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Kodiak and Ellise
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Kodiak and Nymeria
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15%
Alexa and Ellise
1
3%
Ellise and Laurel
3
9%
Other - Post who it is
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Re: Kodiak

Postby SilentGrace » Thu May 10, 2012 3:09 pm

IFREAKN LOVE IT LIKE SO FREAKN MUCH!!! just saying.
Lol u need to get this published when you finish. And then you'll have to autograph my copy (^∇^)
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Re: Kodiak

Postby SilentGrace » Sat May 12, 2012 12:19 pm

please please please write more
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Tue May 15, 2012 9:59 am

“Do you want to tell me what happened?” Kodiak asked me quietly and gently. I looked over at him to find him watching me, his gaze questioning but surprisingly not hurt. Yet.
“I think I have to,” I murmured back. “For my sake and yours.” He smiled at me and then squeezed my hand as encouragement. “Well, Gwillan hugged me, asked me how life in Hicktown City was without them and then, when he saw the look you were giving us-” I smiled a little bit at the memory, “-he told me that you should know by now that you don’t have anything to worry about.”
“Which clearly isn’t true,” Kodiak butted in, then shut up immediately when he saw my expression.
“Then he told me that he debated asking me out when I was in eighth grade and he was a junior since he thought I was really pretty but then said that Meghan was the only one he’d date now-”
“Which is complete and utter [censored],” Kodiak finished for me. He had let go of my hand by now and his own were balled into fists; I could tell that he was trying to restrain himself from going back and giving Gruffen another black eye.
“Yeah,” I agreed, wanting to continue my story and get it all out and done with. “Well, then he asked how you and I got together and I told him what actually happened: that we met in Study Hall and it was kind of love at first sight.” I paused, not knowing exactly how to word what happened next.
Kodiak saw the trepidation on my face and asked, “And then what did he say?”
I looked at him uncertainly, not knowing whether I should tell him or not. “And then he said…” I began, then swallowed and continued, “that it better have been love at first sight for you too.”
“Oh.” Kodiak turned away from me now and I literally could feel the anger coming off of him.
“Do you want me to continue?” I questioned quietly.
“Yeah,” he replied just as softly when he turned back towards me.
“Well, then Gruffen said that he didn’t trust you and that he didn’t want me to get hurt. I think it was then that he started to hold my hand-” I looked over, alarmed, to see Kodiak gritting his teeth so hard that he wasn’t going to have any if he kept it up; I wasn’t even at the worst part yet. Regaining my composure, I continued, “Then I told him that I wasn’t the stupid mortal he thought I was and that I could make my own decisions, and then he told me that it wasn’t about him trusting me, it was about him ‘knowing what you can do and knowing that you can very easily bend my mind and make me do whatever you want me to,’ and I quote,” I ended. We sat in uneasy silence as we both processed what Gruffen had said.
Finally Kodiak muttered again, “Bullcrap.” He then looked back over at me and told me, “I would never mess with your mind.”
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Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Tue May 15, 2012 1:59 pm

Bump!
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby SilentGrace » Tue May 15, 2012 3:54 pm

Yay I love it and crave more. 0.0 plez write more /./ please!
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Wed May 16, 2012 2:08 am

More added, and if you like the Hunger Games you should check out my new story Triple Crown :)

“I know,” I answered, smiling a wan smile that didn’t seem to fit in with the seriousness of our conversation. I then saw the look he was giving me, cleared my throat, and began to talk again. “Then he said that you could make me your puppet within a second and that he was afraid of you doing just that.” The next sentence stuck in my throat, even though I knew I had to say it for both of our sakes. “Then…” I licked my lips, forcing myself to utter the words. “Then… he said that he was afraid of losing me, and he was really close to me by now, so he just leaned forward and kissed me on the forehead and said, ‘Ellise, I love you.’” I looked down to see Kodiak clenching his fists so hard that his knuckles were blanched white and then looked up to see his jaw clenched as hard as his fists.
“Well,” he finally replied after a while, “this changes this. This changes things a lot.” He shook his head, disappointment and maybe even disgust spreading across his face.
“What do you mean?” I asked him, completely confused as to what he was implying.
“Well, we have to work to with him on the government takedown thing, and that’s going to be a lot harder to do now that he apparently is in love with you.” Kodiak practically spat the last four words, his lip twisting into an even bigger grimace, if that was possible.
“Oh,” I responded lamely, having nothing better to say because I really didn’t know what to say since that thought had never occurred to me until then.
“Yeah.” He shook his head again, his expression now less disgusted and more annoyed instead.
“So what are we going to do then? We can’t just give up on the government takedown thing since we’re all screwed if we do, so we have to do something about this. I mean, we can’t not work with him, as much as I want to do just that,” I murmured, thinking aloud.
“Well, I guess we’ll just have to put up with Gruffen for six months,” Kodiak muttered, his expression as grim as a funeral. “Doesn’t that sound like fun?”
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Note for mods: Llover is my friend in real life that uses my computers.
Currently trading Growing White July, Nonballoon, Sunjewel Bun and various Advents
Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Lizzy<3 » Wed May 16, 2012 6:12 am

MORE!!!! lol its so good
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Wed May 16, 2012 12:41 pm

More added. :)

I knew that I had to avoid Gruffen as much as possible, to avoid giving him the other half of his pair of black eyes, but that was rather hard to do, since I would have to directly work with him almost once every day. This next six months were going to be the worst days of my life, and that was before what had happened between Ellise and Gruffen.

“So what’s phase one of our break-in plan?” I asked Lizzie, my eyes glued to the map and, most importantly, glued away from Gruffen.
“Well, the front entrance is here,” she pointed to an x on the map, “so obviously we’re not going to go in there since that would be, well, obvious.” She looked up at me, her gaze skirting over to Gruffen for a millisecond, and I was reminded yet again that Lizzie really never did miss anything. “I suggest that we go through back secret entrance,” she gestured to another x on the map, “since it technically doesn’t exist and therefore, even though it will be harder to get through to begin with, will put us in a lot better position to begin our assault on the building.”
Ellise, who up until then had been silent, suddenly asked, “So why exactly are we doing this? I mean, it’s not even a major government building, so I don’t see why it would have that much of an effect.” Even without looking at Gruffen, I could tell that his eyes were glued to her face and that he was hanging onto, trying to immerse himself in, every word that she said… just like I was.
“Well, we don’t have the resources to attack a big government building like the FBI headquarters in Quantico, so we have to do what we can,” Lizzie replied, looking positively ashamed to admit that four people couldn’t take down the headquarters of one of the most powerful operations in the world. “Besides, if we weaken them now while we can, it will be easier when we actually do have to take out Quantico.”
“Ok.” Ellise still didn’t seem completely convinced, but she probably knew that, as long as she didn’t have to do the fighting, she would be okay. She looked over at me and shrugged, her expression still utterly perplexed, which made me grin back at her. Ellise smiled as well, but the smirk immediately slid off of her face as she saw Gruffen’s expression. It was then that I snapped.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Lizzy<3 » Wed May 16, 2012 3:56 pm

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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sisukalat » Thu May 17, 2012 12:33 pm

Gah!! I need to read more!! <3
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