Lycan Story [Title a WIP]

[selenite.]

My goodness, its a rather lovely story. I love the lengthy descriptions and the vast vocabulary you use. I've bookmarked it and will defiantly be looking for more!
-Paper

[wolves+horses]

Wow, thank you! <3 *flattered blush* I really want to keep writing, but I feel like I should do a little more thinking about how exactly it's going to go first, so I'm also really anxious! C'mon brain, please end the suspense! Make me able to write more! I'm dying not being able to write!!!

Oh yeah, also: Any critiques, anyone? I'd like to know what to improve on.

[Joypaw]

Hm...If I were extremly strict,I suppose I might suggest adding abit more detail.that's all I can think of. Like,when you say 'in places that told me he wanted to growl' You could put the exact places.Other than that,I see nothing wrong.

[wolves+horses]

Oh, yeah, I suppose not too many people are accustomed to the feeling of growling... (I'm a wolf therian, so I sometimes growl under my breath when I'm upset... It also makes me love writing about lycans/werewolves, because I feel like I've sort of had 'experience' in the realm of feeling wolfish, you could say. X3)

I am working on the story; I've come up with some more, but it's on paper, and I feel like I should add more than one paragraph at a time, so... Sorry for the annoying long wait.

[selenite.]

Thats no problem I can't wait to read the next part!
-Paper

[wolves+horses]

Finally! It feels so good to have gotten more out! *sigh of relief* I added some more.

[Joypaw]

Very good!Your story is comming along very well.

[wolves+horses]

Thanks! I've written a fairly good amount more, but I'm going to wait till tommorow to add it. Sorry for the suspense!

[WolfClimber]

Amanda, it sounds like a professional author : D. I would buy it. keep writing!

[wolves+horses]

Thanks again! That means a lot! And I will! (I know, I should be doing homework right now, but... I'm so exhausted... Probably from Festival [for chorus].) Anyway: Yeah, I have more in mind, so I'll definitely try to work on this whenever I can!