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AWESOME! Can't stop reading.
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Quite good!
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Eh, needs little work.
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This is absolute rubbish. Not coming back.
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Golden Bolt

Postby Kodabomb » Thu Feb 07, 2013 5:51 pm

This is written from Golden Bolt's point of view. Finally getting interesting now....  :twisted: 
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We finally reached the doors of the dungeons after having an encounter with some Fireballs. Grey Quartz gave everyone a shove, and her horn poked into my shoulder very hard.
“Ow!” I yelped, and she growled. I ran into the chamber with the others, and Aqua shut the large wooden doors with her magic.
We all gathered around, with Solar lighting up some torches along the wall, making luminous orange light flicker around the narrow little place.
“OK everypony.” said Lunar, who had somehow become the ‘leader’, despite being rather shy back at the valley camp. “We need to hunt down these tunnels.” She levitated the page she ripped out of the book.
“We know.” Said Solar flatly. 
“Yes, but we don’t where they are.” She whipped at her sister. “We need to try and use magic to snoop them out.” Lunar glanced at Crimson and I. “You guys just… follow. We may need some muscles in the group.” She purred. I stood straight and saluted. Solar giggled.
“I know this spell that might help…” said Aqua. She closed her eyes and her horn made a small light at the end, which looked a lot like the torch spell, but it emitted pulses of green light.
“Cool.” Said Quartz, her eyes wide and sparkling.
“It can help me find what I’m looked for.” She said, opening her eyes. Her horn was still doing the strange spell, and she looked around. I was eager to get going.
“OK, Solar, Bolt, and Quartz you go that way,” Lunar pointed down one dark corridor. "Crimson and Aqua, you guys come with me.” I walked up to Aqua and gave her a hug, then Quartz suddenly galloped down the corridor. Her voice echoed around. 
“Come on, everypony!” she called. Solar and I looked at each other, then charged down the hall. Why wasn’t I with Aqua? I supposed we needed to separate to work better. 
Our hoof-steps sounded very loud, the sound bouncing around everywhere. The hall was very dark, but I didn’t have magic to light it.
“Can somepony give off some light?” I yelled. Solar suddenly threw some fiery magic at more torches again as she galloped, showing my surroundings. Cells. Lots and lots of cells. Scary. Just black, barred holes, so dark and shadowy it made my skin tingle. I didn’t know why they needed so many, but I knew that before Wildfire came to power, the royals barely used them ever. Only to keep criminals before their court trial, and they were kept in far better condition than now. But I supposed every ancient palace had dungeons...
I suddenly saw a light blue glow ahead of us, and Quartz had lit her horn up.
“Quartz, why are you so far up there?” I asked.
“Cause you guys are slow! Hurry up!” she replied in the dark. Solar rolled her eyes. We kept galloping.
It seemed to be a few minutes before the little glowing light stopped moving. We both caught up to her and looked around.
“Why did you stop?” I asked, but she was looking up and down a bare wall at the side of the corridor, using her horn lamp to illuminate it.
“I don’t know.” She muttered, still looking at it. She blew some of her dark red mane out of her face and put her grey hoof upon the wall.
“There can’t be tunnels here.” Said Solar. “Somepony would’ve already found them.”
“For some reason… I doubt that.” She said suspiciously. “Solar, try and used that tracking spell with me, just like Aqua.” She said, glancing at the alicorn.
“Um, OK.” She stuttered. “But neither of us know how.”
“It looked complicated, but easy to do at the same time.” She muttered, getting up on her hind legs to examine the stone wall.
I just stared into space, not knowing what they were talking about. Being very inexperienced with magic I had know clue what they were talking about. “I’ll just… yeah.” I mumbled.
“OK, are you ready?” Quartz asked Solar. The fiery little alicorn nodded, and both of them shut their eyes. Their horns began to glow, then started giving off those little pulses. Wow, they’d done it! Already!
They sighed and opened their eyes. Quartz glanced up at her pulsing blue light and smiled happily. “Cool! I did that!” she said in a proud, boastful tone. 
“OK, picture the tunnels.” Instructed Solar. I watched as they worked away, lighting up the surroundings with light. I soon got bored, not particularly interested in their fancy magic. I walked across the corridor, carefully eyeing the empty cells around me.
I found another wall, just plain solid rock like the other where the mares were. I looked around, not really sure if I was looking for the tunnels or not.
“This spell…. Is supposed to show what you want…. Most….” Strained Quartz from across the hall. “I want those tunnels so…. Bad….Hnnnng!” I watched the blue light fade, as the unicorn ran out of energy. She released and began to pant.
“So… the tunnels aren’t around here?” I said.
“Oh, oh!” cried Solar suddenly. Attention was pointed to her. “It’s leading me!” she tottered across the corridor towards where I stood. Her eyes opened and she looked around on the wall. Suddenly her horn flashed and she spun around. She nearly bumped into me.
The alicorn closed her eyes, letting the horn do the work. For about ten seconds she walked around in circles. I looked away at Quartz, who was waiting for Solar’s energy to stop, not convinced. 
Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my shoulder, and looked around to see that her horn was jabbed into my shoulder.
“It’s here!” she whinnied, opening her eyes. Suddenly they went wide and her pupils shrunk as she spotted that it was me she had bumped into, not the wall.
All of a sudden I heard laughter explode from the other side, and Quartz came into our view.
“Ha! Hahaha!” she giggled. “Are you sure that the tunnels are what you want most, Solar?” she wiped a tear from her eye. "Are you sure it's not your precious Golden Bolt? Ha!" Solar whimpered and her white face flushed red, backing into the corner. 
Abruptly her rump bumped into the stone wall, and I heard a thump. Solar squeaked and jumped away, staring at the spot she touched. Quartz fell silent, sighing away her last hysteric giggle.
I trotted past Solar and put my hoof on the spot the alicorn touched. I pushed. Thump. I pushed harder. Thump. My heart flipped and I looked.
The large rock that I had shoved was moved. But the rest of the walls were solid. Was this the tunnel?
“Bolt!” squealed Solar. “Did you find it?” she stared at the shifted rock excitedly. I smiled and gave another shove. It wedged. Come on, come on! I used by back legs as the power, shoving as hard as I could.
“You can do it Bolt!” yelled Grey Quartz, bouncing. Sweat dripped down my face from under my helmet and I pushed harder and harder.
Clunk. Thump. Scrape. I gasped and gave it a final push, and suddenly the stone was out of my grasp. It fell through the gap, tumbling down. I heard it crash down and roll away, before all was silent and it was so longer in our hearing range.
It was quiet between for a whole minute, before suddenly Quartz yelled. “YOU DID IT!! BOLT!! YOU FOUND IT!!” she hollered, leaping around and around. She threw her hooves around my neck in the tightest hug I’d ever received. I gagged, pulling her hoof off my throat. Solar started squealing in the same manner, and both mares squealed together.
“I’ll get the others!” said Solar, suddenly sending a creepy mind-message. We waited a few minutes, before the surprisingly speedy group suddenly arrived near us. 
“What, what?” demanded Crimson excitedly. 
“He found it! Bolt found the tunnel!” squealed Quartz once again, planting a huge kiss on the surprised Pegasus’s lips.
She broke away and he stood there in shock, before blushing and addressing me. “Well done! Now we have to,” suddenly he stopped as Lunar interrupted.
“Go in…” she muttered. She gulped and nervously looked at the large gap in the wall. 
“OK, everypony ready?” I said bravely, and they all nodded. I looked down the chute, and saw it was a very steep, dark dirt slide. I put my forehooves in and pulled my front half into the entrance, pulling the rest of my body in and sitting in an awkward position. 
“Wait! Bolt, you have to come with me.” Said Aqua, nervously getting in and sitting directly behind me.
“Ready to go?” I asked her. She clung her front hooves around my neck and nodded. I suddenly shuffled to the steep bit and pushed off. 
Straight down. All of a sudden, in an abrupt, sharp movement, we were going down at a remarkably high speed, the tunnel going almost vertically down. Aqua hugged me tighter and screamed at the top of her lungs, and we were almost lying flat. My mane flew around as we shot down under the dungeons. I instinctively reached back and grabbed Aqua around her waist.
I heard another scream and immediately knew Lunar and Solar were coming. Solar was yelling with excitement, and Lunar was just screaming as loud as Aqua.
The tunnel seemed to be going forever and ever, and I began to panic. Were we going to get to the bottom?
“We’re gonna go through the centre of the Earth!” Screamed Aqua. I yelled loudly as the tunnel bent, and we turned a sharp corner. I grunted as I hit the side hard.
Just as I was about to ask Aqua to magically stop us, the ground disappeared from beneath my backside as we suddenly fell down with a thud. We landed on dirt ground, surrounded by darkness.
I helped Aqua up and we looked three metres up to where the tunnel exit was. Suddenly the two alicorn sisters shot out, falling down the high drop to the ground.
“Ow!” yelled Lunar and Solar groaned.
“You guys OK?” Aqua asked her friends, and they nodded. Then abruptly there was a yell and a thud, as Crimson and Quartz tumbled from the tunnel.
I walked over and helped both ponies up, and Quartz shook herself off. 
“Well, are we going to find Aka?” said Solar, making her way across the chamber to another tunnel. This one wasn’t a sharp drop like the other, just a horizontal little tube.
Solar stepped inside, followed by Lunar, Aqua, me, Quartz and Crimson.
We trudged along the stuffy dirt tunnel. It was small and I had to stoop my head. “Anypony here claustrophobic?” I said, addressing all of them. No reply. Good.
A few minutes past before I heard rustling paper as Lunar looked at her book page. “Hmm, the King and Queen needed a little place to hide, right?” she said. “Maybe there’s a cosy chamber that Aka’s in right now.”
“Cosy? Really, Lunar?” said her sister. 
“Mm.” she muttered in reply, concentrating on the script. “Oh, I sure hope we don’t find the skeletons of the Shadows!” she said nervously.
“I bet the skeletons would be rotten by now!” said Crimson. “I mean, a thousand years?”
“Yeah, but there’s no air or animals or insects down here!” replied Lunar, looking down the line to the Pegasus. "And what's wrong with you; skeletons can't rot!" 
“There’s air now.” He said. Lunar’s mouth dropped open in a ‘you’re such an idiot’ expression, before looking back down at her papers.
“Hey, what’s this?” said Solar suddenly. She had found a large rock blocking the end of the tunnel. 
“Push it away!” I said to her. “It’s obviously not a dead end, just a trick.” The white alicorn shrugged and used all her might to shove the stone out of her way. She kept pushing to try and get it out of our walking path, when suddenly he gasped as the rock jerked and tumbled away from her, rolling down the tunnel.
“What? Another drop off??” yelled Solar in frustration. “Ugh, let’s go.” She jumped in and her sister grabbed onto her, before there was a scream from Lunar and they were gone.
“Ready?” asked Aqua over her shoulder. I nodded and she jumped in, me sitting behind her. I pushed and we suddenly dropped, Aqua screeching.
This tunnel was way steeper, and we were almost falling. My rump kept hitting the floor over and over, hurting me. Aqua screamed again as we rounded a bend, and we rocketed down.
Suddenly there was a yell from in front of us. Solar. “Aqua! Put a shield up! Big drop!” she hollered. Aqua gasped and made a green shield bubble around us, just as we came to the end of the chute. We fell, Aqua’s bubble shielding us from the impact. We landed on all four hooves, and she removed the protective force-field.
Obviously Quartz had heard Solar’s instruction, as the last two came out wrapped in a light blue bubble. They landed and she removed it.
I looked around. This chamber was far large than the other. The ceiling stretched upwards, and I guessed it was the living chamber of the two royals. Cosy….
“Hey, look!” exclaimed my marefriend as she sifted her hoof through the dirt. She levitated a silver item out and blew off the dust. 
It was a magnificent silver tiara. It was rather tall with patterns carved into it. There were little light blue and green gems studding it.
“Whoa!” I said, looking at it. “It must have been Queen Naraka’s!”
“This is probably worth millions of gems!” said Solar. “Think, it’s a thousand year old queen’s tiara. Museums, collectors, nobles and just anypony anywhere would give up everything for it!” Lunar looked at her and rolled her eyes.
“What if we gave it to Aka? If we find her and give it to her, she’d be one hundred times more beautiful!” said Aqua.
“Come on, we don’t need to worry about a million gem tiara right now. If we want the Queen to lovely in it, we have to actually find her first.” Said Quartz, heading down another tunnel. I watched as Aqua somehow conjured up a leather saddlebag and put the tiara inside. Lunar put her book page in as well, and we all went down the way Quartz went.
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Storm Cloud

