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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Thu May 07, 2015 8:11 pm

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I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: Hannah. I know there's already one, so if that's not ok, Ann
Gender: female.
Personality: She likes hanging out with friends, and feel comfortable with them. She is witty ands smart. Around people she doesn't know, she's shy and quiet. She isn't very sporty, but loves climbing trees.
Hobbies: Reading, writing, she doesn't like to show people her stories because she doesn't want them to laugh, climbing trees. She hates doing populer's homework, but does it anyway.
Group: Nerds.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? yes
Others:


Elven wrote:
are you still open?? If not sorry, I just really want to join!

[size=150]I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: Lucas (Luke)
Gender:male
Personality:Luke is an out-going sort of guy, that never misses a chance to make a joke out of a situation, he plays pranks a lot. He uses comedy to cover up his true emotions and he flirts a lot. Because he spent most of his pup-hood in Spain, whenever Luke becomes angry or flustered or confused he usually starts trailing off into Spanish without being fully aware of it. (Also he sometimes uses spanish to get out of conversations with Snowy).
Hobbies: fencing,archery, taking things apart and putting them back together (overall tinkering), pranking.
Group: Snowy put him in jocks but he hangs out with the outcasts.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? Yep! He liked her and her pranks immediately.
Others: he is able to control fire
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Not sure if you're accepting but I was wondering if Silver could be in the Hawk...
I'm attending Furford Academy!
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Name: Silver Stone
Gender: Female... duh?
Personality: Fun, Caring, but if you got on her bad side, you might regret it :twisted:
Hobbies: Archery, Reading, Writing, Flying, Farm Stuff, Writing in her Chicken xD
Group: Outcasts. Suprised? No.
Is he/she a friend of Skyler? Yes, as you know from the chicken
Others: Nothing else to say but KEEP WRITING!


Well, there was still one space... But since you guys are awesome for the support, I guess I'll accept them all. Forms are closed for now, though.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BlondeChick » Fri May 08, 2015 8:18 am

This is awesome! I couldn't stop reading, can't wait for more! ^-^ :thumbup:
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Sat May 09, 2015 3:47 pm

Hahahahahaaha I guess charley is still depressed over skyler.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sat May 09, 2015 4:21 pm

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Okay, okay! I said wrote that Music was coming, but really, Heaven Clan doesn't know a single thing about timing. Or maybe I'm just impatient... Oh, yeah! This is the first time I didn't write 'Dear Hawk' at the beginning. Let me start again....

Dear Hawk,

I got a bunch two new messages - one of them was late due to internet problems, but Xavier went and tinkered with it and now it seems to be faster than ever. Well, here’s the first one -


Still missing you, Skyler - you’ll probably get this late since we had network problems, but you’ll get it someday….. There’s a video attachment - go ahead, click it! And of course, here’s my new PawTube video! Click that link to get to my PawTube video. Remember to comment and like it!

http://www.pawtube.donnotclickthislink.com

Kolli



Okay… Let me watch the video attachment first….


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Snowy: *paints pawnails* Just get over with it. Name and interests?
???: I’m Alicia, but I prefer Ace, cause it’s like, much cooler! Then my interests? Gaming, of course! It’s like the best thing ever - except for going on the internet. And eating! I can’t survive without eating! There’s M&Ms, Skittles -
Snowy: *gasps* Those things rot your teeth! Nobody will like you if you eat all those sugary things - you’ll become fat, and -
Ace: I thought you were going to sort me into a group! *bounces back and forth*
Snowy: Outcasts -
Ace: Okay - Bye! *bounces off*
Snowy: ……

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Snowy: Ewwww! You’re -
???: Geez, you haven’t even asked for my name, dawg! *rolls eyes* No need to be nice to these -
Snowy: How dare you! You’re -
???: *rolls eyes* You must be like, really forgetful, cause you haven’t asked for my name. And interests, either - or maybe you think having your head hacked off with a scythe is fun? *runs a paw over the scythe*
Snowy: *gulps* I - Wha - What’s your na - name and interests?
???: Geez, finally! I’m Hannah, but everyone’s going to call me Han - nothin’ more, nothing less - unless a sport ‘round here is having your head hacked off. *opens notebook* And doodling what’s I do - and of course, if there’s a sport of slicing annoying dogs’ heads of here, I’d be interested in that, too.
Snowy: *gulps* I - Well -
Han: *snorts and walks off*
Snowy: *turns to Sunny* Tell - tell that girl she’s in Emos!
Sunny: But I don’t want to ruin my sweater -
Snowy: DO IT!
Sunny: *runs after Han*



Okay… That was what happened at Ace’s and Han’s… grouping. I’m going to watch that PawTube video when I have time…. The next message.


