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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby Tsar » Sat Aug 15, 2015 9:15 am

Help. Me.

Right now it's like I have four parts of me...one fourth is telling me I need to finish uploading the rest of my first book on the computer, one fourth is telling me I need to go find a publisher, one fourth is like "You need to go practice those lessons before school starts again and you don't have time" and the last fourth is like "Why don't you just screw all of the other stuff and do nothing". Which part do I listen to?? Somebody decide for me before I exhaust myself! :?: :!:
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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby Vakarian » Sat Aug 15, 2015 10:32 am

      hello everyone :D new lazy writer incoming.
      lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
      ANYWAYS
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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby aurora. » Sat Aug 15, 2015 12:09 pm

      halfway through chapter one of 'voice' for anyone who as interested in reading it. i should have the chapter up by tomorrow morning cx
      just a female student with an addiction to iced coffee,
      and little to no time on her hands.
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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby Petlover552 » Sat Aug 15, 2015 12:16 pm

YEEEY!
I can't wait to read a master authors book cx
Maybe it'll inspire meh <3
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Postby noal » Sat Aug 15, 2015 1:51 pm

-Vakarian-
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Postby watermelon. » Sat Aug 15, 2015 1:56 pm

merliotfedora wrote:
-Vakarian-
welcome!

also my wattpad is merliotfedora


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Postby noal » Sat Aug 15, 2015 2:08 pm

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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby Karma. » Sun Aug 16, 2015 2:45 am

Vakarian wrote:
      hello everyone :D new lazy writer incoming.
      lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
      ANYWAYS


    Welcome!
    I can't pm you right now as my kindle despises chicken smoothie, but expect one from me in the near future. As a fantasy writer myself, I'd love to help!
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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby watermelon. » Sun Aug 16, 2015 2:53 am

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Re: the lazy writers ● welcome!

Postby Petlover552 » Sun Aug 16, 2015 4:27 am

You are one lucky Melon!!!
What kind of laptop?
Happy birthday!!
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