Postby Kodabomb » Fri Feb 08, 2013 9:27 pm

This is written from Prince Storm Cloud's point of view. YOU. WILL. LOVE. IT.
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The forest floor was creepy around my legs. The plants seemed to move, the animals were strange, and the canopy blocked out the fading sun. We had been walking for a few hours through a thick forest. It was getting less likely by the second we's find something, but Sparkle Flame said she definitely knew it was close.
Wildfire, she meant. Wildfire was hidden somewhere within this forest. But why would she want to be in here?
In front of me, Sparkle has her horn lit up with blue magic, and she was trying to search for Wildfire’s mind within the evilness of the forest. It had a way of blocking out the signal she said.
The path through the forest seemed to go forever. I heard a roar in the distance and jumped, but that did not stop the determination of Sparkle. She concentrated extremely hard.
Suddenly the pink alicorn bumped into a tree. “Ow!” she exclaimed. Her magic flashed and failed. “Ugh! Stupid tree!” she cried in frustration, focusing her mind once again as she pressed her hoof against the trunk.
I was getting bored. Sparkle had been in this state for ages, constantly saying we were close. But we hadn’t come across anything.
Suddenly she stopped and her eyes fluttered open. Her magic was still working, and she looked around. “OK, guys. This time, I know she’s here.” Said my sister. Fire-Fighter sniffed in boredom and disbelief. All of a sudden Sparkle Flame took off, charging through the forest off the path.
“Sparkle! Wait!” I called, running after her. I galloped through the scrub, and suddenly I felt a live vine grab my ankle. I zapped it with horn, and followed the speedy princess. 
I was about to get attacked by another evil plant, but I spread my wings and swooped over it, flying fast towards Sparkle Flame.
She took off the ground as well, and Fire-Fighter’s hoof-steps stopped as she shot up next to me. We swooped through the darkness.
Then Sparkle folded her wings in midair and landed with a thud, looking around.  I alighted next to her and Fighter came too.
“Here.” Said my sister. Fighter and I looked at the dark, blank space Sparkle stared, and I lit up my horn. Then I saw it.
Tall, rocky, spooky. The torrents stretched into the sunset sky, and vines clung to the walls. The walls on the side and up the towers were crumbling and smashed, parts of the roof missing and scattered across the ground below. Overgrown trees were all around, covering the enormous palace before us.
“Oh. My. Gosh.” Said Fire-Fighter, her wings dropping to the ground. 
“Sweet Celestia.” I muttered. 
“What in the hay is this doing in the middle of this horrible place?” said Sparkle Flame.
“I don’t know, Miss Magic.” Snapped Fighter. Sparkle gave her a glare.
“Sooo… Wildfire’s in here?” I asked.
“Yup. Well, probably.” Replied Sparkle Flame, walking towards the large doors.
“Sparkle no!” yelled Fighter. “Don’t go in! It’s probably really dangerous.”  
“Well, I suppose, if it’s coming from the danger queen herself.” Muttered the pink princess, stepping back.
“Hey, we’ll all go in together.” I said. I walked up between my two sisters. I opened the doors with my magic and we all walked towards it.