Another sorting… And did you get Ace’s and Han’s sorting? They’re nice, I guess…. Well, just watch the video attachment.

P.S. Did you know Sunny nearly had her head sliced off?

Lilly



Okay… Let me see.

*click*


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Snowy: Hmm… Popular or Nerd? Popular or -
???: Hi… I’m Hannah…..
Han: What?! There’s another me?! This girl doesn’t look like -
Alex: It’s not uncommon for several dogs to have different names, if the name is a common one, such as Sam….
Han: Yeah, yeah -
Snowy: SHUT YOUR JAWS! *turns to new kid* Well, if you must know, I am Snowy, the most popular, beautiful dog at this school, and those kids *points at Han and Alex* are the bottom of the school. Well, maybe not the green one with the weird hair… but still, they’re not at popular, as beautiful -
Han: Just continue the sorting - or you want a taste of my scythe?
Snowy: I - well *turns to new kid again* name and interests?
???: I’m Hannah…. and I like reading…. writing……. and -
Snowy: Great! *pulls a book out of bag* Do my homework. Now. And you’re a nerd, like the green dog.
Hannah (I’ll call her Ann so I won’t get messed up): And climbing trees…. But -
Snowy: Do it!
Ann: I…. I’ll do it….. *takes it and runs away*
Alex: Poor girl… I wouldn’t do it if I were her… Now, what homework did I have due today? *starts looking through bag*

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Snowy: You’re jocks!
???: But I didn’t get to say anything -
Snowy: *sighs* Fine, but make it quick.
???: I’m Lucas, but yeah, call me Luke. And of course, I like fencing, archery, tinkering -
Snowy: Yep, jocks! Now go -
Luke: Go where? Like the bathroom?
Snowy: The jocks -
Luke: Oh - your paw nails look nice, but they need some more of your polish. *points at bottle*
Snowy: Anything for you, cutie! *starts reapplying pawnail polish*
Luke: Oh, yeah - and you might want to feel those pawnails of yours - you never know when you’re going to get pranked!
Snowy: Wait - what? *checks pawnails* IT’S GLUE! HOW DARE YOU -
Luke: Bueno, eso fue divertido! :) Ella -
Snowy: What in the world -
Luke: *walks off, grinning*

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Snowy: A SHIMA LONGTAIL! Finally, I get to met one of those famous, beautiful, rare species of dog - but not as beautiful as me -
???: What’s so special about a Shima Longtail like me? We might be rare, maybe beautiful if you think, but I don’t actually think you’re more beautiful than some of them. *points to the Outcasts*
Snowy: HOW DARE YOU! You - you -
???: The name’s Silver Stone, by the way. I do archery, reading, writing, flying, and of course, my favourite kind of job is feeding the chickens. You know, I started writing in my Chicken while feeding them -
Snowy: YOU DO DIRTY STUFF LIKE FEEDING THE CHICKENS?! OUTCAST! Wait - you write in a -
Silver: I’m not surprised. *walks off*

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Snowy: Hmm... Jock or Outcast, Jock or Outcast... Well, what's your name and interests?
???: I... I'm Cristorfer Galaxy -
Snowy: What? Cristo-what?
Cristorfer: But call me Cristo for short. As for my interests.... Writing, reading, drawing... and learning....
Snowy: Hmm... Now, maybe Nerds.... Or Outcast, cause that sweater is like, so old fashioned and dirty, and... Though you haven't done anything to annoy me yet, maybe Jocks....
Cristo: ....
Snowy: Jock, for now.... But do anything that annoys me and you're down to Outcast. Got it?
Cristo: ..... Okay.... *walks off*



They all seem kinda cool…. Ann looks like Bloom, though. I wonder if Silver will want to be friends with me - I kinda admire Shima Longtails, you know. Well, Music still isn’t here, though she’ll be coming soon…. I hope. Well, then, I’ll be bringing you along for the ‘mission’, so…. See you later, Hawk… For now.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Sat May 09, 2015 4:26 pm

Hawk: Zaijian!
Okay, that happened
Quotin' frozen are we
Yep
I can't for the new update!
But this one just came out
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sat May 09, 2015 6:44 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Music arrived like, a minute after I closed my IPaw. Almost as soon as I closed my IPaw, Angel spoke to me….

