Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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Who's your favorite character of the main 6?

Amy
4
33%
Jenette
4
33%
Suzi
1
8%
Gish
2
17%
The Demon Queen
1
8%
Ginger
0
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Sat Feb 23, 2013 3:13 pm

Oh... Lol. Flashy's gonna have ta read it. Over my shoulder. Say hi, Flashy!!!

hi guys!!!!!

That was her. She's at my house. xD Were watching a movie. Well... WE WANT THE NEXT ENTRY!!!! Don't we?

SUSHI YES





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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:51 am

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So. I was stuck on a web with a giant spider coming toward me. Awesome.
Amy? Where'd you go? Where are you?
Jenette? There's.... uh.... there's a giant spider coming toward me. It's really big... with a bunch of eyes.... AND IT'S STINKIN' CREEPY!!!
Just hold on!
TO WHAT?!
It's an expression!! Just stay quiet and don't move!
I think I got the not moving part down!
I couldn't move if I wanted to. The web had wrapped around nearly every part of my body, making it impossible to move. I suddenly felt something tickle my neck.
AGHAGHAHGAHGHAH!
Relax, it's just me.
Oh. Okay. Cool. I wasn't actually screaming, I was just like.... faking it... ya know?
You're a really bad liar. Now shush.
And so, for once in my life, I actually listened to her.
Okay, I'm going to untie your ropes now, okay?
I thought you said to be quiet?
The spider turned it's head toward me and made a screeching sound.
I was talking about you! The spider can't hear me, you ninny!
Oh... right. Wait, did you just call me a ninny?!
Yes I did! Now shut it!
Ninny? Huh. I'd been called a lot of things, but I'm pretty sure ninny was new. I felt something tickle my neck and I giggled.
Shush!
HA! It sounds like you said sushi. XD
OH WOULD YOU JUST SHUT UP?! DO YOU WANT TO DIE?!
No, I'd rather not.
Then. Just. Shut. Up.
Well fine. Be that way, Jenette, I thought. I felt something tickle my neck again and giggled.
Please try to control your giggling.
Sorry!
SUSSSSHHHH!!!!
Sushi! I thought.
Seriously? Stop with the sushi thing. It's weird.
YOU'RE WEIRD!
Do you want my help or not? Because I'm more than happy to just leave you hear with the big spider.
NO! NO! NO! DON'T LEAVE ME PLEASE!!!
Then listen to me and SHUT UP. That includes your thoughts.
Grr.... fine. And so I tried my best not to think anything. But, of course, my motor brain wouldn't stop spewing things. I'm gonna die. I'm gonna so, so die. The spider is getting closer. The Pegasus has disappeared somehow. I'm gonna die. I'm gonna die. I'm gonna DIE. I'M GONNA DIE. I'M GONNA DIEEEE!!!
SHUT UP! YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DIE IF I CAN CONCENTRATE!
I'm trying!! The spider was inching toward me. At least it was going slow.
Alright, almost done.
And then the spider started charging.
AGHAGHAGHAHGAHGHA! JENETTE HURRY UP IT'S COMING TOWARD ME!
I'M HURRYING!
And then it reached me. It's eyes all stared at me with an evil look and then it screeched a loud, ear-piercing shriek.
Jenette? ARE YOU DONE YET I'M GONNA DIE HERE!!!
But she didn't reply.
J-J-J-J-Jenette? Are you t-t-t-t-there?
But I couldn't hear her. At all. The spider made a screeching noise again and I saw it's sharp teeth. And then, without warning, I suddenly dropped. I dropped off the web and started to fall. But then, on my way down, something tied around my leg and I stopped falling instantly. I looked up. It twas part of the web.
Amy, hold on!
Jenette! WHERE THE HEY HAVE YOU BEEN?!
I had to do something! Now shut it!
And then I started falling again. I looked up and saw that the web had been cut loose. The spider screeched and started riding down a strand of web quickly toward me.
Hey Amy? Do yourself a favor and fall faster.
WHAT?!
The spider is coming faster toward you, Amy! FALL. FASTER.
I'M TRYING!
But there was no way on earth I could fall faster. Unless...
Jenette! That's it! Grab something heavy if you can and put it on me!
What? Oh... right.
I suddenly felt something very heavy land on my back and I started falling faster. But it knocked the wind out of me.
You're welcome!
I started falling faster and faster. Whatever Jenette had put on my back, it helped. And then I realized something.
Uh.... Jenette? I'm falling. What happens when I hit the ground?
Don't worry, you'll survive. You'll get a bunch of bruises, but you'll be fine.
... How can I hit the ground from a million feet up and live?!
Wait, nobody's told you?
Told me what?
Amy, you can't die. It's impossible.
Huh?
You can't die until the end of the world comes again. It's always been that way.
I.... I can't?
Nope. There's something else you should know.
What is it?
You're back in your body.
I AM?!
I looked at my body, and sure enough, I was the old Amy.
YES! I'M FREEEE!
Not quite. The spider is still chasing you.
But... I thought you said I couldn't die?
Well, that spider happens to be the one that's going to end the world.
SAY WHAT?!
So it can sort of kill you. But it's the only thing that can... unless somebody else ends the world.
Say, how do you know all this stuff?
Amy, I've been alive since the beginning of time, practically. I know a lot.
Oh. Right.
Okay, the ground is going to come up fast, now. You might be knocked unconscious, but don't worry. I'll help you get away from the spider.
How can you help me if I'm unconscious?
I can carry you.
Oh. Right.
The ground started coming up fast.
Hey Jenette?!
Yeah?
Promise you won't let the spider get me?
The ground was coming up even faster.
I promise.
And then, with those last words from her, I hit the ground.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:52 am

AWESOME JF
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sun Feb 24, 2013 8:08 am

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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:00 pm

Rockfire wrote:AWESOME JF

Thanks! :)
Mento. wrote:KOOL!!!

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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:22 am

LOL. Amy's soooo funny! And I love that bit at the end... it's sweet and sort of sentimental.
And noooooooooooooo! Spiders ending the world. And my parents always told me it was more afraid of me than I was of it :p
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:31 am

.:Invisi:. wrote:LOL. Amy's soooo funny! And I love that bit at the end... it's sweet and sort of sentimental.
And noooooooooooooo! Spiders ending the world. And my parents always told me it was more afraid of me than I was of it :p

Thanks! :) And lol, in this case Amy's more afraid of the spider than it is of her. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Feb 25, 2013 9:52 am

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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:28 am

Neat picture, JF! ^^
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Re: Every Second Counts - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:22 pm

I like the pic JF c:
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