This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

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Did You Like This Story?

Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
69
18%
OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
57
15%
Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
204
54%
Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
45
12%
 
Total votes : 375

Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby Nitro Indigo » Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:16 am

Just finished reading this! Great story JF! I love all of those plot twists.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 18, 2013 6:29 am

(25-2) Gylfie wrote:Just finished reading this! Great story JF! I love all of those plot twists.

Really? Thank you! It's always nice when somebody says they like it, because there's a bunch of haters out there. Thank you for commenting! You just made my day! ;)

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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby The Doctors Wife » Tue Jan 22, 2013 12:28 pm

As far as a fanfic type thing on CS, I don't really have anything to say about this story, but when it comes to a published book for sale, I'm just not okay with it. I reviewed it on amazon and barnes and noble.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jan 22, 2013 2:20 pm

The Doctors Wife wrote:As far as a fanfic type thing on CS, I don't really have anything to say about this story, but when it comes to a published book for sale, I'm just not okay with it. I reviewed it on amazon and barnes and noble.

If you're talking about the price, then that's the lowest I could put it at. And wait, it's on Barnes And Noble? How the heck did it get there?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby The Doctors Wife » Tue Jan 22, 2013 2:28 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
The Doctors Wife wrote:As far as a fanfic type thing on CS, I don't really have anything to say about this story, but when it comes to a published book for sale, I'm just not okay with it. I reviewed it on amazon and barnes and noble.

If you're talking about the price, then that's the lowest I could put it at. And wait, it's on Barnes And Noble? How the heck did it get there?


Not the price, the book in general.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby Odin Arrow » Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:12 am

Meh.

It's not formatted that great, the storyline is cliche, it obviously hadn't been edited, and it's overrated.

But at least people get some enjoyment out of it.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:50 pm

DeeDeeluver wrote:Meh.

It's not formatted that great, the storyline is cliche, it obviously hadn't been edited, and it's overrated.

But at least people get some enjoyment out of it.

I edited it a bit when I published it, but I only had 3 days to proofread it before the publishing offer ended.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby Whiteclan » Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:55 pm

Um, how do you get a book published?
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:02 pm

Whiteclan wrote:Um, how do you get a book published?

Will PM you about it. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!/TIAJNAD

Postby Whiteclan » Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:03 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Whiteclan wrote:Um, how do you get a book published?

Will PM you about it. :)

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