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by GreenDayRock18 » Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:41 am

Scarred{M}
Other Charries:



Angel{F} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Night{F} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Father/Xavier
My life has changed alot.. I had to find Night. What if she already knew? Her life was already torn up as it is. I don`t think she could handle another family member dieing. I got home late that night. Angel was waiting for me, her sweet sent hit me as soon as I entered my house.
"Hey" she smiled, her voice was sweet and soft.
"You haven`t seen Night around here..have you?" My voice was strained, filled with pain and anger. It seemed to hit Angel like a razor "Nope....why?....well..she came and said she had to go some where...I`m not sure where..." She sounded scared. I took a step closer to her "If you`re keeping anything from me..I swear..." Anger pulsed through my veins and then stooped suddenly. I looked at Angel, she was cowering beneath me. I gasped and stepped back "Angel..I...I`m sorry" I turned and fled, my paw hitting the ground hard. I ran to the forest and stopped near a river, where the old oak grew, well, thats what we use to call it...
I lay beside the river, my tears running down my muzzle and dropping gently into the water, sending rippled out far to the other side.
Mist began to form around me and for a second I thought I was seeing things, but no. In front of me stood three glittering dogs. Their fur made out of stars, one of them was small, like a little pup that never grew up. This one stepped forward.
"I am the spirit of
Youth" His voice was soft and gentle. A she-dog stepped forward next, she had unusal wing like things growing from her upper front legs. Her voice was sweet and just as gentle as her younger companion "I am the spirit of
Love". The final dog stepped forward, his voice was a little deeper than the others but he seemed like the grown up version of the smaller pup. "I am the spirit of
Hope."



The spirit of Love ~~~~~ The spirit of Youth ~~~~~ The spirit of Hope


I wish you would step back
from that ledge,my
friend,You could cut ties
with all the lies
That you've been living in
And if you do not
want to see me again,
I would understand..
*enter rest of song* ..
I know something's wrong..
Well everyone I know has got a reason
To say..Put the past away..
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by riot. » Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:43 am
Didn't finish but so far it's great!!!
"Lɪғᴇ ɪsɴ’ᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜᴏᴡ ᴘᴏᴘᴜʟᴀʀ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ… Wʜᴀᴛ ɢɪʀʟ ᴏʀ ʙᴏʏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴅᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴋɴᴏᴡ. Lɪғᴇ ɪs ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴀʟᴡᴀʏs ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴜᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ɪɴ. Nᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟᴇᴛ ᴀɴʏᴏɴᴇ ᴄᴏɴᴠɪɴᴄᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴡᴀʏ ɪs ʙᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴡᴀʏ. Iɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴀʟʟ ᴡᴇ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɪs ᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs.. ᴀɴᴅ ᴏᴜʀ ᴍɪɴᴅs. Tʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ sɪɴɢ.. ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ ᴄʀʏ… ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴡʜʏ ᴡᴇ ʟɪᴠᴇ."
-Andy Six
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by GreenDayRock18 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:17 am
lillia101 wrote:Didn't finish but so far it's great!!!
Glad you like it ^^
I have a couple more parts planned for this ^^
y`see it all starts with his life before...I jsut thought it`d be a good plot ^^
Last bumped by GreenDayRock18 on Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:17 am.


I wish you would step back
from that ledge,my
friend,You could cut ties
with all the lies
That you've been living in
And if you do not
want to see me again,
I would understand..
*enter rest of song* ..
I know something's wrong..
Well everyone I know has got a reason
To say..Put the past away..
My Fursona & Charries
My DA
I haz Wattpad
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