* * *
We fearfully climbed the tall, shattered spiral staircase. I looked out one of the small windows, seeing the stars and moon come out over the black forest.
In a moment we reached the top, and I was scared of what we might find.
It was a small room, probably used as a bedroom. It was dark, crumbly and ancient. Not much was in here, everything had rotted. I wondered who on earth actually lived here in the first place, because the Laheb City Palace was thousands of years old. 
“Nothing! This is the third room we’ve looked in!” cried Fighter in utter frustration, kicking the wall with her hind legs.
“Careful Fighter!” said Sparkle. “This castle could crumble beneath our hooves, and you’re not helping.”
Fighter snorted. “Well, should we search more rooms?”
“OK.” I said. “Come on, let’s go.” I trotted across the room to a large window, got up on the edge and jumped. I swooped from the tower and hovered near it to wait for my sisters. They followed me and we flew to look for another room.
I sighted another small tower and decided to go for it. “You girls go to some other rooms. We’ll split!” I called to them, looking behind me. Fighter saluted and Sparkle nodded, and both soared off.
I swooped down into the window, landing smoothly on my hooves. Just another bedroom. Well, I guessed. This must have been so old, and I didn’t have a clue as to who actually lived in it. It was very strange…
I went across to the flight of spiral stairs and galloped down. I soon found myself in a long, spooky corridor. The moonlight couldn’t reach the room very well, so I lit the partially disintegrated  torches along the wall.
I walked slowly down the hall. My hoof-steps echoed around the stone walls, making it very eerie. I shivered as I came to the end of the corridor. On my right was a wide flight of stairs going up, and on my left there was one going down. The one going downwards probably led to the bottom floor, so I chose it. I jumped down. 
Where was I going to find Wildfire? This was impossible! The castle was huge, and if she knew we were here she would’ve probably already flown away.
The room I came to was a large hall. Probably some sort of entrance hall; I saw another big door. There was just nothing here, it was all rotten, crumbling or vanished. It was just abandoned. Probably such a gorgeous palace in it’s day, now a ruin in the middle of a deadly forest.
I went to the side of the hall and opened the door. A corridor. As I walked in, I suddenly heard the sound of smashing glass and Fighter blasted the window open with her magic. She fluttered down to the floor and gasped as she saw me hidden in the shadows.
“Oh, hi Storm.” He said, approaching me.
“Seen Sparkle?” I asked.
“Nope.” Replied my sister. As we began walking down the corridor, I heard something in my mind.
Storm! Storm! my head shouted. I gasped and looked around. 
“What?” panicked Fighter.
Come quickly! insisted my thoughts. It sounded just like…
“Sparkle Flame?” cried Fighter suddenly. She was getting it too. 
I think I just received my first mind-message. It was quite pathetic that is was my first, to think of it.
“Oh sweet Celestia Sparkle Flame’s in trouble!” I neighed.
You have to come now! On the West side! Meet me on top of the roof! Sparkle Flame yelled into me.
“The West side!” exclaimed Fighter, obviously receiving the same message.
“We’re on the East side. Let’s go!” I said, and we took off out of the smashed window. I flew as fast as I could to where I assumed was the west side of the palace. It was very vast. I dodged a few towers and suddenly spotted a small blue light on top of a guard’s wall on a roof. We soared down to Sparkle Flame.
“Guys! I think I’ve found her!” she said. “I saw an orange glow coming out of a door from down there. It’s probably the Throne Hall. Fire can’t just start in the middle of an empty castle.” 
“ I bet it’s her hair!” said Fighter.
“Her hair?” I gasped. Her hair never used to glow… it was just flowing, fire-like mane. Not real fire.
“Yeah, her hair in actual fire.” Said Fighter, like a little colt describing the latest cool craze.
“Wow.” I muttered.
“Come on.” Said Sparkle quietly, lifting a hoof to her mouth. She fluttered off the wall and down to the courtyard on the other side. Fighter and I followed. The walls were so crumbled, and the large door before us was completely disintegrated.
We stepped over the broken door and made our way along a large corridor. Sparkle stopped at some huge, more intact doors and lifted her hoof to her mouth once again. She pushed the door quietly open, trying not to create a magical glow. We all peered through the gap.
The glow Sparkle mentioned was definitely there. I looked closer and saw it was coming from a big pyramid of steps leading to a magnificent stone carved throne. Looking even closer I saw her.
The Queen of Fire, as her name suited,  perched high atop the throne. My jaw virtually hit the floor as I saw how much my little sister had changed. She was as tall as my mother, with real fire for hair.
“Oh lord.” I muttered, my heart beginning to race for multiple reasons. I was so freaking nervous to face her at that moment.
We all ducked back and quietly tip-toed to the door to whisper a plan. 
“OK, I’ve got an idea.” Said Fighter. “We’ll go to the door and Sparkle Flame will teleport behind her as Storm and I race in.” 
“We’ll fight her horn to horn.” I put in.
“OK! Who needs long plans!” said Fighter impatiently. She trotted silently to the door and we all waited by.
“One.” I said.
“Two.” Whispered Sparkle.
“Three!” yelled Fighter. Sparkle Flame suddenly vanished in a puff of blue flame as Fighter and I galloped in. I skidded to a halt in the centre of them room as Sparkle appeared again behind the throne where Wildfire stood.
“NO!” she screamed. I looked close to see tears streaming down her face, dripping onto the floor. She had been… crying? “GET AWAY!” she screeched.
“Wildfire!” yelled Fighter, charging at her. Wildfire reared suddenly as the enraged alicorn charged at her. 
She flapped her huge, spiked wings and flew into the air. Fighter shot a beam of light at her chest, and it hit her. But nothing happened. Fire Fighter gasped and backed away, her pupils shrinking and her ears flopping back. Wildfire shouted and blasted Fighter with her own magic, narrowly missing my frightened sister. I yelled at Wildfire and put my wings up, stepping in front of Fighter.
“Stop!” screamed Sparkle Flame. Her eyes turned white and flames erupted from the corners of them, as she blasted some dark magic at Wildfire. Knowing it was horrible magic, she dodged it, shooting one back. 
Sparkle screeched as she ducked behind the throne pyramid, the fiery magic shattering part of it, sending rock soaring. As she was distracted I tried, but Wildfire was too quick. She reflected the spell, sending it rocketing back. It exploded upon the floor, making a crater.
“Stop! Stop!” yelled Fighter, not knowing what to do. Wildfire laughed wickedly, flying higher. Her horn suddenly caught on fire and she spun around, creating a huge circle of flames around us all.
“Ha! Hahaha!” she laughed evilly, landing and folding her wings. “You think you can defeat me?” she purred.
“Your army’s being destroyed as we speak!” I snarled, stepping forward. 
“But I’m not, am I dear brother?” she said, stepping towards me. Fighter gasped.
“Storm…” she warned.
“Stay back.” Hissed Wildfire, pointing her horn. Fighter whimpered. Suddenly the fire queen lit up her horn and it seized Fire-Fighter. She screamed in agony, her voice ripping through the room.
“NO!” I yelled. Wildfire just laughed.
“Bow to me, sister.” She hissed very quietly. Fighter screamed again as her front hooves collapsed beneath her, forcing her to kneel at her wicked sister’s hooves.
“Stop it!” yelled Sparkle Flame, running forward. Wildfire spun around and shot a jet of magic at her, which hit her square in the chest. She screeched and fell, curling up in a ball panting.
“Wildfire! Stop!” I yelled, seeing my sisters both on the floor crumbling in defeat. Tears leaked from my eyes and spilled down my cheeks.
“Why? We’re having fun!” cackled Wildfire.
“Just STOP!” I yelled, the tears streaming down faster. I’d never been so scared and angry.
The emotions began piling up inside me. I wanted to scream, run, blast, hide, cry, die or something. It all got cramped up in my head, my chest. I suddenly felt a lurch in my gut as it all suddenly exploded. My eyes flew open, creating a blinding light. I spread my wings as the power burst from every inch of me. I heard a scream, as though it was distant.
And then it all stopped.
I shut my eyes and collapsed. I curled up upon the ground like my sisters. I panted for a moment. That was exhausting. But what happened? What kind of magic was that?
I stood up. Both Fighter and Sparkle were unconscious. I looked around for Wildfire, but she was nowhere to be seen. 
I walked around, looking for her. Suddenly I spotted something white.
I ran over and saw Wildfire. She was sprawled out upon the singed floor, her mane not crackling and glowing anymore. But she was still in her evil state.
Suddenly I saw a huge orange glow before my face. I gasped and leapt back, watching the circle of flames get bigger. It suddenly grabbed hold of Wildfire. It engulfed her unconscious body in it’s ribbons of light, licking her up.
I suddenly heard myself yell out. “WILDFIRE!”
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Wildfire

