Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Who's Your Favorite Character?

Amy
31
23%
Jenette
37
28%
Indah
5
4%
Rhubarb
5
4%
Misty
25
19%
Flower
12
9%
The Indians
3
2%
Suzi
10
8%
Mom
2
2%
Brent
2
2%
 
Total votes : 132

Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby Zookrates » Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:35 am

Perfect ending *Woot Woot* !!
cant wait for book 4 <3<3
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Postby Remaskis » Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:31 pm

I just spent the past 3 hours reading. xD At first I thought it was going to be exactly like all the rest of the pet diary journal things, but you competly twisted it around and made it epicsauce apple fladoodle derpacorn awsomeyness... Is that a word?
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:01 am

Maplex wrote:I just spent the past 3 hours reading. xD At first I thought it was going to be exactly like all the rest of the pet diary journal things, but you competly twisted it around and made it epicsauce apple fladoodle derpacorn awsomeyness... Is that a word?

Thank you so much! I didn't really like Diary Of A Wimpy Kid because it was just.... boringish. It only really talked about school, and so I was like "Hmm.... I want to write a diary, but nothing like that kind of diary." and so I decided to add twists and adventure, and not make it all about school and problems in school. I still made Amy sort of wimpy and highly scared, but I tried not to make it seem like all she did was scary, or else I think that would be boring. And I like the words you made up, they're awsomeyness! XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby brambletalon98 » Sat Oct 29, 2011 10:04 pm

OH NOEZ.

why did it have to end with so much suspensy suspense?

*head-desk*

I guess i need to wait for The Big City... and Bob.

LOL. I could just imagine Suzi becoming a little puppy. XDD CX
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Postby *Blackberry* » Sun Oct 30, 2011 2:43 am

I pretty like the bunny, but maybe you could make the colour of the talking abit darker?? I can hardly read it. But I don't think ghosts can turn back to life..... I know this is just a story but how can Amy write when she was capture? Like in Prison or Jail, and you kind of keep skipping parts in the story and I got so confused and the Big snake picture you showed everyone, I can't see the picture, they said it have error. But GOOD LUCK for your next book, I think is should have Brent, I mean Leo returns back?
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 30, 2011 8:33 am

Claw of the Ages wrote:OH NOEZ.

why did it have to end with so much suspensy suspense?

*head-desk*

I guess i need to wait for The Big City... and Bob.

LOL. I could just imagine Suzi becoming a little puppy. XDD CX
what happened to the shiny lightning thundering thing?

Because I likeh the suspense.... XD

And yes, you do have to wait because my brain is STILL practically fried, and I need to get more ideas. Somebody actually gave me the whole idea for the adventures in the big city, and then they gave me some evilness that you will have to wait and see about... mwahahahahahahahaha!!!!!

Ya, I imagined her all cute and fluffy and very small! XD

Shiny lighting thundering thing? What is that? (Sorry if I sound really idiotic.)

*Blackberry* wrote:I pretty like the bunny, but maybe you could make the colour of the talking abit darker?? I can hardly read it. But I don't think ghosts can turn back to life..... I know this is just a story but how can Amy write when she was capture? Like in Prison or Jail, and you kind of keep skipping parts in the story and I got so confused and the Big snake picture you showed everyone, I can't see the picture, they said it have error. But GOOD LUCK for your next book, I think is should have Brent, I mean Leo returns back?

Ya, I know, but I was running out of colors so I picked that. You can highlight it with your mouse, I think, and read it better. I just put the ghost in the book, and I had to end it so I put it ghosts. And she doesn't write in the diary about what's happening at that EXACT MOMENT, she writes later on about what happened. So let's say she fought Suzi. An hour later when she can get to her journal she writes down what happens. Make sense? I know, you probably all thought that she wrote what was happening at that exact moment, and sorry for not explaining earlier.
There was an error with the picture? I'll have to look at it. Where you talking about Auraura the snake? And the times that I usually rush is because I either have to do school, or we have to go someplace and I have to hurry, causing the rushing. And that's a good idea... I might have to use that! :D

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Do Not Read Any Further - Third Book In The TIAJNAD Seri

Postby Lunala » Sun Oct 30, 2011 10:43 am

I cannot wait for the next one!!
Oh, and I saw you and Zookrates talking about your "Last edited..." thinger, and I just figured it out, lol. I really thought CS had a glitch. O.o
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 30, 2011 11:36 am

Doglover141 wrote:I cannot wait for the next one!!
Oh, and I saw you and Zookrates talking about your "Last edited..." thinger, and I just figured it out, lol. I really thought CS had a glitch. O.o

lol!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Oct 31, 2011 9:58 am

I STARTED WRITING THE 4TH BOOK: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=851701

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Zookrates » Mon Oct 31, 2011 5:25 pm

Reading :3
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