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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Cashcash » Thu May 20, 2010 12:05 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Cashcash
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=4499416&sid=486273bfef6c2d50c9a0ceefcb2bb611&sid=486273bfef6c2d50c9a0ceefcb2bb611#p4499416
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Geonnac
Deadline for your form: Saturday
Please pm me the critique ^^

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I'm quitting for a while, And giving all my pets to my friend .:dragonfly:. I will be going on her account some times so if you need to contact me send her a pm so she can tell me. Bye bye CS.
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Ebonpyre » Fri May 21, 2010 8:40 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Azora
Link to your form: Right here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: ~Goennec~
Deadline for your form: Saturday afternoon
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine.

And will edit this with another critique in a minute


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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby ! october » Fri May 21, 2010 9:01 am

I'll critique the Goennec forms. :3
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Cirque » Sun May 23, 2010 10:37 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Cirque
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&start=3060#p4499858
Adoption Agency you are applying for: ~Goennec~ viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117
Deadline for your form: It just ended, but I want some critique anyways
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Both
Vienne, one of the other goennecs in my story, is a goddess and it may be a bit confusing if you don't know her story.
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Steffi. » Sun May 23, 2010 11:53 am

Bookmark!! I would like to use this later...
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Lizbutt » Sun May 23, 2010 11:57 am


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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Spockylass » Fri May 28, 2010 2:22 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: Spockylass
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=3790#p4624939
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: May 30th forum time
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Steffi. » Fri May 28, 2010 10:37 am

I would like some critique please!
Username: SteffiDaBeagle
Link to your form: Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: I'm in a competition at the Stables.
Deadline for your form: June 1st
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? By PM

It's not done yet, but I'd like an opinion. C:
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Fri May 28, 2010 10:47 am

I feel stupid by saying this, but what is a critique?
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Re: The Critique Cafe, for all your critiquing needs

Postby Papyrsatyr » Fri May 28, 2010 10:52 am

Draggy Ave wrote:I feel stupid by saying this, but what is a critique?


It's basically when you say things to somebody to help improve upon themselves. Like you give them pointers about what they could make better.
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