Postby Kodabomb » Sat Feb 09, 2013 4:23 pm

This is written from Princess/Queen Wildfire's point of view. This one you will freaking adore.
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‘Wildfire. Wildfire. Wildfire.’
A voice echoed around my head. It was eerie and strange and distant.
‘Wildfire. Wildfire. Wildfire.’
It sing-song. Very odd... All in my head… a dream?
My eyes flew open and I looked around. I was in a completely white room. I looked down at my hooves and neck and saw they were bare, and felt no tiara or Jewel upon my head. I subconsciously brushed over my forehead.
I stood and glanced left and right. My heart beat fast. Where was that coming from?
‘Wildfire. Wildfire. Wildfire.’
The voice sang around. A female voice. I began to get scared. I shuddered.
“Who’s there?” I cried out. My voice echoed just as the creepy voice in my head did. But there were no other sounds. I was getting very concerned now.
Wildfire.” Said the voice again. But it sounded outside of my head. I stared in front of me at the continuous white. “I’m here.” I gasped and spun around.
I gagged a choking scream as I saw a figure before me. An alicorn, blacker than the night sky. She looked like shadow, with no features or shape. Her eyes were white and pupil-less, and her mane flowed around her looking exactly like a shadow.
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“Who are you?” I whispered fearfully, scared but intrigued
I am a spirit. I am here to speak to you in your unconscious form.” Purred the shadow.
“Unconscious? So it’s a dream? Oh, thank goodness…” I muttered.
Oh, don’t be happy, Princess Wildfire.” Said the Shadow Spirit. “If you do not listen to me, I will not let you wake. You will be floating in this eternal dreamland forever.”
I gasped. “What? So, you’ll kill me?” I whimpered.
Yes. That’s a way of putting it.” She said. I gasped again. 
“Well… where’s my body?” I whispered.
You are in the place you saw last. In the old palace.” Replied the Shadow Spirit. She came towards me but I backed away. “But that is not important right now. I must ask you something.”
There was a pause, and I gulped, dreading what it would be. “What?”
I need to know; who are you, Wildfire?” she purred. Now I was confused. What? I gave her a questioning expression. “Who are you, deep down?”
I stood straight. “A worthy queen of this Empire. Nopony will ever be as great as me.” I replied.    
Are you sure? That’s not how I see you. Yes, you are in your favourite form. But right now I see you as the old Wildfire. The proper Wildfire. You are a fake.”
“What? I am not!” I retaliated, disgusted.
Yes, you are. What do you doubt me? Spirits know all.” She hissed, voice fading with a slur.
Suddenly the whiteness disappeared from around us. We were lit only by a small spotlight. In front of me there appeared a mirror. I peered in.
Nothing. There was nopony in there.
But then something appeared. It was fuzzy at first, then it came clear. It was me. Beautiful, tall, regal. I spread my big wings and looked at them proudly.
“Are these fake?” I said to her rhetorically with a smirk.
The Spirit suddenly nodded to the mirror and I looked back at it. The reflection had changed. It was… me. Old me. Small, pretty, with lovely orange and yellow hair, blue eyes, and small, dainty wings. I stood there for a moment, mesmerised. 
Who is the true Wildfire?” Purred the spirit. I looked around to see another mirror near the current one. The first had my younger looking reflection, the second my taller figure.
I stared. What was this Shadow Spirit asking? If I didn’t answer right I’d be here for eternity.
Might I remind you that if you choose one answer, and go with the other in reality, you’ll die too. Please, Wildfire, choose wisely.”
My thoughts were messing with me. I couldn’t think. Who was the real Wildfire? Who did I really want to be? I couldn’t penetrate my deep thoughts, they were locked away.
“I.. can’t,” I whispered. 
Yes, you can, Princess. And I can help guide you.” Purred the Shadow Spirit. She suddenly stepped away and vanished into the darkness outside my spotlight.
“No! Don’t go!” I whinnied, charging after her. As my hooves touched the darkness the spotlight behind me vanished, and I was thrust into blackness.
“Help! Spirit! Come back!” I cried. Tears spilled out of my eyes suddenly and I fell to the floor, crying.
Now, now. Don’t cry. I’m still here. I’m going to show you some pictures.” Soothed the familiar voice. I looked up, not standing, as a large vision appeared before me. I furrowed my brow.
I saw something. It was me as a young filly. I was playing with my teenage siblings. We were in the gardens, practising our magic. I was pulling a branch from a tree. It snapped and I held it before me, looking at it and my magic in pure delight. 
I felt happiness and longing well up inside of me. 
The vision disappeared and another came up. It was my mother and I. I was little, curled up beneath her wing as she read me a story. She closed the book, kissed my forehead, and we both fell asleep.
I felt my hoof reach out, wanting to touch Aka. I wanted to hold her close… 
But it disappeared again and I curled up. Another appeared before my eyes. It was our family, upon a large balcony overlooking the city. Ponies beneath us cheered and we all waved. Storm Cloud lifted me onto his back and I giggled, hugging him. I cried out and waved to our adoring subjects.
I felt like crying. I wanted them back so bad….
Am I helping you Wildfire?” whispered the Spirit. I felt my head nod unsurely. 
Another image came up. But it was different. I saw a short picture flash. It was me on the throne, my eyes red and my body tall. I had a wicked look on my face. Then another vision came after, showing a mare in her living room. She had an anxious look upon her tired face, and suddenly the door opened. A small colt walked in. His eyes were red and puffy, his legs wobbling. His saddle bag fell off and suddenly the foal began to cry. Tears poured out from his eyes and his distraught mother leapt from her chair and scooped up the colt. She cradled him, and she too began to cry. 
I felt my eyes water just like that mare. I choked and felt the pain rising up inside of me. What did I do? That poor family! I had ruined the school, tortured the foals….
I sobbed loudly and felt an ice-cold hoof on my shoulder. I looked up and saw the Spirit. 
Suddenly another picture appeared. It was my three beloved maids; Moon Glitter, Rose Flame and Petal. They were getting brutally dragged down the dark dungeons chamber by Fireball guards. The mares tried to cling together, crying. They screamed for each other, as the Fireballs threw them into separate cells and locked the barred doors. They sobbed and cried, trying to reach each other.
“No…” I whispered, tears spilling onto the floor. “No….”
Yes, Princess. You did this to your good friends.” Purred the Spirit. I kept my eyes locked on the next vision.
It was a young mare walking down the tidy streets of Maredura. Her saddlebag was bulging full of gems, and she happily walked into her home. She opened the door, lifted off her bag and placed it on the table, the gems spilling out. She looked excited to show her coltfriend. She began calling out for him. Her smile was delightful to see as she kept calling for her coltfriend. The mare walked into the next room, looking around. Her smiled wavered, wondering where he was. He was not in the living room. She went to the staircase, called up it. She trotted up, still looking. She carefully opened a door and peered in. The mare then screamed. Her eyes went wide, her pupils dilated dramatically. Her ears flopped back as she looked at the sight upon their bedroom floor. Her coltfriend. Lying there, in a pool of blood. It spilled everywhere, all over the carpet. The stallion’s eyes were wide open and blank, his mouth dangling open too. Her eyes suddenly exploded with tears, and she screamed. She screamed and screamed, she hollered and cried. She collapsed in a heap near him, sobbing dreadfully.
My mouth hung open at the sight. I breathed in chokes, the tears flowing faster than ever.
“WHAT HAVE I DONE?” I screamed. “I killed this mare’s coltfriend! He’s gone forever! They’re all gone forever!” I cried, sobbing hard on the icy black floor.
Yes, you hired hitmares. Was that really a good idea? Is that what you really want?” soothed the Shadow. I screamed and wrapped my hooves around her front leg, crying harder than ever.
“NO! This is not what I want! I never want to see it again! I’m a horrible pony! I don’t deserve to live! Kill me, please!” I cried.
No. I have something else to show you. I can’t kill you if you see this.” She whispered.
I looked back up. I saw a strange vision. Flames. Lots and lots of flames. I saw that they were in the old castle. I looked further around and I noticed it was the circle of flames, and inside were my siblings. They were all looking at something, crying. I looked very close to see... my body. My white body, getting licked by the flames. It wasn’t burning, but they were all crying. I knew they could escape that fire circle easily. They had wings. And horns. But they were staying, because I was there.
“They… want me?” I whispered. I sniffled and stood up, coming close to the flaming vision. I looked into it with longing. “But, I'm awful! I killed hundreds of ponies and destroyed the Empire. However can my siblings love me?”
Because you’re their sister. You deserve to live, so I will make you pick the right decision. That brings us to our first question.”  Said the spirit, standing by me. I looked at her. “Who is the true Wildfire, and who do you really want to be?”
I gaped. I knew the answer, I just couldn’t say it. 
“I…. I want to be…. The old Wildfire. Real Wildfire. Take me back to reality, Spirit. Take me to my family, let me make everything right…” I begged. I looked at her with my puffy, blood-red eyes. I probably looked just like the colt in the vision.
Very well.” Purred the Shadow Spirit.” Her black horn suddenly lit up with blinding white magic, filling my vision with pure white light.
Suddenly my world vanished.
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Postby Kodabomb » Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:14 pm

