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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby deadaccount2564 » Sun Dec 11, 2011 9:39 pm

THE AXEMAN
Hattie was walking home one evening when she saw an old beggar.
"Please give me a few pennies!" he croaked at Hattie.
"No." Hattie said, walking straight past him.
Hattie turned around; the beggars bloody fingers were falling to dust, and the same for the rest of his body, covered in blood. The beggar screamed, and behind Hattie there was a black figure, holding a axe. The last thing Hattie saw was her blood. She never came home.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Wild Wolf:. » Sun Dec 11, 2011 10:40 pm

I'll check it out.

(Here is a good one I think... I made up, I got the part of it from a website but instead I made up the names and the girl(who I called Jannet) actually just pinned her pants the the ground with a real knife, the other two did walk home, and instead the girl died of fright.)

[i]Max, Annia, and Jannet were coming home one night, from a party and they passed by cemetery about a block away frome home. Max got excited and told the girls of an old legend about if you stood above one of the graves and stabbed down in the grave once with a dagger the body below you would reach up and grab your leg and pull you down into it with him or her.

Jannet ,after some persuading, finally agreed to do it for $20.00 and any favor at all or something like that from both Max and Annie, being brave took a pocket knife from Max and opened the gates and walked for a while till she reached on she held it up her blue eyes blazing with fear, she flipped her long red hair onto her back, the other two watched calmly suspecting nothing, then Jannet suddenly jabbed the pocket knife into the ground for a while nothing happened...

Then Jannet screamed! She felt a bony grasp tightly around her ankle she screamed and screamed as it dragged her into the ground slowly...to her death.
Max and Jannet laughed thinking she was was playing a joke on them and walked home.

The next morning the two discovered that Jannet had not come home, but they still thought it was a joke! But the parents were more worried then them, especially Jannet's parents.

They went on for another day without a single worry. They were coming home from another party, but just the two of them. They were walking fast and laughing so hard that they didn't notice that they were walking by the cemetery. But when they did it was too late. The skidded to a halt in front of two shadowy figures nearly running into them. They began to edge around them when a pale hand shot out to block them “Hey! You owe me 20 bucks Ya' know!” they girl laughed looking down at the ground, it was Jannet!

But when she raised her head to look at them, instead of the bright blue her eyes were blood red, and her hair pitch black, not the blazing red, and twice as long. Max stumbled around in his pockets for money, while Annie stared at her in disbelief. Max finally jerked his hand out with a twenty and held it out to her fidgeting. Jannet stretched her arm out of the shadow, as soon as it met the moonlight the skin crumbled away. Jannet laughed evily as the two's expression changed to horror. As soon as she retrieved her hand the skin was suddenly back, still pale.

The shadowy creature next to rose up higher, he towered over the three, twice as tall as any of them. He wore a black cloak that completely covered his face except for his eyes that flared like fire. Jannet laughed again shoving the 20 dollars into the belt around her waist over her black dress. “Now for that favor...” she flashed a evil smile “You can go to hell!” Max and Annie bolted put the creature shot out a staff tripping them and he laughed a laugh that would ring in your ears for months and give you nothing but bad dreams, the two instantly covered their ears, Jannet shook her her finger pretending to scold the creature “Now, now, now that's not the way you treat people you just meet!” She sighed “I guess I must introduce you, Death this is Max and Annie, your prisoners, Annie Max, this is death, your escort to hell” Jannet started fretting over her nails “I could have brought the Devil himself, but you two just weren't worth it.” Bothe Jannet and Death began to laugh and she pulled out the pocket knife which slowly changed into a small dagger then all four disappeared in a flash of fire.

That was the last anyone saw of those two. Just so you know Jannet was too nice to take them there so she just left them somewhere else isolated from people for revenge on their lack of attention to her screams and pleads for help. She now secretly wishes everything could rewind, that she had never died or released her old friends to a place they would never find a way back home. If she could find them she would bring them back to their old life with a warning “Beware the legends.”

The moral of this story is...Don't mess around in cemeteries or with their legends, or anything of the sort!
True Story...Just kidding! How'd ya' like it?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Ballerina » Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:08 am

Phoenix's Flight wrote:
Forever_Broken</3 wrote:Not entirely scary but i found is creepy
* = E
One day I got bored so I decided to go to my friend's house who lives on the other side of the highway. There is a blind corner where you can't see if anything is coming. I was watching the cars go bye, waiting for them to stop coming so I could cross. I saw that nothing was coming so I started across. All of a sudden a Mack truck comes speeding towards me. And I knew I didn't have enough time to get out of the way. At the exact second I saw it right in front of me, out of the corner of my eye I saw someting swoop down from the sky and grab me by the waist and throw me across the highway. I looked back and all I saw was the truck going by like nothing happened. I got a good look at the license plate. It said "FROM H*LL". At that point I was on my knees praying. I asked God if he could help catch the person who almost killed me and I kept thanking him for my life being spared. I just went to my friend's house and asked his mom to take me home. The rest of the day all I could do was think about what happened until I fell asleep. The next day I woke up and opened my door to get the newspaper and there was a man standing there in a white suit. He said "It's okay. Justice was served. Bye the way, the boss doesn't usually do it like this. But he makes exceptions for the demons." Then he picked up my newspaper and put what looked like a business card in it. Then he looked up to the sky, waved at me and disappeared. I thought I was dreaming. Totally forgetting about the card, I took the newspaper in the house and sat down. After thinking for a while, I opened up the newspaper and the card fell out. Before I got to pick it up, I saw the same truck on the front page of the newspaper all smashed up with the same license plate. "FROM H*LL".
The headlne read "Man Dies In Freak Accident". What happened was he ran into a telephone pole and it tipped over on his truck and one of those grip bars they use to climb up the telephone poles impaled his skull making him bleed to death. It turns out he was an escaped mental patient who killed 13 people. Then I picked up the card and it said at the top "Angels Inc." and at the bottem it said "You're welcome." I've never been the same since.


