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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby Wesley » Sun Oct 16, 2011 2:42 pm

October 15, 2011

Trick or treater
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Miracle Marvelous dragged behind his friends, pained by his stiff and rubbery costume. He sighed a breath of relief as he reached your door step, happy to get to a house. "Trick or treat!" he panted, out of breath. <3


Giving a trick
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Fang pushes Pumpkin aside. "Haha! Beat you to it!" he yells. "Let me handle this one!" Uh-oh! Looks like your pet got tricked! D:


Giving a treat
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Pumpkin steps forward, and you realize it must be your lucky day. It's no trick for you! "Aww... how cute," she breathes, loving the costume. "Have a treat. Happy Halloween!"



Receiving a treat
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Marvin looked up, a shine in his eyes. "Thank you so much!" he said. "I like your costume, too." He looked back down into his bag of goodies. This is definitely the best first Halloween ever. "Happy Halloween."


Receiving a trick
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Marvin looked down for a minute, hurt. However, when he looked up again at you, a smile was overtaking his face, not a tear. "Thanks anyways. I'll make sure that I get some use out of this, too!" He laughed. After all, not everything can be a treat!


Run out of goodies! D:
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Pumpkin looks at you with a grave expression on her face. "I love your outfit, but you simply came too late. I've run out of candies, and I need to drive to the store to purchase some more. In the mean time, here's what my friend Fang might call a trick.


September 16th, 2011


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Constance, eager at the sight of a light, rushed her worried little paws. The scuffing of her dress against the cold, hard ground scared her, and she jumped, making sure she wasn't followed. She was rather young to be by herself, but her sister had casually "lost" her earlier. She takes refuge in the bright porch light and the pleasant jack-o-lantern on your door step, and rings the door bell. "Trick or treat," she says with a timid smile.
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby deliriusways » Mon Oct 17, 2011 12:18 am

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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby Patch. » Mon Oct 17, 2011 5:59 am

Username: WolfyGirl-
Pet's Name: Nippy
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Story: Nippy's SO excited! It's Halloween time and that means costumes, parties, decorations, scares and CANDY! She puts on a black cape with a spiked collar and bracelet that are the same color. She finishes with a mask to kind of hide her identity. She grabs her trick-or-treat bucket that's shaped like a jack'o lantern and trots outside.

She sees a house and nervously pads up to it. She rears onto her hind legs because she's kind of short and rings the doorbell with a paw then sits down- wagging her tail excitedly. She looks up at you with her purple eyes once you open the door and barks, "Trick or Treat!"- hoping you give her something nice.
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby . : Milotic : . » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:56 am

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Pet name: Jake
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Story:one Halloween at mid night a handsome black puppy named jake and his brown brother were coming home from trick or treating when lightening hit it seemed to bounce off of a light-pole and on to the nearest thing, Jakes brother being terrified ran past him knocking Jake into a puddle of glowing goop. Jake tried to get out of the thick blue glowing stuff but it was to late, lightening stoked again sending radiation thought him! "Owwwwwwwww" he howled in fear seeming to only feel a stiff pinch

His brother ran to get their mom. Jake waddled uneasily to try and catch up with his brother. "Jake! Jake!" his mother barked Jake licked his mom and she carried him home. He didn't sleep very well at all, in fact he woke up glowing bright blue and couldn't see very well. He felt like a out sider, and acted like one he sent his whole puppy hood trying to figure out how to be normal, except 1 day a year when he could fit in. and after that day he made the same break through love could cure him.

Halloween. Jake woke at 5am to practice his studies and polish his glasses at dusk he headed out to start his trick or treating he didn't need a costume because it looked like he already had on one. However this Halloween was different, he met a pretty and enchanting dog this year who didn't think he was a freak even though he wasn't whirring a costume, she simply smiled and was nice. "could it be?" Jake thought. He had finally found someone who didn't judge him on his looks, but on his personality "do you want to go trick or treating with me?" the pink beauty asked "I'd love to!" Jake barked eggier to finally be with some one who liked him for who he was

1 Year later Jake and his new found love had 1 puppy who took after Lilly and was born on halloween after another year this year she's finally old enough to trick or treat.

She walked to the first lit house with parents at toe and rang the bell
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby Stonefly » Mon Oct 17, 2011 10:56 am

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Silk looked around the street and he began to slowly stalk down it. he is a werewolf colored dog mix and well his father was the werewolf and his mother was the colorful dog. he had been living all his life hiding in the shadows trying to stay away from the other normal animals but he knew this was a time of year when everone dressed up and went from pleaced to placed to get treats and even sometimes tricks. So this was the best time of the year for him because he is able to woner around and get things that he needs. So silk kept stalking the street looking for the right house or well one with its lights on.

