~*~Designer Dogs (Part 21 added 9/19)~*~

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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome)

Postby ilovekahlee » Sun Jul 11, 2010 4:26 am

bookmarked!!!
LOVE it, its such a different idea, keep writing! :D you should get someone to make a stamp.
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome)

Postby Noctyrn » Sun Jul 11, 2010 4:43 am

This is a fantastic story! And these are all CS dogs?
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome)

Postby SkySmoke » Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:15 am

Aww. Thank you everyone for the nice comments (I can only quote 3 times in one post, so I can't thank you all seperatly lol)

dinkleberry111 wrote:This is a fantastic story! And these are all CS dogs?

Thanks :D And yes, they are all CS dogs. The idea originally started as the Black advent and UR dog's pairing story on the CS Pairs thread...and then I just kept thinking of more. There are so many designs on CS I don't have any trouble finding new characters when I need them ;)

Again, thanks for reading everyone :D :D
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 4 Added!)

Postby Ƥσиιɛ » Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:10 am

I luv this story! It's such a unique idea, and I'm always wanting to read more! Good job!
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 4 Added!)

Postby SkySmoke » Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:13 am

Evil Teddy wrote:I luv this story! It's such a unique idea, and I'm always wanting to read more! Good job!


Thank you very much :) I just posted part 4 (which is new) ;)
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 4 Added!)

Postby ilovekahlee » Sun Jul 11, 2010 11:44 am

YEA!!! PART FOUR!!! :P
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 4 Added!)

Postby SkySmoke » Mon Aug 09, 2010 7:56 pm

PART 5

After walking for a few more minutes they came to the stream, as promised. Mystic walked out into the middle of it and sighed as the cool water ran over her sore legs and feet. She bent to drink and had to fight the urge to lay down in the water. She was exhausted and it would feel soooo good. She drank her fill and then walked back to the bank to stand with the others. Black had his ears pricked in the direction of something coming from across the stream. Nitro lifted his muzzle and sniffed the air.

"It's Gia, no threat." Black relaxed his protective stance and went to the stream to drink. Mystic turned to Gage and cocked her head.

"Who is Gia?"

"My sister. She is always roaming the forest, so she is usually one of the first to greet us when we come back."

Mystic turned her attention to the dog that was now crossing the stream. She had a dark coat, very similar to Gage's, only more of a blue tint. The pattern on her coat was also very faint, almost invisible unless you knew to look. The only thing that immediately gave her away as a designer dog were her vibrant pink eyes. She bounded across the stream easily and landed almost silently on their side. She greeted Gage with a wagging tail.

"Glad to see you back in one piece."

"I always come back in one piece. I'm slick like that."

Gia snorted and laughed and as she rubbed her head against Gage's shoulder in greeting. She walked over to Mystic wagging her tail.

"Hi, I'm Gia. What's your name?"

"I'm Mystic...nice to meet you."

"Nice to meet you too. Welcome to the pack...well, almost. It's not too far til you can meet everyone else, but, more importantly to you, sleep."

"Sleep sounds amazing. So does meeting everyone else, but I'm just so tired."

"Oh, I know. I remember when Gage and I first came here. I was convinced I would never be able to walk again. I was depressed and just wanted to lay down and let something eat me. I'm glad I didn't, you will be too. Just give it time."

Gia smiled at Mystic then bounced over to greet Nitro and Black who were done drinking at the stream. They chatted for a few minutes then Nitro walked over to Mystic.

"Are you ready to go on? This is the last part of our trek, I promise. You can sleep for days if you need to."

Mystic heaved herself to her feet and barely stifled a groan. She stretched then looked at Nitro.

"Alright, lets go."

Nitro turned and joined Black and the two of them headed out in a ground covering lope. Gia, Gage and Mystic ran along behind them. Gia and Gage were nice enough to stay back with Mystic when she got tired and slowed down. They ran for a while longer then stopped at the top of a hill overlooking what seemed like a small valley.

"Here we are, home." Nitro said as he walked to the edge of the hill and looked down. Mystic cautiously walked up next to him and followed his gaze down the hill. Her eyes widened at what she saw.

There were a ton of wolves and dogs in the valley below them. At least fifty, if not more. Some of them were brightly colored and obviously designer dogs. Others were natural colored and were most likely wild wolves. There were puppies and adult dogs, all busy doing things. Mystic turned to Gage and Gia.

"Wow...thats a lot of dogs. And I'm supposed to get to know them all? I don't know about this...."

Gia laughed and stood next to Mystic.

"You'll fit in just fine, don't worry. Everyone has a part to play, you'll find where you fit. Just give it some time."

"She's right, " Nitro said, agreeing with Gia, "Everyone has a place to fit in the pack, it's just about finding your place. Which you will never do from up here. Let's get going."

He headed down the hill and Black, Gage and Gia followed him. Mystic stood at the top looking down on the huge group. She had never been around that many dogs before. She watched as a few of the puppies noticed Nitro approaching and they happily barked and whined as the ran for the hill at top speed to meet him. She sighed, then took a deep breath and followed them down the hill. She reminded her self that she had to fit in, this was her only choice.
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 5 Added!)

Postby ilovekahlee » Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:17 am

just wanting to clarify something, is Black the pack leader?
i've thought so from the beginning, i wanted to know for sure.
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 5 Added!)

Postby SkySmoke » Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:17 pm

lorrin wrote:just wanting to clarify something, is Black the pack leader?
i've thought so from the beginning, i wanted to know for sure.


No, Nitro is the pack leader....Black is...well, you'll see. He's like 2nd in command. Which woudnt really exist in a normal pack, but these guys aren't normal
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Re: ~*~Designer Dogs~*~ (Comments Welcome: Part 5 Added!)

Postby Hyaenidae » Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:14 am

I really love this, and I hope to see the story last for a while. It's fun to read. I'm writing a story sort of like this... It's different, but in this sort of future time period where they have the ability to alter the genetics. They made chimera-type things (like the things in Full Metal Alchemist but with SCIENCE! XD).. Well it's cool that it sort of goes along with this. Mine's about more.. civil rights sort of thing plus drama. I'm still filling plot holes, so it's not up yet, but idk... Um anyway this is super cool :3
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