The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Skylarr.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Minnie:)
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=120564&p=5101354#p5101354
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Sparkle, Scene, Gloom and Unloved Adoption Center
Deadline for your form: Sat.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM!

[SilverHund]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Smoky
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=82380&p=5080346&hilit It's not complete, I would just like to know how it is so far
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Break Of Dawn, owned by Plepore37
Deadline for your form: I don't know
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM

[nivvin]

I would like some critique please!
Username:Nivvin
Link to your form:Clicky!
Adoption Agency you are applying for:Sparkle, Scene, Gloom and Unloved Adoption Center
Deadline for your form: Saturday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Both, PM fits best, though.

[Papercutt.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Triple.B
Link to your form: First one : viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4030
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: Not sure....
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is good as long as i get feedback :]

[The Sky's The Limit]

I would like some critique please!
Username: The Sky's The Limit
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4040 (uploading artwork soon)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: 19th, I'd like a response at least a day before then though so I can change as needed.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either way, but I'd like feedback someone soon. Don't rush yourselves, though.

[Desmond]

TAN people: Pretty sure the round ends on the 19th. ;)

I would like some critique please!
Username: -3B-
Link to your form: PM me if you are willing to critique. I do not wish to post it publicly at this time.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN; form is for #9, Pleek.
Deadline for your form: The 19th, would like a response by the 18th, please so I can edit.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

Preferably, I'd like for someone not going for the same character to critique, because there are just some people I don't trust to give an honest crit. However, I will accept help from anyone that wishes to give it, I acknowledge that I can't be picky.

[tinydoodles]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Boundingfox
Link to your form: Clickidy click click click c:
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: The 19th, but I'd prefer feedback sooner than that ;3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whatever is easier c:

~Bound

[Ranua]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Halloweendude
Link to your form: Click!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN (Tough As Nails)
Deadline for your form: Unknown
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

[Hanoverian]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Hanoverian
Link to your form: CLICK!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: The 19th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, please. :3

Thank you!

EDIT: By the way, this story is based off of ANOTHER story from the last round and TaN, my story for Marzipan. Since I got her, I decided to incorporate her into this. C: Her fourm

[mokapi]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Mokapi.
Link to your form: [link]
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN.
Deadline for your form: The 19th- this Monday. Response by tomorrow/Sunday/the 18th would be wonderful.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

Note: There are two separate forms; feel free to only critique one but I'd rather not get a critique from someone applying for the same character. I already got a pretty good critique for Kyrgo, but I -just- finished Gaerbok/Bokka's so I really need one for his.