Angel: Skyler. Music will arrive soon, but we cannot stay any longer here. I cannot explain much now.
Me: So what -
Angel: You two will go to the Undead Clan. I suppose your friend, Faith, is the leader there. She will give you instructions.
Me: Wait - the Undead Clan? Like when someone eats a chicken down there, it turns into an undead chicken which runs around with wings out screaming -
Angel: Faith will protect you.
???: *flies over and lands beside me*
Angel: Ah, Music. You are here at last. So we have a mission, for you and Skyler. We want you to go to the Undead Clan.
Music: What?! With zombie dogs that eat your brains?!

Yeah, I was thinking about that too… Well, better explain to her.

Me: *slaps a paw over Music’s mouth* Shh! Remember how our friend Faith is the Undead Clan leader? Well, she's gonna help us!

I’m not even sure if Faith is actually our friend… But an ally, I suppose.

Angel: As I was saying, you will be transported there and Faith will give you instructions. Now, start your mission! *throws golden dust over us*

BZZZT!

I think I was screaming like a girly girl when we arrived. I don’t think Music noticed…. But I was about to start screaming again when I saw what coated the ground.

Yup, it’s the Undead Clan alright. There are corpses and dead bodies…. Everywhere…. Yuck. I stepped on one and my paw’s covered in green slime… Eew…. Well, it was a while of walking on damp, slimy ground until we spotted the castle.

Me: Look! There! A castle! Faith will probably be there!

Okay… The castle was green… Like the ground. It was tall, with crumbling stones and slime dripping off some of the windows…. There seemed to be a broken window or more on each of the towers…. And the zombie animals kept on hissing at us as we walked in. At least we found Faith quite quickly….

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Faith: Music, Skyler! You're here!
Music: Yes, we are! So explain what's wrong.
Faith: So, the Death Vile, has been stolen. By...Bitewing...so, we need you to retrieve it. Wind and electricity can make the strongest storm cloud. So we need you to get it. But you cannot go like that! *waves paw*
Me: Wait…wha?

I didn’t get anything… Well, she seems to be saying we make the strongest storm cloud, a combination of wind and electricity… Well, I think I got the end part…. After it happened.

Faith flicked up her paw, sending a swirling plume of green dust around us. It felt like dust…. Wait - it was dust. Okay, let me start again… It felt like sand, and it stung my eyes. Then when it cleared, I looked at Music…

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She was holding a syringe bottle thing, like Simon… And Soulstealer, now I think about it. It was green, and there was a creepy shadow monster thing curled around her…. Then when I looked in a puddle of green slime, I saw… THIS!

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My hoodie… felt kinda weird, with ragged holes like all over the place. My wings were leathery… and disgusting, I guess. Like a bat… Yuck. When I ran my tongue over my teeth… I nearly sliced it off. I HAD FANGS! Like a vampire… My sword had changed too… INTO A SCYTHE! Why didn’t I ever take scythe training lessons with Fang at Furford? Then the worst part… Was my eyes. They were glowing red…. with like smoky wisps of red floating out. I was about to scream… Not like a girl, of course… Fang would have probably screamed if that happened to him… Talking about Fang, Music’s ‘new’ look was kind of similar to his… We both looked more evil… At least I looked a little like my old self. Music had a completely new look….

Faith: *glances over at Music* That Shadow Monster will guide you! Also, you need a fake Vile to swap for the real one. Your names will be *points at me* Screech, and *Points at Music* M…Magric!

What? Why does Music get the map and the only thing I get is a weird name that kinda means a scream? Like a girly girl’s scream? Did Faith read my mind… or read you? [b]Did she?![b] Oh yeah, you’re just a book… And Music got a name like from out of a fairytale… Lucky her….

I spotted Music zapping the Vile with some of her electric powers… Then it seemed to be all crackly and something. So while she did that… when Faith and Music weren’t looking, I added a little tornado in there. Surprising, it didn’t jump out. Well, I want to see the Hell Clans’ face when they try to open the fake Vial… Anyways, Faith didn’t notice it, and she threw some green dust at us again and we were warped to the entrance of their castle…. Then we went in…

There were lava and horrible looking creatures everywhere…. and this page is about to be finished. Ugh. I’ll have to start writing on another page…. Well, I guess I won’t have to write ‘See you later, Hawk’ since I’m straight away going to start writing on the next page… Oh, wait - I just wrote ‘See you later, Hawk’ - and did it just now again. Well, I’d better get writing….
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby LostFoxInTheStorm » Sat May 09, 2015 7:43 pm

Omg. Hannah's intro/sorting is perfection
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Streak » Sat May 09, 2015 11:43 pm

omg it just always gets better :clap: I am just loving this! You hit the nail on the head with Silver's personality! :thumbup:
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Sun May 10, 2015 1:22 am

XD This is good! Can't wait for the next one even though I just read the newest one!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

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best diary ever!

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