O.O wow that's... creepy! but cool too.. must be lucky to have an angel save you!


Wow I would go nuts for awhile and my mom wouldnt believe me.
Now feel the wrath of my purple ninjas!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:17 am

mouse101 wrote:Heres one.my mom bought me a book of scary stories. this one is scary funny.

The Ghost With The Bloody Fingers.


There was a hotel room where people would NEVER stay the whole night. Just when you were about to go to sleep, a ghost would come out of the closet, showing you its fingers, which were bloody. Then it would extend its arms out, screaming "bloooooooooddddddyyyyyyy fingers". Of course they would run out, screaming at the top of their lungs. But this one particular man didn't care for the rumors about this room. He only had his guitar case, and one suitcase. He asked for a room, which happens to be the room where the ghost is at. The desk clerk tells him about the ghost, but the man just brush it off. He gets the room key, and walks to his room. Later on that night, he decides to play with his guitar. The ghost comes out of the closet and extends his bloody fingers and screams, "bloooooooddddddyyyyyyy fingers". The man didn't seem to notice and continues to play with his guitar. The ghost screams a little louder, "BLOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDYYYYYYYYY FINGERS!" The man kept playing with his guitar as if he didn't care. The ghost comes closer, and screams even louder, "BLOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDYYYYY FINGERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The man looks up and see the ghost with the bloody fingers and says, "Shut up! Take a chill pill and get a bandaid!"



XD I LAUGHED SOOO HARD!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby glitter. » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:10 am

If you wanna see soem scary things/ gruesome gore, watch a few episodes of Dexter. XD LOL. I have a story i will post later.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby glitter. » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:16 am

Sonnie wrote:
Phoenix's Flight wrote:is it lavender town?

Well it has been discussed hndreds of pages ago, and it has been proved wrong. People do not die if they listen to it. Some people who have sensitive ears might have headaches, but NOBODY should go crazy after listenig it (Suicide, walk smash into a moving car/being hit).

If I were you, I would ban that video. It is not fit to be seen, young or old.


me and my friend stayed up till like 12 and watched a bunch of "supernatural videos." Such as Suicide Mouse, and etc. We ended up watchng Lavender Town and couldnt sleep for the rest of the... er... morning. I have the theme song stuck in my head and its been over a month.


What's Lavender Town?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:18 am

Lavendar Town is a glitched up city in Red & Blue pokemon series. Its a video game, and the high frequencies of the music get stuck in the gamer's head, usualy causing headaches, ear infections, or even nose bleeds. It can get highly addictive, and kids even commited or tried suicide when it was taken away. -_- What frightened me the most was what the characters spoke. They told of death and threats...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:26 am

Paramore Lover wrote:“It’s the apocalypse, Pete!” yelled Jacob as an explosion lit the skies. Downtown, which was close to Jacob, was suddenly and violently filled with screams and bright explosions. Already having flashbacks to World War II, Jacob began to panic even more when he saw people shambling about, going to and from the location of the explosions.

Pete, his loyal old dog, growled feebly at the people passing by. They appeared to be walking corpses, and this became clear to Jacob after another bright explosion lit the area enough for his old eyes to see clear enough.

Jacob turned for his door and yanked Pete’s collar. The old hound went tumbling in with Jacob as he slammed the door shut and went about setting the various locks in his house.

After securely locking down his house and setting in place his window bars, he got up the nerve to take a peek outside. Out there, the sky flashed with explosions that rocked his house. Suddenly, a face popped up right in front of him. Startled, he fell backwards and onto his coffee table.

“I know you’re in there old man,” the person outside groaned. From the lighting inside his house, he could see the burn marks and missing flesh on the person’s face.

Shouting wildly he hit the lights and ran to his bedroom, which was upstairs. Pete was right behind him.

The man outside banged on his door. “Come out and join the party!” he groaned in a dead voice. After a few breathless minutes, the banging stopped and Jacob figured the man would bring a whole horde of his undead friends back to get him.

He reached into his dresser drawer and moved away his socks, retrieving a pistol. “They’ve been saying the zombie apocalypse was coming, ol’ Pete. I read it on them sites. Now it’s true. I’m sorry old boy,” he said, aiming the gun at his lifelong companion, curled up on a pile of that week’s newspapers.

The dog died with only a quiet whimper. Next, Jacob turned the gun on himself.

“I planned for this day so carefully, but now they know I’m in here. Damn it, Sally, I’m coming to see you,” he said as he pulled the trigger.

That was not his last though, however. The very last thing that went through his mind in the last few moments while he was still alive was a headline on one of the newspapers under Pete.

“Zombie Costume Party Downtown Halloween Night.”


surrr he paniced that there where zombies, but it was just a costume? :o Poor dog...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby glitter. » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:36 am

Wow. Pokemon is scaring people. I find that oddly funny.So it's a kids game? That's nice.
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