Desert Blade (STORY) Pt1

[PuddingShark]

this is the best berito, i have e-ver eaten.

[D Trent]

Next chapter's up! Hope you like it.
As I've said in the A/N for this chapter, we've reached 200 views, so I've added in a poll (which I will look over, and use in the coming chapters), and I've also NOT given one of the characters a name.
So, comment with a name you think I should give Daniel's phoegon, and I'll consider all the comments (if there's a few).

That's all for this chapter. Enjoy!

[WhoLocked]

Theodin (Thay-o-din)

[D Trent]

NOTE that, even if there are a few names to choose from, I can't promise you guys I'll be choosing one. But, as an author, I think it'd be great to find a name that I like.

[Quiescent]

Awesome story ^_^ You have a talent for writing!

[voidsounds]

I love it! i was maybe thinking of a two-word name for the phoegon; Firescale. Fire stands for the phoenix part of him, and the scale for the dragon. Let me know what you think.

[D Trent]

I've written the next chapter (Automech), and uploaded. I do hope you enjoy it, because I definitely did. The poll's looking great, and I'm continuously thinking of new ideas to use the results.

Now, the name of that awesome phoegon:

I love it! i was maybe thinking of a two-word name for the phoegon; Firescale. Fire stands for the phoenix part of him, and the scale for the dragon. Let me know what you think.

I did use ღNเﻮђtﻮคzєღ's idea, but not in the way they may have expected. (You're thinking now, right?)
I named the phoenix / dragon Ignaria - coming from the Latin words "ignus" and "vivarium", meaning "REPTILE OF FIRE". The reptile refers to the black dragon, and the fire refers to the red-n-gold phoenix.

I would also like to thank LLKoolJames for his suggestion. The name "Theodin" was nice for the dragon, but I didn't think it fit the phoenix aspect. I will, however, keep that in my mind as I create more characters. Thank you, again.

One last thing: I'm considering writing a short side-story addition to this narrative, featuring the same characters, but a completely new storyline. Hopefully, if I can manage it, it'll be a quick-read sort of thing.
PM me or comment here, letting me know what you think of the idea - or if you'd like me to add or remove anything at all.
Until later: FAREWELL.

[honey badga]

Omg great story! Reminds me of Eragon at some parts.

[D Trent]

Omg great story! Reminds me of Eragon at some parts.

Yeah, one of my other friends said that, too - but I don't remember much of the movie.

[D Trent]

Considering posts have a limit number of characters (60,000), I'm moving this over to another thread. Desert Blade Pt2

Yes, it is true. I believe it's silly (actually, not really) that there's a limit to the number of characters in a post, and a number as small as 60,000 is outrageous. I mean, you can't expect everyone to be short-story writers, unlike me, right?

Anyway, see you over there.