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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:37 pm

xX-AussieLover-Xx wrote:
Cloudy-Wolf wrote:
.:dragonfly:. wrote:Ok, I will post one of mine now ^.^ that was a pretty good one.

New Doll.

A young girl named Molly went was walking down the street with her mother when in the window of a shop a beautiful doll caught her eye. Molly behed her mother to buy her it and of cours. She did. Molly brought home the doll and played with it all day. When night came, Molly left her new doll at the bottom of the stairs before she went up to bed and quickly fell asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the first step"
Molly was alittle frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Third step"
Molly was more frightened but she fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the Sixth step"
Molly was very frightened but she pulled the covers over her head and fell back asleep.

A couple minutes later Molly woke up to the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on the last step"
Molly was shaking with fear she closed her eyes very tight and sat there with the covers over her head.

A couple minutes later Molly hear the sound of a voice.
"Molly I'm on your bed."
Molly looked out from under the cover to see her dolly standing on the edge of the bed.

"Molly I'm going to kill you."

In the morning Molly's mother went in her room to wake her. She discovered the blood smeared bed and outside the window was little Molly hanging dead from the tree. The doll sat on the window sill smiling her evil smile.


Only that scared me. *looks around at stuffed animals and dolls* darn, I'm in trouble. :shock:

Omg looks around my room begs animals not to kill me.. J think I'm in truble

Hahaha.. LOL that was creepy at first sight. but if you go back to the first few pages there's lots of stories like that.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snowleopardyay! » Sat Aug 27, 2011 1:56 pm

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In rural Wisconsin, there is an old abandoned park. Built in the 1920s, it served as the town’s gathering place for everyone.

That is, until a newly developed Train and Tunnel for Tots™ ride was installed in 1932. It was an innocent looking childish train, with one main (mechanized) head car, with three small trolleys pulled behind it. It went around some loops before going into a small tunnel.

But this is where the story gets weird. There were numerous cases of child deaths that year, all of them happening after the child rode on that train system. Some kids went missing in that short tunnel (about ten feet), and others went comatose after leaving. One, upon exiting, was found to be dead. Her dress was covered in what looked like small bloody handprints. Some killed themselves by scratching at their throats until they bled out, and one of them even killed another child before hanging herself with razor wire at the family’s farm.

The park was closed, and the town’s popularity as a tourist town plummeted.

Recently, a team of scientists were sent out to the park. They taped a video camera to the train, and put a new intern in with it, before sending it on its way onto the tracks.

When the train left the tunnel, it was empty, except for the camera.

The last ten seconds were nothing but static, save for the sound of children laughing.


0.0 Woah. That's the scariest story here.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sat Aug 27, 2011 2:00 pm

ok this is a true ghost story that happen to my buddy and yes it is true

It started after her grandmas death she poured down crying and prayed that night for god to let her see her grandmal one last time. The next day she got up got dressed in her dress for her grandmals funeral who is more of a mom to her than her real mom but before than she visited the body (you know what i mean).So she walk over and stood in the back after the preacher talked bout her she poured down crying she ran to a tree in the grave yard and got on her nees she asked again but differently these were her exact words "please god i have been nothing but good my whole life i ask you now on my nees i rather have my grandmal here now then to live another day please god i now its to much to askbut if not that please let me see her". The next night she fell asleep and heard her name "(not real name) april baby girl i love you" she opened her eyes pulling down her blanket off her face and looked up to see a dark figure over her.Her eyes now tearing up all she could say was "thank you god".

so whatcha think???? cause it is true
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Sat Aug 27, 2011 6:51 pm

ilovefreddy wrote:ok this is a true ghost story that happen to my buddy and yes it is true

It started after her grandmas death she poured down crying and prayed that night for god to let her see her grandmal one last time. The next day she got up got dressed in her dress for her grandmals funeral who is more of a mom to her than her real mom but before than she visited the body (you know what i mean).So she walk over and stood in the back after the preacher talked bout her she poured down crying she ran to a tree in the grave yard and got on her nees she asked again but differently these were her exact words "please god i have been nothing but good my whole life i ask you now on my nees i rather have my grandmal here now then to live another day please god i now its to much to askbut if not that please let me see her". The next night she fell asleep and heard her name "(not real name) april baby girl i love you" she opened her eyes pulling down her blanket off her face and looked up to see a dark figure over her.Her eyes now tearing up all she could say was "thank you god".

so whatcha think???? cause it is true


:thumbup: But I hope you wouldn't post the "please god...." there are non-christians on CS..
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Harpy• » Sat Aug 27, 2011 7:12 pm

Raven, what does that matter? It's her story, she can put anything she wants into it ^.^ Whether it be religious or not. And as she stated it was true, we can only assume that she's telling it as it happened. No need to take out god-related things just for nonChristians.(:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:32 am

thank you
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Dakotaisnotonfire » Sun Aug 28, 2011 6:36 am

`Raven wrote:
ilovefreddy wrote:ok this is a true ghost story that happen to my buddy and yes it is true