After a little while of staying in the shadows he sees a small light and he grins and slowly walks over to see if this person would give him something. once he was at the front door he looked at it and then took in a few deep breaths, hoping that this animal would thing that his normal looks were costum and not is normal self. so he took a few steps to the door and then stopped trying to remember how the pups would go and ask for it then he pricked his ears and noticed two little pups running to the house and he jumped into the bushes and then watched. when they nocked and then door opened he listened "Tirck or treat!" cried the two little pups and they held out their bags for their goodies. Silk soon nodded, he knew how he would have to ask "trick or treat" he said to himself and then slowly walked out of the bushes and then the door and nocked. Well waiting for a tlitl longer he noticed it opned alittle and he barked happil and started to wag his tail "Trick or treat!" he said with a smile, his long pink died teeth flashed as he did
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby vetica » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:01 am

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Pet name:
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Story:
It was Halloween night, and Adagio was anxious.
No, perhaps anxious was the wrong word, too negative. Ad was positively excited. One could not ask for a more perfect, spooky night. A veteran of Halloween related activities, Ad was nonetheless looking forward to the following evening. And, of course, the treats that were sure to come. As the wind rustled the nearly-bare branches lining the glowing street, Ad quickly adjusted the robe of his costume. Knew I should have picked something warmer, he mused to himself as he demurely made sure he was covered appropriately.

Briskly, nearly as brisk as the wind threatening to remove his costume, Ad made his way down the street. Even just walking was like stepping through a portal into another world; a monster here, a princess there... only on such a night as this were these visions possible. Ad smiled with the pleasure and enjoyment of it all. Spotting a house ahead where two pups were leaving looking awfully pleased, Ad made a beeline, stopping himself from running full-out from excitement. First house of the evening! he laughed to himself. Bounding up the sidewalk, he stopped in front of the large door.

Stealing himself before ringing the bell in front of him, Ad slowly closed his eyes, savoring the moment. The crisp air, the echos of laughter, the soft glow of the moon hanging above him. This was, indeed, the perfect night for such an adventure. Ad raised his paw and rung the bell, hearing its resounding bellow deep within the house. Wondering what was in store for him, he could not stop the grin that was spreading across his face.

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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby val velocity » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:01 am

Username:Char
Pet(s) name:Char,Ghost,Humming
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Heres the story :D

Char was getting ready for Halloween,at her town they didn't have it she had no idea why so she was going to her penpal Ghost's to trick or treat.She only had a few things so she began putting them own along with her black dragon,all he had was a sticker."Come on...We gotta go before our plane gets here...!"She hissed and swiped at him.The dragon breathed fired on her angel wings and they turned black."Thanks,idiot..."She growled."Time to go!"Her Mom called,Dashing down the stairs she tumbled head first and her wings went sideways..Char jumped in the car as they rode to the airport and went she got their she went on her plane that led to Colorado."I'm coming Ghost..."She thought as she got her plane then relaxed into her seat."I'll be home soon Mom!"She cried as the windows and door closed.After four hours it was 9:31 and she got off the plane and saw Humming."I'll take you to Ghost's house."He mummbled."Okay!"She squealed with joy as the rushed out of the doors hitting the ground outside...As they reached a large neighborhood Ghost sat outside the gates.Char gagged,"I-i thou-""A cat?"He smirked."No infact i'm a dog like Humming,we should start trick or treating though,not many lights are on."He sighed."Okay...."Char sighed as they dragged across the emtpy road,then out of the corner of Humming's eye there was something shining.Ghost hit the ground running as Char followed in last behind Humming,"Go,go,GO!!!"Ghost cried then a shadow swooped Char up and flew her to the porch.She slowly knocked on the door as Ghost whispered in her ear."Treat trick..?"She asked questionly.
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby Gloxinia » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:03 am

Username:
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Pet name:
Elliot~

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(I have a lot of variations of his stories, so I'll post the main one :3)


"Elliot!"
Said male giggled under his breath, his paws slamming against the pavement as he ran. He didn't even bother to wait for his siblings - they were all too slow! Especially Mayla. She took forever. Always complaining her paws hurt, and demanded to be carried by the other siblings. But Elliot would have none of that! He'd get more candy if he went solo.
He passed through a few groups of pets, whom of which were chatting amongst eachother about their recievings. Elliot paid no mind though, instead, he scanned the neighborhood for a decent looking house - one that looked like it had the best treats. Usually, the houses with the best treats were scary looking. Ones with skeletons, fog, smoke, and things that jumped out at you! Yeah, that's something he needed to look for... One of those.
Eventually, he spotted one...but it was scarier than he imagined. Grinning from ear to ear, the young dog ran up the sidewalk, treading through the mist till he ended up at the front door. His tail wagged a mile a minute as he set his bucket down and clawed at the door. He saw it open, and he stared up with his tongue lolling out the side of his mouth.
"Trick or treat!" he shouted, running in an excited circle around his trick or treat basket.


