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by Tsar » Sat Aug 15, 2015 9:15 am
Help. Me.
Right now it's like I have four parts of me...one fourth is telling me I need to finish uploading the rest of my first book on the computer, one fourth is telling me I need to go find a publisher, one fourth is like "You need to go practice those lessons before school starts again and you don't have time" and the last fourth is like "Why don't you just screw all of the other stuff and do nothing". Which part do I listen to?? Somebody decide for me before I exhaust myself!

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by Vakarian » Sat Aug 15, 2015 10:32 am
hello everyone :D new lazy writer incoming.
lately i've been working a lot on worldbuilding and stuff like that for a new story i've been planning out. so far i've been focusing on a collection of different short stories regarding the relationship between the two main characters (and i'm actually pretty proud of myself because i've been getting everything done on a deadline, which is pretty much unheard of for me when it comes to writing :b). would anyone be willing to read over and critique a small snippet (just a few paragraphs) of one of these short stories for me?? i just wanna get some feedback regarding the characters themselves and how i could make them/their relationship seem more dynamic. its based in a fantasy-ish world, but the from the excerpt i want critiqued you probably wouldn't be able to tell (except the mention of elves whoooops). i can give some more background info to anyone that may be interested; if you are, please PM me, i'd be eternally grateful<333
ANYWAYS
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by Petlover552 » Sat Aug 15, 2015 12:16 pm
YEEEY!
I can't wait to read a master authors book cx
Maybe it'll inspire meh <3
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by Petlover552 » Sun Aug 16, 2015 4:27 am
You are one lucky Melon!!!
What kind of laptop?
Happy birthday!!
xxxxxxHi, I'm Amber ♡ I have a long list of stuff I am addicted to... but I will make
it short and sweet, cuz I don't think you wanna be here all day cx
I love all animals, Spirit, Marvel shows and movies (Iron Fist, Civil War, Captain America, Ant-Man, Spider-Man), DC tv shows (Arrow, Supergirl, DC Legends of Tomorrow), and writing c:
Do you like to write? Come on over to Writer's Haven Forum!
I would love to get to know you and read your writing c:
↓ Adventurous Fiction Novel ↓
♡ The Fire Stone ♡
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