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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Fri Feb 05, 2016 4:10 am

@20lait1
Is it just me or have you recently taken an interest in the periodic table? But that would be fun.

Someone needs to make an Undertale diary.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby 20lait1 » Fri Feb 05, 2016 8:30 pm

~ S p L i T ~ wrote:@20lait1
Is it just me or have you recently taken an interest in the periodic table? But that would be fun.

Someone needs to make an Undertale diary.


*squints at you* Is it just me, or are you stalking me in real life? Yes. And my friend in real life also noticed that... and has also taken an interest in the periodic table. Hmm...

Yep. Someone does need to make an Undertale diary. I probably won't yet, seeing I haven't played the full game. Only the demo... Just a side note, I might be making an Undertale pet collection dressup thing.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby Piefan » Fri Feb 05, 2016 9:01 pm

Tbh an Undertale-themed diary would be pretty difficult to pull off. Unlike Pokémon, where the basic plot (a young teen goes out on an adventure to train monsters) can be recycled over and over again while still being original, Undertale's storyline can't really be reused. The only potential plot I can think of is the already-cliché "characters from another world find themselves transported into the CS world and are confused". It'd be pretty cool, though, if someone did manage to make a decent one.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Sat Feb 06, 2016 3:39 am

Piefan wrote:Tbh an Undertale-themed diary would be pretty difficult to pull off. Unlike Pokémon, where the basic plot (a young teen goes out on an adventure to train monsters) can be recycled over and over again while still being original, Undertale's storyline can't really be reused. The only potential plot I can think of is the already-cliché "characters from another world find themselves transported into the CS world and are confused". It'd be pretty cool, though, if someone did manage to make a decent one.

Or someone could do one like mine where the protag is obsessed with the game. But that would kinda be copying me. Unless I made it after the command block.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby serendipity- » Sat Feb 20, 2016 2:11 am

I WOULD LIKE MY WORK IN THE LIBRARY!
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Title: This Isn't a Diary, It's a Rose
Link: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2969379Is it part of a series?
If yes, what are the sequels (and the links to those too, please) Not yet.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby Piefan » Sat Feb 20, 2016 8:31 pm

GizmoTheDragon, alas, pretty much never comes on anymore, so she probably won't be updating the library any time soon.

Anywho! More questions, I guess, to inspire discussion?
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[b]What system of morality/"shades of conflict" subtrope does your diary follow?[/b]

For those unfamiliar with them:
Black & White Morality: The villains are evil, probably kick kittens in their spare time, and have few if redeeming qualities, while the heroes are glorious and kind and never do anything morally questionable. Not necessarily bad.
Black & Grey Morality: The heroes are kinda jerks, and do some bad stuff, but that's okay, because the villains are far worse.
Grey & Gray Morality: Each side has decent motivations, do wrong things, and also do correct things.
White & White Morality: Each side is actually good, but oppose each other anyway. (For example, in romance novels, you can't exactly blame the rival for wanting to get their crush, can you?)

I don't want to list out every combination, but you get the idea. Check out the TVTropes page for more info.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby cosmos.; » Sun Feb 21, 2016 2:20 am

What system of morality/"shades of conflict" subtrope does your diary follow?

Argh, that's a tough one. Never heard of shades of conflict before. I guess I'll try it though, without using actual colors.

Main Fight: I definitely think this fits in Black vs. White. Tourmaline's a nice and innocent person, and Tigress isn't.
Redstone Block: I'd say this is Black vs. White too, since the story doesn't go as deep as its sequel, and there's no given reason why HTML/Binary are trying to take over the world.
Command Block: White and Grey vs. Grey and Black, I guess? As the story goes deeper, Summer isn't always the derp she always writes like. And if you look at it the way I do, Winter's not entirely bad (there's a good reason why she wants Summer dead).
For the Sunshine_Snow series, I'd say it's Graying Morality or Grey/Gray.
Rane's ______: Grey vs. Black, probably. Rane isn't always the nicest person in the world, but the people she fights are worse than her.
SOTS: I don't know... I haven't worked on this hard enough to show it yet, but White vs. White. Honestly, both Populars and Outcasts are good, but the Populars believe the Outcasts are too childish, leading to conflict.

Morality is probably one of the big things that sets my diaries apart. I guess I made all of the shades of conflict different without even knowing about it. :P
I'm probably due to write a new Black vs. Black diary soon, now that I've learned all of these things.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby 20lait1 » Sun Feb 21, 2016 8:14 pm

What system of morality/"shades of conflict" subtrope does your diary follow?

The Hawk would probably follow some kind of White VS Grey VS Black. Skyler's not exactly a bad person - the worst things she's probably done is prank the Populars or get in detention for some other thing. Snowy, however, has trapped Skyler in a cave (why did I ever think of that?) - but she does have good reasons (Secrets Revealed). Shadowheart and the rest of the group are just... evil. No description needed.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby trees |-/ » Mon Feb 22, 2016 6:06 am

]What forms of magic/powers appear in your not-diary? all elements, and the fact
zHow do they affect everyday life? well the fact that the horses can speak and are divided into groups of there powers
zAre there any laws related to them? yes, you must stick with your element, if not your child could become two elements
zHow common are they? Does this vary from region to region? when foals are born they get a power from the parents.
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Re: {{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

Postby hxneystorm » Sat Feb 27, 2016 3:38 pm

Does anyone still even want me to keep the Falcon? If not, I'll just get the topic locked and maybe make a new diary- I think I have ideas. Ideas that will defy stereotypes.

It's all up to you guys. If you want me to keep the Falcon running, I might, jut I'm running out of ideas and just keep on turning to cliché and I hate using clichés.
If I should make a new diary, what should it be called? What should the main character be called, and male or female? A lot of diaries seem to be given to females, would it be more unexpected to give it to a guy? PM me if you have ideas. I'm totally open! I have some better, unique ideas that wouldn't fit the Falcon.
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