This is written from Princess/General Fire-Fighter's point of view. 
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My tears burned my face along with the flames. My whole face stung. My heart was empty. My soul, destroyed.
Was Wildfire really gone? I though we had a chance to bring her back. I loved my sister so much as her old self, but both her evil and good form were gone now.
My older brother and sister came along and we embraced, watching Wildfire’s body lie in the flames. We couldn’t get her out. She was too far in, and that fire was magically enchanted. We’d all die too.
Our family was destroyed. I couldn’t bear thinking about living like we did back when we were young, so I wanted to live in this place for the rest of my life. Living in the palace would bring back too much.
Soon I decided that enough was enough. We’d have to get over it. I turned away from the others and walked towards the throne on the other side of the flaming circle.
“Wait.” I suddenly heard Sparkle Flame say. “There’s something wrong.” 
“Of course there’s something wrong, she’s freaking dead!” I yelled back, my flare of temper lashing out.
“No, Fighter, calm down.” She replied. I turned back around and walked up to them. “Look closely at her.”
I looked into the flames and saw Wildfire body still. It wasn’t gone, glowing, vanishing, moving or anything unusual.
“Now tell me; how long do you think her body’s been in there for?” she asked, looking at me. I kept staring.
“About half an hour… why?” I asked her suspiciously.
“Don’t you think that if she’d been in there for half an hour the body wouldn’t even be there?” she said. Both Storm and I looked at her in surprise.
“Wow… you’re right!” I exclaimed. “So, she’s not dead?”
“Maybe not… if we can all figure out a spell to get rid of the flames, we may have a chance of saving her.” Said Sparkle, thinking hard.
A few minutes passed, before suddenly she seemed to have it. “Got it! I’ll start, and you guys try and copy my magic energy.” She said. The Princess closed her eyes and here horn glowed blue. I shut my eyes too and tried to pick it up. I felt the magic rise up inside of me, bursting from my horn. Storm Cloud’s horn glowed green and we stepped toward each other. All three horns touched. I felt the magic get stronger and stronger, the whole spell bonding together.
It suddenly exploded, throwing a rainbow of light out. I flashed my eyes open and watched as the magic killed the enchanted fire. It shrank and shrank, and I pushed harder. My powers were overwhelming me.
Suddenly Sparkle yelled. “Stop!” she cried. I cut off my magic all of a sudden, causing me to topple over.
“D-Did it work?” asked Storm. 
“Oh my stars it did!” squealed Sparkle Flame. She leapt around, looking at how effective the spell was. I looked down and noticed the floor wasn’t even burned black. It must have only been effective towards living things.
But not Wildfire. I whinnied and ran over. She was lying there, her legs still sprawled out and her eyes shut. I put my hoof upon her chest. 
I felt a heartbeat. She was alive!
“She’s here! Wildfire’s alive!” I cried to the others. They galloped over and looked. But I noticed she wasn’t breathing. I was creeped out.
We waited a few moments, just for something to happen. I lay down near her and looked at her face. What would happen? Was she going to wake? The others came down too and I looked at them desperately.
Please… wake up… 
Even if she was still evil, we could turn her back. We could do something…
“Everypony put your horn on her.” Instructed Sparkle Flame quietly. She was so good at magic. What would she do now?
It was the rainbowness again. Her horn glowed blue, mine glowed orange, and Storm’s glowed green. I felt the energy slowly rise again, filling me with light. Our magic swirled together, creating a beautiful rainbow aura. We all then stood up in synchronisation, and I threw my head back. The happiness flooded through my whole body, bursting out of my horn.
Sparkle Flame threw her head downwards, her horn once again touching Wildfire. We all did it too, and the light grabbed her body. It lifted her into the air, a colourful ball of light wrapping her up. I watched as her white eyes flew open, her fiery hair swirling around her body…
I was abruptly blinded, and I shut my eyes. It was overpowering, I didn’t have enough magic.
Abruptly my vision left and I fell to the ground. I heard two thumps as the others did too. I panted heavily, exhausted by the energy that I had completely used up.
“Everypony… O…K?” I asked, choked.
“Yes…” muttered Sparkle.
“Mm.” replied Storm. I stood on shaky legs, helping the others up.
“Where’s Wildfire?” asked Storm Cloud. Silence for a moment.
“There!” cried Sparkle Flame. I gasped. She charged over to the base of the throne pyramid, where I saw a crumpled body. 
Breathing.
We all gasped together and collapsed down near her. It was old Wildfire! Small, slim body, beautiful yellow and orange hair, same orange jewellery.
“Come on, Wildfire!” begged Storm, pushing her shoulder with his blue hoof.
“Wake up!” I said.
Then her eyes opened the tiniest bit. I furrowed my brow. They opened a little more, and blinked. I looked at her.
All of a sudden they flew open further, pupils shrinking. Her eyes were blue! She gasped and tried to sit up, put her leg slipped. Sparkle Flame put her head beneath her chin to stop her falling.
“Wildfire! You’re back!” I exclaimed quietly.
“No… but you hate me… I’m a horrible pony…” whispered Wildfire, clearly quite distressed. “Shadow Spirit! It’s a dream!” 
Now I was confused. Who was the Shadow Spirit? 
“We don’t hate you, Wild!” said Sparkle Flame, nuzzling her. “We love you! You’re our sister!” I nodded in agreement.
“I killed so many ponies… the kingdom will never want to face me again…” whispered the Princess, her eyes welling up. “They’ll want me dead!” she sobbed.
“Nopony wants you dead!” I exclaimed. 
“Aka… she’s… in the tunnels.” Whispered Wildfire.
“The tunnels?” I asked, confused. Weren’t Aqua and the others looking for her? Maybe they were down there too.
“Yes. Under the dungeons. It’s… a long story.” Muttered my sister.
“We need to go now.” Said Sparkle Flame. “We need to get the others out of there!”
“Wait, we need the Jewel!” said Storm, standing. “Where is it?”
Sparkle Flame looked around. Then she gasped. “Over there! On the floor.”
Storm Cloud ran over to where the she pointed. He picked up the Jewel.
“We need to put it somewhere safe.” I said, standing and walking over to him
“Don’t put it on your forehead!” cried Wildfire.
“I know!” said Sparkle. She quickly conjured up a saddlebag out of thin air and placed it on Storm’s armoured back. Storm placed the Jewel inside and folded his wings over the bag. 
“Well,” I said nervously. “Are we ready to go?” I smiled.
“Yep!” said Storm. Sparkle Flame got to her hooves and helped Wildfire up. She seemed fragile and nervous. “Don’t worry, Wild, you’ll be fine. If we find Mother everything will be perfect. She’ll use the Jewel to bring back her power and destroy the remaining Fireballs. She and Father will continue to rule, and we’ll be the respected royals again.”
“Just don’t try and take over the Empire this time, OK?” joked Storm. Wildfire smiled nervously.
We walked to the door, crossed the hall and exited the big door into the courtyard. I spread my wings, and the others did too. We took off, swooping into the starry sky.
We flew side-by-side, soaring over the dark forest. It was on the other side of the mountain, and over it was Laheb City. 
The wind whipped my face. I was so calm and happy right now. Wildfire was back. The kingdom would soon be restored.
But I was worried too. Was Mother OK? If what Wildfire said was true, that she was down in some tunnels, was she still alive? My gut lurched. I sure hoped so.
We reached the top of the mountain and soared over the rocky hillside. Over it was the magnificent view of the valley in which Laheb City lay, little lights twinkling from the town.
I did a small spin, pushing the bad thoughts from my mind. It was going to be OK. We had the Jewel, my sister was safe, nothing more could really go wrong.
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Postby Kodabomb » Fri Feb 15, 2013 7:15 pm