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Delilah panted, her run slowing down to a walk. Puckering her bottom lip out in a pout, she stamped her front paw on the pavement in frustration. "Darn it!" she cried out. "He got away! Now I'll never catch up with Elliot, and get the most treats in the house..."
With that said, she let out an annoyed gust of air, and looked around the neighborhood. Suddenly, an idea popped in her head. "Why don't I just go in another neighborhood?" she asked allowed, her smiling once again reappearing. "That way, there could be more houses, and I could beat Elliot! It's perfect!"
Quickly, the female quickly whirled around and sped off. She passed through rows and rows of numerous houses she had visited, and without any sense of direction, took a left. She took random turns, and soon found herself in a neighborhood she was unfamiliar with. Smiling with pride, Delilah quickly sped up the walkway and up the steps of a random house. There, she set her bucket aside, and politely pawed against the door in a knocking motion.
She watched it open, and she smiled wide and wagged her stubble of a tail. "Trick or Treat!" she cried out, pawing at the ground cutely.
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby CaptiveLegacy » Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:04 am

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Pet Names:
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Story:
"Have you decided on your costume sis?"

Risen sighed, glancing at the numerous costumes scattered across her room floor. From witch, to zombie, to princess, to wizard. She just couldnt decide. Glancing back at her little sister, Fallen, she smiled and shook her head, "No sis, theres just so many to chose from!" she said, falling backwards onto her bed with a sigh. Fallen at her sister, then at the costumes, raising an eyebrow. She picked up two masks she saw and jumped up onto the bed with her sister, "How about this? We can be matching!" she said, waging her tail happily. Risen opened one eye and looked at her sister, then at the masks. With a smile, she nodded, "Good idea, sounds perfect." she said. Fallen squealed and waged her tail, realizing that her sister will go tricker treating with her.

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Risen and Fallen were all dressed up and ready to go! Wearing matching masks and bow ties, they both walked side by side, eager for the adventure (and dont forget candy) that awaits them.
Fallen squealed the first few times going up to some of the houses, which scared a few of the treaters, so Risen had to put an end to that. After explaining that 'Even though you are excited, lets not terrorize the neighborhood' speach, they were back on track. One by one the candy flowed into there little basket, side by side they traveled on through their town in the nights.
After awhile Fallen had seem to have gotten tired, and her little paws seemed to have grown weak. With a comforting smile, Risen allowed her sister to climb on her back and rest as she continued to trick or treat. Fallen snuggled into her fur and rested, though keeping one open to see all the action and excitement on this halloween night.
They trick or treated like this for awhile, then Fallen had other ideas and wanted down. She scrambled down and landed on the ground with a 'oouf!' but seemed to be okay and she snatched her bag and ran up to the next house. Risen rolled her eyes and followed her younger sister, carrying her trick or treat basket between her teeth. Fallen had seemed to already rang the door bell, so Risen sat beside her and waited, curling her tail around her sister. As the door opened, Fallen screamed out "TRICK OR --" her sentence was cut short as Risen covered her mouth with a paw, wishing instead she covered her ears before. "Lets not scare the treaters away, remember last time?" giggled Risen, which was replied with a giggle from Fallen. Both then looked up at the treater and smiled, raising there halloween bags up...

"Trick or treat!!!!"
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Re: Trick or Treat (Lights on, Lights off - Your Pet's Story

Postby You are a Pirate » Mon Oct 17, 2011 1:03 pm

I just wrote a story! Can someone please critique it?

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A green dog, named Tails because of his three tails walked along the sidewalk. Soon a dog with an amazing dragon costume blocked his path.
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"What are YOU supposed to be?!" He exclaimed rather rudely. "I'm a wizard." Tails said. "With a paintbrush and an icepack?" The dragon kid laughed. "That's my wand and wizard hat. "My family doesn't have money to buy a great costume." Tails explained, hurt. The dragon kid looked at him. "Right...good luck getting candy with THAT costume." He bounded off cruelly. A while later, Tails was galloping toward the nearest house, feeling discouraged because of what the kid said. Don't listen to himTails scolded himself. However, the kid's words still rang in his head. "Good luck getting candy with THAT costume." Tails reached up a paw and rang the doorbell of the house. He shifted from paw to paw, waiting until someone to open the door. Finally, someone came. Tails breathed in deeply. This was the moment. The first house.
"Trick or treat!"
"Why?" The girl cried. "Why can't we be together? I love you more than anything, yet you reject me."
The boy tore away. "I-I'm sorry. I can't tell you."
She wept. "I must know. Please, tell me why."
The boy stayed silent.
"Please..." She said. "I love you."
He finally replied. "I can't love you because...because you are a pirate."
The girl stared at him. "I'm a what?"
"You are a pirate, you're all pirates except me! Because I'm a princess!"
The girl narrowed her eyes. "Isn't it the other way around? I am a pirate, you are a princess?"
"NU! You are a pirate, and I'm a pretty pretty princess! M'kay?!"
"What?"
"Problem?"
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