End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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What did you think of the end of this book?

... Oh. My. Gosh. OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
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WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!
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Oohhh... this just got very interesting.
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THE CLIFF-HANGERS! I LOVE THEM!
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All of the above
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I didn't like it and thought it was stupid. This whole book series is stupid, actually. HATER ALL THE WAY!!
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Total votes : 15

Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Fri Jan 25, 2013 5:39 am

Woo hoo! Awesome new entry!!
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Postby TPDebate » Fri Jan 25, 2013 9:30 am

yay! new entry! I like the puppy.
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Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Fri Jan 25, 2013 11:41 am

J.F. WE NEEDZ MOREZ! WE WILL STARVE TO DEATH! D: I KNOW I HAVE MY OWN STORY AND MY OWN STALKERS BUT THAT DOES NOT CHANGE HOW WE NEEDZ MOREZ. ARGHARGHARGHARGHT!!
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 25, 2013 11:49 am

lol, sorry guys! No new entry! My sister is bugging me to get off. -.- That, and I only have 2 weeks to read my Library books (I used to have 5) and I have very big books and I gotta get reading! Sorry guys! Oh, and BTW, the next entry should be the last one of this book (since this book is getting pretty long...).

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Fri Jan 25, 2013 11:50 am

Ok ;3;
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:08 pm

ARGH. USE MORE IDEA APPLES. WANT ME TO PICK SOME? D:<
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 25, 2013 1:47 pm

No, but thank you BD! I've got plenty of ideas, but not the time. My life is super busy and hectic at the moment. My grandpa fell and had 3 brain bleeds (I think), but luckily the bleeding's stopped now. But he can't remember a lot of stuff. Like, he doesn't know who my grandma is and he frequently just mumbles stuff that nobody can understand. My dad's gonna fly over to where he is (he lives in a different state) on Saturday pretty early in the morning. That and my book is still messed up and isn't working (but at least I have 6 months to publish it unlike last time when I only had like 3 days). And I have 2 movies I have to watch before Friday. And tomorrow I have piano lessons. And I have a few Library books to read. And I have homework too. Not to mention that I barely get to go on the computer because my sister is always on it "doing homework" (I think she's actually playing on it and just making an excuse to go on longer, but hey, that's just me).
Anyway, sorry for boring you guys with my business. Will try and write more once I've got the time. Right now I've gotta go watch a movie. And eat a doughnut (if we had any, that is. I'm suddenly in the mood for pizza....).

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby .Fish. » Fri Jan 25, 2013 2:19 pm

Ok JF PIZZA IS AWESOME. I understand life comes first *Awesome music plays in the backround*
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Jan 26, 2013 8:02 am

Rockfire wrote:Ok JF PIZZA IS AWESOME. I understand life comes first *Awesome music plays in the backround*

lol, yes it is!!

Guess what? More time, since this book is getting pretty long...















Shh, it's okay. You're okay. Just breathe slowly and don't say anything.
My eyes opened and I stared into the eyes of the little puppy. I stared up at her groggily.
Wha happen?
Shh! Stay quiet! You don't want them to find you!
Who?
Sush!
Did you just say Sushi?
Shut up!
Well fine, then.
Seriously, do you want them to hear you?
Why? Would that be a good thing?
... NO!
Hey, you just shouted. You said to be quiet.
I looked around at where I was. It looked like I was in a house. Probably her house.
I can be loud, you idiot, but you can't! They've already heard me before! I'm already a goner! But as for you, you're new! Now shut up unless you wanna become like most of the dogs in this town!
What happened to them?
The house suddenly shook violently, making a few vases and other breakable stuff fall over and shatter into millions of little pieces.
Um... that was just a regular earthquake, right?
You wish. I told you to stay quiet, but you didn't listen. And now there's nothing I can do to help you.
What do you mean?
Sorry, but you're on your own.
And with that, the little puppy ran over to a little door (that only a puppy could fit through), swung it open, went through it, and then shut it behind her, leaving me alone in the house. I got to my feet dizzily and ran to the door. I jiggled the knob to it, but it was locked. The house shook again, more violently then the last time, and even the chairs in the house fell over. There was a low growl. I swallowed and looked around. What was going on?
The side of the house was suddenly ripped off and I was blown back by the sudden gust of wind. I rammed against the side of the house that was still attached, knocking the wind out of me. I wheezed and got to my feet, wind blowing against me and pinning me against the wall. There was a loud growl again, making a shiver go down my spine.
And then it appeared. It was at least 70 feet tall. It smelled really bad, too.
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It saw me and it's glowing yellow eyes turned a dark, blood red. It roared and my feet suddenly started moving... straight toward it.
Woah! What the heck?! Feet, I command you to stop!
But I wouldn't stop walking toward it. The beast grinned evilly and reached it's large paw toward me. I tried to run away from it, but I only ran to it. The beast grabbed me and lifted me up into the air. It started clenching it's fists and squeezing me. Just as it was about to crush me in the palm of it's hand, I heard a whizzing noise and then the scream of the beast. It dropped me and I started falling to the ground. I looked up and saw that an arrow was planted in the beast's paw. An arrow...
The ground came fast and quick. Just as I was about to crash into it, something wrapped around my legs. I stopped abruptly from falling, hanging there right above the ground. I was suddenly flung backward and back into the air, then down the ground again. I almost hit the ground again, but stopped just before, then flung backward again. This repeated multiple times. I finally stopped and was able to look around. A vine was wrapped around my legs.
I'm safe!
The beast growled a huge, angry growl.
Never mind! I'm not safe!
The beast started to come toward me. It reached out and- an arrow flew through the air and into the beast's eye. It screamed in pain and put it's paw to it's eye. Another arrow flew through the air and hit it's other eye. The beast screamed again, both paws against it's eyes. And then one last arrow flew through the sky and hit the beast dead in the chest. The beast moaned and collapsed to the ground. The wind immediately stopped blowing and everything went calm. I looked over to see if my suspicions on who had fire those arrows was correct. It was.
Ariadne?
The one and only.
But I thought that you had left me!
Please, I never abandon anyone. Unless they're evil. Wait, you're not evil, are you?
No. I don't think so...
Good. 'Cause if you are, you'll get it.
Nope! I'm not evil!
Good.
Ariadne started to turn away.
Wait, where are you going?
Um... back to the woods?
But I need you, Jenette!
I told you, I'm not this Jenette!
But I know you're Jenette! You have her voice!
I don't know what you're-
She suddenly screamed and crashed to the ground.
Jenette!
I ran to her and knelt beside her.
Jenette! What's going on?!
She screamed and tossed and turned. She suddenly froze, her eyes large and unblinking.
J-J-J-Jenette?
There was a bright flash and she suddenly transformed.
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Jenette?
She didn't stir.
Jenette?
I shook her a little bit. She suddenly grabbed my arm, eyes large. She breathed heavily and looked like she had trouble swallowing.
Jenette?
I was whispering. She looked so... scared. Something I had never seen her look like before.
W-W-Who are you?
I'm... I'm Amy.
She had a confused look on her face.
Who's Amy?















That's the end of book 4!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Sat Jan 26, 2013 9:01 am

OMW SO AMAZING!!!!
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he/him ;; adult ;; infp/infj ;; libra ;; queer
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i'm sort of a cs vet, working on my own novels now.
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