This is written from Grey Quartz's point of view.
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I was practically dancing on the tips of my hooves with nervousness and excitement. We were so deep underground by now. I knew we were getting close to Aka. I knew it…
For about five minutes Aqua’s horn had been alight, pulsing with energy trying to find the Queen. She’d dragged us down all kinds of tunnels, and we’d even blasted away multiple walls. But we’d found nothing except dirt, rock, and a few little items buried in the floor. 
Aqua’s saddlebag was lumpy with all kinds of things that Solar insisted on keeping. Some of it wasn’t even valuable.
“Oh, guys!” the unicorn suddenly yelled. All ears towards her. “I’ve got something!” 
“Ugh, you’ve said that seven times already!” I snorted.
“But it’s stronger!” she galloped down a small chamber to her left. There were so many tunnels. Why did the King and Queen need them all? We all followed her slowly and unenthusiastically while she cantered along. I was excited but Aqua had been doing this the whole time.
Suddenly I heard a thump and saw that Aqua had accidentally bumped into a wall.
“Are you OK?” asked Bolt.
“Yeah, but there’s a wall in the way.” Aqua replied grumpily, whacking the dirt with her hoof.
“Is the magic strong?” asked Lunar, standing beside her.
She closed her eyes and concentrated. The pulses were huge, reaching out and throwing beams at the walls.
“It would seem so.” I said flatly.
Suddenly there was a bang, a flash of light, and Aqua’s magic snapped off. “What? No!” she yelled at her horn. “Come on! Light!” she snorted.
“Calm down!” said Bolt.
“How? My magic isn’t working!” the blue unicorn was using all her strength, her eyes tight shut. She grunted, trying to force it to work.
I watched as a few tiny sparks came out of the very tip, and her horn flashed a little, but nothing happened.
“It’s not… working.” Said Lunar suspiciously.
“Well duh, magic fails all the time.” I said.
“Yes, but she was going really well!” replied the alicorn, looking at Aqua. “And she’s extremely high in her studies.”
“You didn’t attend a magic school, did you Quartz?” said Solar with a raised eyebrow.
“No!” I said, my face growing red. “But she’s been going for ages.”
“Ugh, enough about fancy magic!” complained Crimson. “Let’s get rid of this wall!” 
“OK.” Said Lunar.
“One, two, three!” yelled Solar, blasting the wall with a big jet of orange light. There was a bang, and when the dust cleared I looked eagerly at the spot she shot at.
“What?” I said in frustration. There was just a hole. “Why’s it so thick?"
“I’ll… try again,” said Solar. She shot some more magic at the hole, which only dug a deeper one.
“Maybe… combine our magic?” I said. I heard Crimson and Bolt groan.
“And if it doesn’t work, we’ll go back up the tunnel and try another route.” replied Aqua. 
“One, two, three!” said Solar again, and I let my horn explode with blue magic. When I heard multiple bangs and thumps, I released and looked around.
There was a hole alright. And it went into a chamber.
“Guys! We did it!” I cried.
“But what if Aka’s not in there? We’ll need to find more tunnels.” Moaned Crimson.
“Oh, stop your whining.” I snapped at him, climbing up into the hole and leaping through to the other side.
“Aaagh!” I suddenly yelped in surprise. My insides left me as my hooves didn’t touch solid ground. I plummeted towards the ground, which I couldn’t even see. I threw up a force-field around me and suddenly hit the ground, safely protected by my blue bubble. I released my magic. Then I heard a voice above me.
“Quartz! Quartz? Are you OK?” yelled Crimson.
“Where are you?” asked Lunar.
“Down here! I’m OK everypony!” I yelled back. “Put up a force-field, it’s a huge drop!” 
Suddenly there was a yell as Aqua fell down. I saw a green glow fall down as she came to the ground. 
She released and lit up her horn, trotting over to me.
“Wow.” She muttered, looking up at the hole.
Suddenly I saw another orange bubble as Solar plummeted down, then dark blue as Lunar followed. Crimson and Bolt swooped out safely, flying down to join us.
“Everypony good?” I said.
I received several mumbles and nods. “Let’s explore the cave! It’s must be pretty damn big…”
I lit up my horn as well as Solar and Lunar, and we walked along through the dark. There seemed to be no walls before us, and the ceiling must’ve been high judging by our drop down.
“That other chamber definitely wasn’t the living chambers then…” muttered Bolt, staring around. "This is like a freaking cavern!"
I broke off from the group and wandered into the blackness, my lit horn guiding me. Was Aka in here? I searched around on the floor, trying to look for something.
The dirt was surprisingly soft and aerated beneath my hooves. Had somepony been in here? I shuddered.
Suddenly my mane ruffled as a breeze blew. I lifted my head. Aaah, wind.
Wait, wind? In here? I stood stock-still and looked around slowly. Where was that coming from? We were too far down to get a breeze from any chamber that may lead into the open. And there probably wasn’t one?
I heard an eerie sound, that whistled through my ears. I shuddered again and crouched. What was that? I was scared. I heard a scream that sounded very distant, echoing like a ghostly cry of pain... 
“Help!” I yelled.
“Quartz! Are you OK?” I heard an echoing voice from across the chamber. Aqua. 
“Yeah!” I called back. “I’m fine!”
I looked up and around. Then it hit me.
The ghosts of the Shadows! Maybe they were in here! I didn’t know ghosts existed, but the magic world was unlimited. I was so freaked out, but I tried to slow my racing heart. 
I shook off. I continued walking forward and looking around. No such thing as ghosts. Just an idea aroused by the book article...
Suddenly my light hit something. It wasn’t the floor. It was a very irregular, lumpy shape lying upon the floor. More trinkets to put in the saddlebag? 
I trotted over to it and looked. It was so hard to see. 
Suddenly it moved. I yelled out and jumped back, tripping over a small rock and tumbling onto my back.
I looked suspiciously at the shape. It moved again. I flipped over onto my belly and wriggled cautiously to the spot. I looked closely.
Oh sweet Celestia. Oh my stars. What the freaking hay.
Aka.
Lying there, half-buried in dirt. My breath completely left my body and I choked. I couldn’t yell out to the others… I was so shocked. I reached out with my hoof and touched the faded, dirty coat of her chest. Her rib cage moved again. She was alive and breathing. But she was not well.
I jumped to my hooves and used all the might in my lungs to blow away the dirt from her top half. I saw her head. Her eyes were shut. On her ears, cheek, and shoulder were cuts, and her filthy face was covered in tear stains. She looked a wreck.
“Aka?” I whispered. “Aka….Are you there?”
I watched. No response. Her breathing was so jerky. I didn’t know any healing spells!
“Help! Help! Aqua! Solar! Lunar!” I yelled, sending small fireworks of light from my horn to signal them over.  “Help!”
“Quartz! We’re coming!” yelled Crimson. I saw their little lights in the dark and heard thundering hooves. Soon the group reached me. They panted and looked at me for an answer. I stepped aside.
“Oh sweet mother of Celestia!” yelled Solar. She ran past me and stared at the tattered, unconscious alicorn on the ground. Aqua squeaked in mixed emotions and lay down near her, giving her body a complete survey.
“Quartz you… found her.” breathed Lunar, looking at me in awe. I smiled awkwardly.
“We wouldn’t have found her in such a big place, but you did it!” squealed Solar, hugging me. 
“Yeah guys, but it’s not over.” Said Bolt. “She’s not even awake! And who knows what’s going on out there…” he looked towards the ceiling. I glanced up too.
“I know something that may help wake her…” whispered Aqua. She stood and closed her eyes. Her horn glowed green, and then emitted beautiful ribbons of light, shining and shimmering. They swirled down onto Aka, wrapped her up in a transparent blanket. Suddenly they faded, and disappeared in a snap of glittering sparks. I looked at the unicorn they came from, and she opened her eyes.
“Did it work?” asked Crimson, coming forward.
I watched the Queen’s chest rise again. It fell. Jerkily. Then again. Better. She kept breathing a couple more times, getting smoother and smoother.
“It is!” exclaimed Solar in a half whisper.
I then saw Aka’s leg shift. I gasped. Her breathing was smooth and steady, and abruptly she stirred. The alicorn groaned in pain, and her eyes slowly fluttered open. Aqua got down beside her again.
“Aka?” she whispered. “Are you OK?” Aka’s eyes shifted to the pony over her, and they looked pleased. But they weren’t open very far.
“Wake up Aka please…” said Lunar.
“Who….” Groaned the Queen. “What….”
“Aka, it’s me!” pushed Aqua.
“Aqua?” she groaned. “Really? How…..”
“Come on, stay up!” I muttered.
I saw a dark purple-blue light next to me and noticed that Lunar was performing the same spell as Aqua did. The rays went over to where the Queen lay, and touched her.
She stirred further and lifted her head. “Aqua? Golden Bolt?” she moaned. “Crimson Star? Grey Quartz?” 
“Yes! Your majesty it’s us!” I cried, bending over.
Aka shifted and lay with her head up and front leg outstretched, looking at us in surprise, suspicion and delight all at the same time.
“How did you find me?” she asked, her voice broken and croaky.
“We went looking! It was Lunar’s idea, she thought of tunnels beneath the palace.” Replied Solar, putting one hoof around her sister’s neck. The black alicorn blushed.
“And we found you!” I cried in delight.
“We’re so happy you’re alive.” Agreed Aqua, smiling. 
“I was sure I was dead.” Said Aka with the slightest chuckle.
“How long have you been in here?” asked Crimson.
Aka sighed. “Since Wildfire decided I was a threat. My magic is completely useless now, she cursed me.
“Can you reverse the spell?” asked Lunar quietly. She’d gone shy again.
“Probably, but I wasn’t able to. You know, no magic.” Replied Aka, shakily standing. “Does anypony know what’s happening outside? Where’s Wildfire?”
“We have no idea.” Replied Solar awkwardly. 
“Sparkle Flame, Fire-Fighter and Storm Cloud went looking for her earlier.” said Aqua.
“Aqua, can you send a mind-message?” asked Bolt. Aqua nodded reluctantly, and closed her eyes. 
“Wow, you can do that?” said the Queen in awe. “Aren’t you Sparkle Flame’s student?”
“Oh yes, she’s the best unicorn in the Empire!” boasted Bolt proudly. “Taught by the best, becoming the best.”
“I will agree.” Said Aka, looking at Aqua, who looked very concentrated. “Sparkle Flame is very good; I am powerful and much older than her, but Sparkle has talent. Far more than what I had at her age. And if she’s teaching this filly, Aqua will become extremely good.”
Suddenly Aqua grunted, the green light going out. She panted. “I… can’t. We’re too deep, and the weird magic down here is meddling with mine.” There were a few groans of disappointment.
“Oh, your highness,” said Lunar. She used her magic to open Aqua’s bag and draw out the beautiful silver tiara. “We found this and though it would be nice for you.” She blushed and backed into the dark.
Aka grabbed it in her magic and held it before her. “Wow. It’s… beautiful!” she exclaimed. “Where did it come from?”
“In the tunnels. We think it may have been Queen Naraka’s all those years ago.” Replied Solar, her eyes sparkling as she stared at the trinket.
“Naraka’s?” said Aka. “Wow… she was one of my ancestors. I knew somepony lived down here… I heard the tale from my mother, but I didn’t know it was true or that it was Naraka and Matelli’s.”
“So… you knew about the tunnels all along?” I asked. 
“Yes… but as I said I didn’t know they were real.” admitted Aka.
“Now, how will we get out of here to find the others?” I asked. 
“Well, I could probably get us out if somepony reverses the curse.” Replied Aka, looking up at the roof.
“I’ll give it a go…” said Lunar, stepping forward. Aka stood still and closed her eyes. Lunar sighed bravely and lit up her horn. The magic swirled, going around and around. She threw back her head, then back down, shooting the magic at Aka. It hit her, filling her with light. I put my hoof over my face. Lunar was trying so hard to put magic in a powerful alicorn Queen…. 
Suddenly it stopped, and I looked at Aka. She stood straight and tall, and the cuts were gone. She opened her eyes and her horn lit up.
“My magic! It works!” she cried. “Thank you so much, fair Lunar!” Suddenly the Queen’s magic exploded from her horn, and I watched the magnificent green lightning bolt shoot to the roof, blasting it away. Aka’s mane swirled around and she looked simply amazing as the power surged from her. Her face was determined.
Then she spread her huge wings and lifted herself off the ground. She flew upwards towards the ceiling where her magic was breaking away.
Bolt and Crimson flew up, following. I watched Aqua create a beautiful stream of green glitter and mist, which went beneath her feet and lifted her up. Lunar and Solar copied, and I gave it a go.
I used all of my magical strength to lift myself up. I looked down at my hooves and saw the beautiful substance making me fly. I didn’t know it was possible. 
I flew up with the others, as Aka continued to create a tunnel out.
Suddenly I heard a bang and Aka magic went out.
“I’ve done it!” she cried to us. “Let’s get out of here!”
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Aka

