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by van » Fri Oct 15, 2010 3:56 am
~Sakorian Rage~ wrote:I looked up some scary stories, and here's one:
The Choking Doberman
My cousin and his wife lived in Sydney with this huge doberman in a little apartment off Maroubra Road. One night they went out for dinner and a spot of clubbing. By the time they got home it was late and my cousin was more than a little drunk. They got in the door and were greeted by the dog choking to death in the loungeroom.
My cousin just fainted, but his wife rang the veterinarian, who was an old family friend of hers, and got her to agree to meet her at the surgery. The wife drives over and drops off the dog, but decides that she'd better go home and get her hubby into bed.
She gets home and finally slaps my cousin into consciousness, but he's still drunk. It takes her almost half an hour to get him up the stairs, and then the phone rings. She's tempted to just leave it, but she decides that it must be important or they wouldn't be ringing that late at night. As soon as she picks up the phone, she hears the vet's voice screaming out:
"Thank God I got you in time! Leave the house! Now! No time to explain!" Then the vet hangs up.
Because she's such an old family friend, the wife trusts her, and so she starts getting the hubby down the stairs and out of the house. By the time they've made it all the way out, the police are outside. They rush up the front stairs past the couple and into the house, but my cousin's wife still doesn't have a clue what's going on.
The vet shows up and says, "Have they got him? Have they got him?"
"Have they got who?" says the wife, starting to get really pissed off.
"Well, I found out what the dog was choking on – it was a human finger."
Just then the police drag out a dirty, stubbly man who is bleeding profusely from one hand. "Hey Sarge," one of them yells. "We found him in the bedroom."
that was.. weird... scary, i guess... but it was still very weird.. O__O
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by Kiamsc » Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:35 am
Upon your bed you sleep in pain
for nightmares whirl within you brain.
You waken with a fearful start
as horror grips your heart.
You sense a presence standing there,
then all at once it meets your stare.
An presense waits within your room
and with it dwells your doom...
scary HUH i found this written on my mirror in blood one day when i woke up the night before i saw that i was pretending to summon bloody mary the creepiest thing is i think i saw her face she was mad really creepy huh i wonder whos blood it was
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by Kiamsc » Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:06 am
a creepy thing is that the words were written in a blood like liquid i dunno if it was blood though the creepiest thing about my last post is my great grandma who is about 102 said that when her great grandma was a little girl her grandma would tell her about the village she grew up in and she said that they had an herbal remedie woman named marie who they burned at the stake for being a witch scary REAL SCARY huh
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by Kiamsc » Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:34 am
i know theres a whole bunch of different versions theres the green ribbon from germany like i told then theres the red ribbon and the blue ribbon all types of different versions just with different characters
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by Kiamsc » Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:40 am
all my posts are fake stories but my dad really did tell me that story about the green ribbon and my great grandma really is 102 or something like that and told me about her ancestors
P.S. i know theres an edit button i can read im not stupid

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by Nekox » Mon Oct 18, 2010 10:43 am
theres an edit button...
*facepalm*
i just heard a scary story but now i forget it!
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
Neon Trees; Animal
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