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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Fri May 01, 2015 1:10 am

20lait1 wrote:Wow... People are dying for the next post.... Well here it is! And of course... *grabs a shovel* Let's start digging out Night, Aqua and Cinnamon... And Cinnamon can't be buried... MORE CHERRIES! If she's down there *points at ground* then what will the Cherry be?

Aquadoglover wrote:What are you saying? :/ Strange person XD

Yeah, I am strange. And I'm proud to be the 'odd one out'. ;)

Okay, everyone - what do you think? Should Skyfoot (Skyler: It's Skyler!) follow Russetstar, or stay safe and stay at camp?


First - Tell me what you mean by.. ' If she's down there *points at ground* then what will the Cherry be? '

Second - Follow RussetStar! He could be asking about SkyFoot to Starclan... SkyFoot may become the leader and convince the clan to help her :D Ey? Have I given you ideas

If I'm ever a warrior cat, I wanna be Grasskit or Cherrykit or Cinnamonkit.

Then as a warrior, CherryRiver, GrassGorse or CinnamonBark

I mean.. You gotta love the Cherries. ~ Cinnamon


:/ I'd rather be AquaLeaf, but who cares .3.[/quote]

I was really excited, and had no idea what to say.... Okay, myself - no overreacting *takes a deep breath* I meant that if Cinnamon was, erm, dead, then how is she supposed to write the Cherry?
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby retroaqua » Fri May 01, 2015 5:31 am

20lait1 wrote:
20lait1 wrote:Wow... People are dying for the next post.... Well here it is! And of course... *grabs a shovel* Let's start digging out Night, Aqua and Cinnamon... And Cinnamon can't be buried... MORE CHERRIES! If she's down there *points at ground* then what will the Cherry be?


What are you saying? :/ Strange person XD

Yeah, I am strange. And I'm proud to be the 'odd one out'. ;)

Okay, everyone - what do you think? Should Skyfoot (Skyler: It's Skyler!) follow Russetstar, or stay safe and stay at camp?


First - Tell me what you mean by.. ' If she's down there *points at ground* then what will the Cherry be? '

Second - Follow RussetStar! He could be asking about SkyFoot to Starclan... SkyFoot may become the leader and convince the clan to help her :D Ey? Have I given you ideas

If I'm ever a warrior cat, I wanna be Grasskit or Cherrykit or Cinnamonkit.

Then as a warrior, CherryRiver, GrassGorse or CinnamonBark

I mean.. You gotta love the Cherries. ~ Cinnamon


:/ I'd rather be AquaLeaf, but who cares .3.

I was really excited, and had no idea what to say.... Okay, myself - no overreacting *takes a deep breath* I meant that if Cinnamon was, erm, dead, then how is she supposed to write the Cherry?[/quote]

.3. Well..

Do you fangirl the cherry?
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby LostFoxInTheStorm » Sat May 02, 2015 8:26 pm

Okay... A new post needs to be soon.... Please? I love this series :D
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Toy Dragon » Sat May 02, 2015 8:38 pm

Well...I have started reading Warriors and Survivors. I am craving 'em too much. I'm not reading them in order though...*Sigh*
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby prixie » Sun May 03, 2015 3:39 am

this diary is so amazing c:
You even inspired me to make my own, but I've slowly lazed out of it because I'm far too busy re-reading this o3o
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun May 03, 2015 3:38 pm

PIRACY wrote:
this diary is so amazing c:
You even inspired me to make my own, but I've slowly lazed out of it because I'm far too busy re-reading this o3o


Wow... Is this thing good enough to reread? You should continue with your diary - I read it and it's awesome! Don't stop!

(I'm going to start the collab with DWD after this entry.)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby star star. » Sun May 03, 2015 3:57 pm

    this is actually alright.
    good job ^^





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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Sun May 03, 2015 6:12 pm

I really love the hawk, can't wait until the next entry ^,^
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun May 03, 2015 8:04 pm

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Dear Hawk....

Well, then, I'm going find a way to follow Russetstar with him not noticing... I'll write down what happened later - hopefully it's not something that's too dangerous....

YES I'M BACK TO - Oh, wait - let me start from the beginning.... and yes, things have got MUCH more dangerous.