Postby Kodabomb » Sat Feb 16, 2013 3:04 pm

This is written from Queen Aka's point of view. 
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I shot towards the surface, beating my wings as hard as I could. I could see a tiny flicker of light at the top of the tunnel, beckoning me to freedom.
I was so desperate to escape after my imprisonment. I was nearly dead. I had no food or water or magic, but being an alicorn I had slightly prolonged survival without those things.
Suddenly my head burst out of the hole. I filled my lungs with fresh night air, and spread my wings as far as I could as I shot into the sky. A rush of joy and relief filled my body, a feeling so amazing it was uncontrollable. 
I yelled out in delight, spinning around. I swooped down and landed as the other ponies came out, all clearly relieved as well.
“We did it!” yelled Solar, leaping around. “We’re out and we’ve got the Queen!”
I looked around and saw that the castle walls were about four hundred metres from where we all stood, and that we were in the city botanic gardens. We were surrounded by beautiful trees and bushes decorated with flickering orange lights.
The moonlight shone down upon us, making me feel so happy. But where were my children?
“We need to go to the palace. Now.” I said. The others all looked at me, standing still after all their celebrating.
“Yes, your majesty.” Said Grey Quartz, bowing down before me. The others all copied. I smiled.
I spread my wings and flew up above the canopy. Crimson, Bolt, and the two little alicorn sisters followed, then the two unicorns galloping on their magic mist.
“Why didn’t you fly when we came up the tunnel?” I heard Aqua ask Solar and Lunar.
“Magic mist is awesome, that’s why.” replied Solar. I giggled along with Aqua. Then I flapped my wings and shot towards the castle, the other little ponies chasing behind me. 
I flew as fast as I could, the castle coming closer and closer. Soon we wet right there and I swooped over the wall, soaring over the garden. I went upwards, going towards a small tower. I went towards it, threw the balcony doors open with my magic, and fluttered into the room.
I landed swiftly and heard hoof-steps as the others came too. I turned to make sure they were all there, then charged to the other side of the room to the staircase.
I ran down, my fast-paced hooves echoing. I jumped and landed in a corridor, where I saw a door at the other end. 
I galloped to it, stopping suddenly. I put my hoof to my lips as the other six came up near me and pushed the door open with my hoof. I peeked into the room.
It was the breakfast hall. But it was awful. It was completely tipped upside down; the table was broken in two, the beautiful statues lay in millions of pieces, the tapestries were burnt and torn, and the magnificent blue curtains were smouldering in a heap upon the marble floor. 
“What is going on?” I exclaimed, aghast staring around at the mess.
“Er… just a big battle between the deadly Fireballs and the soldiers in the palace, your highness.” Replied Quartz hurriedly. My ears flopped.
“What?” I cried. They all looked at me in surprise.
“It’s true! And you need to stop it!” said Bolt, a bit stressed. I blinked.
I drew in a deep breath and sighed. “OK. But I need my children. I hope they have Wildfire, not the other way round…” I decided to teleport. I thought of my bedroom, wondering what state it was in. 
“My room, now everypony.” I said, before disappearing.
I choked and then landed on the floor. I was still standing.
I turned around. Wow… it was fine! I looked over to where my door was. It was gone. Just a solid wall. Wildfire must’ve sealed it off.
Suddenly there was a couple of bangs as the other ponies tumbled down onto the floor on the other side of the room. I saw Quartz standing near my dresser, with Crimson lying awkwardly on it.
“Put me in a good spot next time Quartz, won’t you?” he grumbled, getting down and shaking. 
“Queen Aka, my sister’s sending a message to Princess Sparkle Flame.” Solar said to me in a very polite manner. 
“Oh, thank you Lunar.” I said to the concentrating alicorn, as she tried to contact my daughter.
A moment passed and she suddenly released, almost tripping over. Solar caught her.
“We need to wait right here. They’re coming.” She said.
My heart flipped. I was going to see them again! Maybe Wildfire.
“Did she say anything else?” I asked.
“No, your highness.” Replied Lunar with a bow. I bit my lip.

