The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[corgie]

I would like some critique please!
Username:SweetCorgi
Link to your form:Clickeh
Adoption Agency you are applying for:Corgi Farms
Deadline for your form: June 1st 2011
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?:Whichever

[tanner]

can i get critique on something thats not for an agency? like my personal story about a character.

[,,,]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Artsy
Link to your form: (it's not finished but I would like some feed back on it so far and yes, I know the plot is really cheesy DX) Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: "Sparkle, Gloom, Scene, and Unloved Adoption Center!"
Deadline for your form: Friday 30th July
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

[Desmond]

I would like some critique please!
Username: -3B-
Link to your form: I do not wish to post it at this time; Please contact me if you wish to critique.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN; the wasp Smili.
Deadline for your form: Next week sometime. Not quite settled.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

I will critique your form in return, if you so desire. I'd prefer that I get critique from those not going for the same one I am, as I don't like to read my competition (at all), but I will not turn down offers. I do like multiple critiques, so if someone posts that they'll take care of this, don't be discouraged.

[Sorren Fey]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Theories
Link to your form: removed
Adoption Agency you are applying for:-
Deadline for your form:I dont mind.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here

[iBrevity]

I sent feedback to 3B, as a note. c:

This is a critique for Theories!
Who the critique is for: The art.
What you had to say about it:
What a stunning piece, first off. xD
I love the concept of the chocolate streaming down the page, and you made it such a good texture that even at first glance that's what I automatically assumed it was. The fruit adorning their hats and the one strawberry the girl on the right is holding just exemplifies the idea that this entire piece is of food. c:

The only thing I may have to offer critique on is the glass of red wine [maybe? xD] on the far left. It has an entire cover of chocolate over the top and streaming down the side and I've never seen chocolate do that unless there was some sort of cap on the glass in the first place, if that makes any sense.
It would flow more like down the sides and maybe inside to the wine itself, but more along the edges too. I wouldn't think it would make a flat surface.

I really like the focal point of this piece though, the women, and I think you did an amazing job, especially on their expressions. Looking at this picture just makes me want to know more; who are the women? What are they doing with so much chocolate? 8D
Amazing.

EDIT- Just got reminded my someone else of one other thing. On the left side there is a pool of the chocolate near the girl's wing? Why is it pooling there, exactly? There doesn't seem to be a surface there, and it should technically be dripping down further and a little across her wings, right? xD Just curious as to why its there. c:

[Theories]

I sent feedback to 3B, as a note. c:

This is a critique for Theories!
Who the critique is for: The art.
What you had to say about it:
What a stunning piece, first off. xD
I love the concept of the chocolate streaming down the page, and you made it such a good texture that even at first glance that's what I automatically assumed it was. The fruit adorning their hats and the one strawberry the girl on the right is holding just exemplifies the idea that this entire piece is of food. c:

The only thing I may have to offer critique on is the glass of red wine [maybe? xD] on the far left. It has an entire cover of chocolate over the top and streaming down the side and I've never seen chocolate do that unless there was some sort of cap on the glass in the first place, if that makes any sense.
It would flow more like down the sides and maybe inside to the wine itself, but more along the edges too. I wouldn't think it would make a flat surface.

I really like the focal point of this piece though, the women, and I think you did an amazing job, especially on their expressions. Looking at this picture just makes me want to know more; who are the women? What are they doing with so much chocolate? 8D
Amazing.

EDIT- Just got reminded my someone else of one other thing. On the left side there is a pool of the chocolate near the girl's wing? Why is it pooling there, exactly? There doesn't seem to be a surface there, and it should technically be dripping down further and a little across her wings, right? xD Just curious as to why its there. c:

Basically the whole thing I drew, was Vanilla vs Chocolate. So it was either Vanilla, the sweetest of all, or Chocolate the addicting one. Thanks for the critique c8
BTW, can someone teach me how to watermark? I have no idea...so sad lol

[Sorren Fey]

Theories, when I find one more piece of art 'from you', you will get in serious trouble.

[iPawki]

I would like some critique please!
Username: ~ Daydreamer ~
Link to your form: Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: This Sunday, I think?
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here, or PM if you prefer it that way.

[keydemon]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Ninjutsu
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=5852716#p5852716 (I'm not done with the one with the leopard wolf, Icewind, but Riku's is done. You can critique on Icewind's so far if you want though. I mainly looking for critique on Riku's.)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough As Nails
Deadline for your form: Not sure... xD A few days I think...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? By PM.