Me: *watches Russetstar pad out the entrance* Okay, got it. *sneaks to the dirtplace and pushes myself through the secret entrance*
Russetstar: *looks around, then crouches down and starts quietly stalking*
Me: .....
Russetstar: *pushes through some bushes* When will these thorns stop snagging at my fur?
Me: *watches for a moment, then follows*
Russetstar: *stands up and pads along quietly* Humph. She's still not dead... But this won't fail - I'm sure of it.
Me: :o Who?
Russetstar: *looks back* Did I hear something?
Me: :? No you did not hear anything - I'm invisible, you can't see me....
Russetstar: It must have been a sparrow. *turns around and continues walking*
Me: Phew. *follows him silently*
Russetstar: *ears perk up, then he walks down a... tunnel?*
Me: :o I never saw that before.... *freaks out follows him*
???: Are you there?
Russetstar: You're here... early. At least... Now, how come she isn't dead?
???: I tried! But I can't just kill her in front of every cat! It's not fair that you get to be leader and I am just a mere kitten -
Russetstar: With a job that must succeed. Now, Darkpaw -
?Darkpaw?: I hate that name! I rather be called Soul -
Russetstar: Silence! I'm your leader and you must be called Darkpaw - she'll know!
Darkpaw: But Shadow -
Russetstar: I repeat - silence. You cannot fail this plan, Darkpaw - she is one of the chosen ones!
Darkpaw: But -
Russetstar: This plan cannot fail, Darkpaw. You must do this - Queen Bitewing orders so. Will you disobey the queen? *glares at Darkpaw*
Darkpaw: .... No....
Russetstar: Good, then. Well, here is the plan - I'll order for that measly 'chosen one' to bring you out hunting - and since, with my red fur, I look like a fox - but it won't matter, anyways. She'll be dead, so she can't squeal it out to those measly cats - it's surprising how that one of those 'chosen ones' is a cat. Catty, was it? Humph.
Darkpaw: It was Cassie...
Russetstar: Silence! Now, you have to lead her here..... *starts scratching at the ground with a long claw*
Darkpaw: .... I see.... Shadowheart.
Russetstar: I must keep my disguise, you useless cat. You must call me Russetstar... Until we return, Darkpaw.
Darkpaw: But I'm Soulstealer! I want to -
Russetstar: Silence. Get back to your measly den before anyone notices. Go!
Darkpaw: ..... Yes, Russetstar. *flees*
Me: *pulls head back and slides into a bush* What.... just happened?
Darkpaw: *darts out* Yes....
Russetstar: *pads out* Humph. Useless cat.



Well, then, that was what happened last night.... Nobody noticed, though. At least.... Here are their pictures...

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I'm lucky I survived... I was ready for what happened in the morning, though.


Russetstar: Okay, now - I want Skyfoot to bring Darkpaw out on a hunting assessment.
Pebblepaw: But how about me! I'm his brother -
Russetstar: :evil: You're not ready yet - Darkpaw has great potential.
Me: Yeah, right. Potential to be a criminal.
Russetstar: Skyfoot and Darkpaw, you may leave now.
Darkpaw: *hurries over to me* Well, then... Let's go.
Me: I lead the way. I'm your mentor.
Darkpaw: ..... I... Pebblepaw told me there was a good place for hunting, and showed me...
Me: I choose to go somewhere else -
Russetstar: *leaps down from rock* Why haven't you left yet? *turns to Darkpaw* Well, then. Skyfoot, take him to the Moonpool.
Me: I thought we were going to hunt -
Russetstar: Leader's word is the code, Skyfoot. Are you going to do what I asked for?
Me: .... Yes.
Russetstar: Good. I'd hate to have disloyal warriors in my Clan. Leave - now.
Darkpaw: *bounds along* Let's go!
Me: ..... Now what? *follows*

After one million miles a while of walking, we reached the Moonpool. Darkpaw had bounded ahead... And I was freaking out ready for what would happen. I heard pawsteps.... And I pretended to look around for Darkpaw, calling "Darkpaw! Where are you!" and suddenly a real FOX jumped out from the bushes.