It started after her grandmas death she poured down crying and prayed that night for god to let her see her grandmal one last time. The next day she got up got dressed in her dress for her grandmals funeral who is more of a mom to her than her real mom but before than she visited the body (you know what i mean).So she walk over and stood in the back after the preacher talked bout her she poured down crying she ran to a tree in the grave yard and got on her nees she asked again but differently these were her exact words "please god i have been nothing but good my whole life i ask you now on my nees i rather have my grandmal here now then to live another day please god i now its to much to askbut if not that please let me see her". The next night she fell asleep and heard her name "(not real name) april baby girl i love you" she opened her eyes pulling down her blanket off her face and looked up to see a dark figure over her.Her eyes now tearing up all she could say was "thank you god".

so whatcha think???? cause it is true


:thumbup: But I hope you wouldn't post the "please god...." there are non-christians on CS..


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby PLEASE-DELETE! » Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:10 am

Stay Out Of The Attic.

Bella sat on her bed. Her blonde hair pulled in tight pigtails. Her freshly painted nails danced across the page as she wrote. She felt uneasy. Like a person was watching her, so she closed her blinds then she happliy returned back to her report. About two hours later her mother called. "Bella are you okay." The girl laughed and replyed "Yes mother." She hung up. The girl sat the report in her bag. She walked downstairs grabbing a bag of cheetos. The phone rang. She picked up expecting her mother. A faint voice spoke, "Hello, Isabella Maria. I've been watching you. Call you mother and stay out of the attic." They girl hung up before trotting upstairs thinking nothing of the phone call. The phone rang again she trotted to the kitchen grabbing the kitchen phone. "Hello." She said happliy. The faint voice rang out, "Call your mother Isabella. Be a good girl and stay out of the attic." The girl hung up calling her mother. The phone line was down. "Werid." She said. She walked upstair taking the phone with her. The phone rang again. "Isabella, better call the police. Stay out of the attic Bella." The faint voice laughed. Tired of games she walked into the attic. Nothing there she locked up the attic just to be sure. She looked up seeing a hooded figure. She let out a faint cry before the figure stuck a knife into her chest. The figure laughed before whispering "I told you. Stay out of the attic."

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Villalobos » Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:17 am

p r i n c e s s wrote:
Stay Out Of The Attic.


Bella sat on her bed. Her blonde hair pulled in tight pigtails. Her freshly painted nails danced across the page as she wrote. She felt uneasy. Like a person was watching her, so she closed her blinds then she happliy returned back to her report. About two hours later her mother called. "Bella are you okay." The girl laughed and replyed "Yes mother." She hung up. The girl sat the report in her bag. She walked downstairs grabbing a bag of cheetos. The phone rang. She picked up expecting her mother. A faint voice spoke, "Hello, Isabella Maria. I've been watching you. Call you mother and stay out of the attic." They girl hung up before trotting upstairs thinking nothing of the phone call. The phone rang again she trotted to the kitchen grabbing the kitchen phone. "Hello." She said happliy. The faint voice rang out, "Call your mother Isabella. Be a good girl and stay out of the attic." The girl hung up calling her mother. The phone line was down. "Werid." She said. She walked upstair taking the phone with her. The phone rang again. "Isabella, better call the police. Stay out of the attic Bella." The faint voice laughed. Tired of games she walked into the attic. Nothing there she locked up the attic just to be sure. She looked up seeing a hooded figure. She let out a faint cry before the figure stuck a knife into her chest. The figure laughed before whispering "I told you. Stay out of the attic."

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I do but it was a bit hard to read
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:21 am

Villalobos wrote:
p r i n c e s s wrote:
Stay Out Of The Attic.


Bella sat on her bed. Her blonde hair pulled in tight pigtails. Her freshly painted nails danced across the page as she wrote. She felt uneasy. Like a person was watching her, so she closed her blinds then she happliy returned back to her report. About two hours later her mother called. "Bella are you okay." The girl laughed and replyed "Yes mother." She hung up. The girl sat the report in her bag. She walked downstairs grabbing a bag of cheetos. The phone rang. She picked up expecting her mother. A faint voice spoke, "Hello, Isabella Maria. I've been watching you. Call you mother and stay out of the attic." They girl hung up before trotting upstairs thinking nothing of the phone call. The phone rang again she trotted to the kitchen grabbing the kitchen phone. "Hello." She said happliy. The faint voice rang out, "Call your mother Isabella. Be a good girl and stay out of the attic." The girl hung up calling her mother. The phone line was down. "Werid." She said. She walked upstair taking the phone with her. The phone rang again. "Isabella, better call the police. Stay out of the attic Bella." The faint voice laughed. Tired of games she walked into the attic. Nothing there she locked up the attic just to be sure. She looked up seeing a hooded figure. She let out a faint cry before the figure stuck a knife into her chest. The figure laughed before whispering "I told you. Stay out of the attic."

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I do but it was a bit hard to read

i cant read it period
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