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by ~♫Hannah♫~ » Sat Mar 31, 2012 8:50 am
Phantom's Shadow wrote:I think you should revise the grammar a bit.

but it's reallyy goôöòóõōd!
Thanks for the advice!
I was just sort of rushing through it and forgot to check it because I knew everybody wanted a new chapter. So the next one will be corrected!:3 Anna46 wrote:Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
..The silver fox? OMG LEETLE RAVENKIT! It's your mother!
XD I thought you guys would like that. lol
Thanks everybody!:3 I'm glad everybody liked! I'm in the works of the next chapter right now.
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.
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