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How is my story?

Poll ended at Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:11 pm

Terrible.
1
9%
Cute!
0
No votes
Cool.
2
18%
Awesome!
4
36%
Scary...
0
No votes
Mystic.
1
9%
Boring.
0
No votes
I love it so much!
3
27%
 
Total votes : 11

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Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Sat Mar 09, 2013 2:37 am

I really like the way you write! And the plot sounds nice too. c: Overall, this is an interesting story so far.
Would be glad to read more~!
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Postby Thunder. » Sat Mar 09, 2013 2:43 am

✿Maragold✿ wrote:I really like the way you write! And the plot sounds nice too. c: Overall, this is an interesting story so far.
Would be glad to read more~!


Thank you c:
I would write more if my mouse weren't so broken.
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Postby Thunder. » Sat Mar 09, 2013 2:56 am

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Red spent a couple moments browsing the precious book for more words of power. She had found a few to add to her collection of spells:

Siathra, fly.
Frithiu, heat.
Iceria, cold.


Red suspected that iceria came from the word 'ice' and that frithiu had something to do with the word 'fire' but didn't bother find out whether she was right or wrong. She kept browsing, until she came upon a strange paragraph, which read:

A spoken oath to the ruler
Was broken over and over
The breeze of time unstopped,
The hope that shone was dropped.


It sounded ominous and dark, but Red kept reading.

The hero that rose from light
The one who stalked during the night
She was the one destined to shine
Even though she once committed a crime.

Silkiar, the One Who Shone
Who made it up the cliff alone
Rivlark, her son, the warrior
Who almost fell to the water

Moonglow, a curse or a light
Destined to shine bright
Or be lost to the might?


Red, after browsing the book again, learned that Moonglow was a healing liquid that nearly brought Rivelark to his death. Who Rivelark and Silviar were, she had no idea at all.
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Postby outoforder001 » Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:55 pm

So good :0
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Postby Thunder. » Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:57 pm

    Thanks so much! I've worked hard on it c:
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Postby outoforder001 » Sat Mar 09, 2013 3:58 pm

Thunder. wrote:
    Thanks so much! I've worked hard on it c:


No problem. I made a Story But i never got time to Finishing it
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Postby Thunder. » Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:01 pm

    Do you mind voting on the poll? Thanks c:
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Postby outoforder001 » Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:09 pm

Thunder. wrote:
    Do you mind voting on the poll? Thanks c:


Already did XD
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Postby Thunder. » Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:10 pm

    Thanks! c:
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Postby outoforder001 » Sat Mar 09, 2013 4:12 pm

Thunder. wrote:
    Thanks! c:


Who voted it as Terrible!!
Ima watching them >:O
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