on putting it up until the day/hour it's due. It's also just the personality right now, so it's not too long (:
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec.
Deadline for your form: This Friday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

[Soccerlvr]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Soccerlvr
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=6095263#p6095263
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennecs
Deadline for your form: Saturday, the 21st. 5pm EST
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine. I appreciate any and all critique I get :3

[Ebonpyre]

I would like some critique please!
Username:
Azora
Link to your form:
Here. (Please ignore self notes occassionally seen in the form ^^;.)
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Goennec.
Deadline for your form:
This weekend
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either way is fine; whichever is prefferred by the critiquer.

[Skylarr.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Minnie:)
Link to your form: Notta. Its not finished so PM me for it.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: Sat. 5 PM PST
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM

[MerryEaster]

I would like some critique please!
Username:MerryEaster
Link to your form: click me
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: August 10th (around 9pm est)
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either or. Prefer PM