Me: Fox?! *starts clawing it's nose*
Fox: *growls and continues attacking*
Russetstar: *leaps out of the bushes* Fox?! SOUL - I MEAN DARKPAW, WHAT DID YOU DO?! WHERE ARE YOU?!
Me: *screams like a girly girl* AHHH!! SHADOWHEART'S COMING TO KILL ME!!!! *attempts to flee*
Fox: *bites my tail*
Russetstar: Die, you Heaven Clan scum! DIE!!!!
Me: AHHHH!!!! *waves tail around*
Fox: *growls and lets go, sending me flying*
Me: AHHHHHH!!!!!
Russetstar: HOW DARE YOU, FOX, FOR RELEASING MY PREY! DARKPAW - GET THE FOX!
Darkpaw: ..... Sorry, Shadowheart... I don't work for the Heaven Clan, but I can't stand you bossing me around anymore. *runs after me*
Me: *starts to run* AHHHHHHH!!!!

Suddenly, I tripped and fell right in front of the entrance - I felt Darkpaw Soulstealer's claws on my tail....

Soulstealer: NO, YOU CAN'T! *grips my tail*
Shadowheart: *leaps from the bushes* How dare you, Soulstealer! The fox is gone - but I won't stay as a cat! *grips Soulstealer's tail*
Me: AHHHHHH! *starts kicking and holds on to the ground with my claws*
Shadowheart: I.... will NEVER stay as a useless cat!
Me: AHHHHH! *turns around and spits in Soul's face* TAKE THAT!
Soul: MY BEAUTIFUL EYES! *lets go*
Shadow: NOOOOOO!!!!!
Me: *gets up and runs towards the Moonpool*
Soul: MY EYES!
Me: *trips again and falls towards the Moonpool (it's a pool of water - did I mention that?)*
Shadow: *steps on Soul and runs towards me* COME BACK HERE -
Me: *falls in*

I felt Shadow, who had Soul gripping on to his tail, nearly fall in.... and they fell in. The water turned dark and murky around them, but the water turned brighter as I fell deeper.... I thought I was going to drown.... Then, by instinct, I raised my paws and swished them towards the ground. I thought it wouldn't work, since I was a cat.... But suddenly I flew right up, into the air..... and my head felt light.... and suddenly I was standing at Barktree. Everyone was chatting, walking... And those two mangepelts Hell Clan creatures were gone. Then, the most amazing thing happened... My IPaw rang.



Me: What? *takes out IPaw* Hey - wait - I'VE GOT MY IPAW AGAIN! AND I'M NOT A CAT! YES!

I received lots of stares... But anyways, I found out I got a message... From someone I didn't know.


9928: I was worried about you, Skyler - I was afraid you didn't make it, but you already have a mission.
Sky223: Who are you? Are you a stalker? Murderer? SHADOWHEART?
9928: ..... We can't have jokes, not now. Go down the secret tunnel and I'll explain there. I'm Angel, by the way - not any of those you mentioned.
Sky223: But - How can the leader of Heaven Clan send chat messages -

9928 has logged off



I was left staring at my screen. I quickly put my IPaw away, glanced up at the clock, then hurried to the bathrooms. There, the blue tunnel opened and I slid in. It was quite creepy going myself.... But anyways, I fell, then floated up to the sky... Like last time. I spread my wings and spotted the robot again.

Robot: Welcome to -
Me: Yeah, yeah. Just take me to Angel.
Robot - HEAVEN CLAN!
Me: Just -
Robot: *gasp* You are the chosen ones! I have to take you -
Me: You said that last time! *facepaw*
Robot: - to Angel!
Me: *double facepaw*

The robot took me to Angel anyways.

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Angel: Ah, Skyler. You must take on a mission -
Me: But how did you send a chat message?
Angel: I am the leader of Heaven Clan. Sending a chat message isn't hard. Now, we have to wait for Music.
Me: Why Music and me? Why not someone else -
Angel: She doesn't know we are here. Send her a message through your... IPaws, as you call them.
Me: Can't you?
Angel: She knows your chat, doesn't she? She may not trust me....
Me: But I didn't!
Angel: She is coming back on a plane... We will have to wait.
Me: But how about lessons?
Angel: I've stopped time.... Here, anyways.
Me: Why time stopping again? *sighs* Fine. *takes out IPaw*


Sky223 has logged on

Sky223: Mission from Angel. Go to secret tunnel when you arrive at school.



Wow... So straightforward. Hmm... Okay, I guess I'll just sit around and wait. Well, then, a lot of adventures... And so many pages. *sigh* Well, then, I wonder what's this mission about.... See you later, Hawk - you're coming along on this 'mission' Angel is going to give me. See you later....
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Streak » Sun May 03, 2015 11:55 pm

Best. Entry. Ever. Left me laughing and gasping in suprise! c:
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