* * *
After ten minutes of pacing up and down my room, and the others waiting around rather bored, Golden Bolt abruptly ran in from the balcony.
“They’re coming!” he cried, and we all looked at him. “I see them flying over the city!”
“Quick, everypony gather around for them!” I cried. We all lined up and watched the balcony.
All of a sudden I saw some hooves land upon it. I gasped as one by one my beloved children walked in.
Storm Cloud, Sparkle Flame, Fire-Fighter and…
“Wildfire.” I said in awe. I couldn’t believe it. It was Wildfire! Real Wildfire! Standing there, staring at me in terror. She was probably terrified that I’d kill her or something. “Oh my sweet filly!” I cried, running to her. I grabbed her and wrapped my hooves around her neck. Despite all she’d done, I’d missed the real Wildfire more than anything in the whole world, and I was so happy to have her back.
“Wildfire! I’m so happy!” I exclaimed, hugging her tighter. She was quiet for a moment. Then I felt something warm on my shoulder. It was wet too.
My daughter was crying. I parted with her, still holding her, and watched the tears slide down her face. “Mother…. I’m so sorry…” she sobbed, looking away. I felt my heart crack.
“Oh, Wildfire. No. Don’t be sorry!” I cried, hugging her again. “I love you. I love you more than anything in the world. You are worth more than the whole Empire to me! Please, don’t apologise.” 
She sobbed into my chest. I looked at the others and saw Storm, Sparkle and Fighter looking at me with happy, content faces. But Wildfire was still crying.
I stood and she got up too, still crying and looking at her hooves. I saw a small handkerchief in dark purple-blue magic float over to me, and I nodded in thanks to Lunar. I wiped the tears of the Princess’s face.
“Now.” I said to her, nudging her face to meet mine. “Do you believe me?”
“I… don’t know.” She sighed. “I locked up my siblings, I turned the soldiers into monsters, I caused suffering throughout the Empire and I imprisoned you underground. For some reason, I don’t believe it when you say you love me back.” she pouted.
“Wildfire, what did we say earlier?” asked Storm Cloud, putting his hoof on her shoulder. 
“Um…” stuttered Wild.
“We said that no matter what, you were still our sister and that we will always love you.” Sparkle put in, removing her silver helmet.
“And I am your mother. I love you more than all of us.” I whispered. “What was the thing that made you change in the first place?”
Wildfire bit her lip and glanced at the ground. Then she spoke. “It’s just that you had so much power. You were always loved by your subjects. Father was too. You could do anything, you were the ruler. But one day… I realised that I wanted it. But I knew I wasn’t going to get it. Sparkle Flame would.” She looked up at her sister. “I know it. I heard you and Father discussing it one night that Sparkle would be a worthy Queen. But I’m the youngest, and I couldn’t get that at all.” 
There was silence for a moment. 
“Wildfire. They were only mentioning I’d be a worthy Queen if something happened to them! Do you think that would happen? And do think that if I came to power, I’d think nothing of you and the others?” asked Sparkle Flame. Wildfire sort of looked around. She closed her eyes and nodded tearfully.
Suddenly there was a huge bang and lots of dust. I screamed and we all jumped out of the way as the place where the door used to be was knocked down.
“Whirlwind!” I cried suddenly. My husband was standing at the hole in the wall, looking panicked. 
“Aka? Aka you’re alive!” He cried, rushing forward and kissing me on the lips. I embraced him then we broke apart. “Wildfire? You’re here too!” He ran to his daughter and picked her up, and despite her size, was able to spin her around and hug her. “Oh Wild, I missed you so much,”
I glanced at the corner and saw the other five ponies walking out. “Family time,” chuckled Golden Bolt as he followed the others out and down the hall.
“Oh, I’m so happy you’re all safe!” exclaimed Whirlwind again. “But it’s not going so well out there.”
“What? Why not?” I asked.
“The Fireball army’s expanding. It’s taking over all the other soldiers.” He said gravely.
“Oh no!” cried Wildfire. “It’s all my fault! I need to stop this!” Suddenly the shaken Princess leapt away from me, charging to the hole.
“No, wait!” I called. I looked at Whirlwind and we galloped after her.
I leapt through the hole and bolted down the huge corridor. Wildfire was at the other end, and she suddenly disappeared as she rounded a turn. I spread my wings and galloped ever faster.
What was she doing now?
I glanced behind me and saw the other three coming too. I ran around the corner and kept going, catching up to my daughter. She suddenly noticed us.
“Come on! I need to stop them!” she panicked. She leapt down a flight of stairs, and I swooped down after. Halfway down were the other six ponies, shocked at the sight.
“Do we…?” started Golden Bolt, but I nodded before he could finish. They all followed.
After a few minutes of charging through the palace, Wildfire skidded to a halt at the end of a corridor with a balcony. She threw the doors open and charged to the golden rails. We came up near her. We were overlooking the courtyard and we could see the gardens, where I saw a huge mess.
There were the Fireballs fiercely battling soldiers, magic and flames flashing everywhere. I saw injured ponies laying upon the ground, there was a tree on fire in one corner of the gardens, and a huge bit of the wall was completely destroyed. Wildfire’s eyes suddenly filled with tears. She shut her eyes, growing suddenly angry, then lifted herself off the balcony. She flew up a bit, her horn lighting up with blinding magic,
“STOP!” she screamed, her horn exploding and throwing light out everywhere. Beams of white power streamed in all directions, and the sparkling fire was thrown down at the sight below. A huge orange wall was formed and thrown out, covering everything. 
Suddenly Wildfire gasped and the magic stopped, and she collapsed. She hit the marble balcony floor with a thud, and Sparkle Flame rushed down by her side.
I looked down. There were no Fireballs. They were all gone. I saw many ponies lying on the ground, either from exhaustion or being changed back to normal.
“Did I do it?” asked Wildfire. “That was so much…”
“And all that power was magic for good.” Said Sparkle Flame, nuzzling her. “Look at your cutie mark. You do have the magic to do that, and I’m pretty sure that’s what it means. You are so much for powerful when you’re real Wildfire.” The filly smiled and gave her sister a hug, and the other two joined in.
“Wait, where’s the Jewel?” asked Whirlwind. I gasped, realising that I didn’t have it. 
“Oh, it’s here Mother.” replied Storm Cloud. He opened the saddle bag that I didn’t notice he had and grabbed the Jewel. He levitated before him and faced me. He smiled and put it near my head. “The true Queen of the Jewel Empire.” He grinned, touching the gem to my head in front of my horn. He wrapped the ribbon around my and I suddenly felt a warm sensation.
Sparks flew down my body and I drew in the magic of the Jewel Empire’s ancient relic. I was the Queen once again.
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Solar

Postby Kodabomb » Sat Feb 16, 2013 3:49 pm

This is written from Solar Eclipse's point of view. Sort of a filler.
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I swooped down off the balcony and down towards the courtyard. We needed to help these ponies. The others followed me, and I glanced back up at the spot I came from. Fire-Fighter and Storm Cloud were flying over to the gardens, and Aka, Whirlwind and Wildfire were going into the castle to clean the mess within.
All around us were bodies of ponies. Unconscious, awake, injured or, what I hoped wasn’t really true, dead. It was simply awful. But I knew many healing spells, taught by Celestia herself, and I approached a severely injured Pegasus. He was lying on his side, his wing severely bent back. His back leg was covered in blood and so was his mouth and blackened, burnt eye.
“Hey, are you OK?” I asked him. He opened his eyes slowly. Then they widened huge and his pupils dilated dramatically. 
“Fireball! Get away from me!” he cried. I was very taken aback. Then hurt.
“What? No!” I exclaimed. “I’m not a Fireball! I’m an alicorn from Equestria. With… fire for hair.” I added awkwardly. He looked at me in suspicion, before suddenly yelling out as his wing moved.
“OK! just help me, please,” he moaned. I nodded and used a simple but powerful spell that wrapped his wing up in mesmerizing orange magic. Then as it swirled around I conjured up a bandage that wrapped around his whole belly, holding the wing in place. He stared at it in awe. I then touched his leg with my horn, which started healing up the cuts.
“Get into the palace. The King and Queen should be getting it organised, so go to the hospital wing.” I said to him as he shakily stood.
“In the soldiers rooms?” he asked. I stared at him.
“Equestrian, my friend. I don’t know where anything is.” I replied. He nodded slowly and walked to the door into the castle.

* * *
I smiled as I sent a very shaken unicorn mare into the castle. I was about to exit the courtyard,where I had healed many ponies successfully, when I heard a yell.
“NO!” I heard. I gasped. It was Grey Quartz. I stood still and listened before I decided to go over there. “NO!! Somepony help me! Help!”
“Quartz? Where are you?” I heard a male voice yell overhead. I looked up to see Golden Bolt flying over at top speed. I galloped after, then took off after him.
“Help me! Somepony please!” I heard Quartz yell again. Bolt turned quickly and I followed him.
Suddenly the Pegasus went sharply downwards, swooping down onto the grass beneath a tree. I came too and we walked over to where I saw Quartz.
“Quartz? What’s wrong?” asked Bolt urgently. I heard flapping wings as Crimson Star came down near us as well.
“Look…” sobbed the unicorn. She was lying upon the grass, and she wriggled out of the way. There was somepony lying on the ground near her.
“What? Who is he? Is he OK?” I asked.
“No! It’s my brother, Diamond Stone….” She burst into tears. “He’s not OK! Somepony help him! My spells don’t work!” 
Bolt put a hoof on the stallion’s chest. “He’s breathing… I don’t know magic! I don’t have a horn! Solar… please…” he turned to me, and the others did too.
“Um… OK…” I murmured almost helplessly. I focused my energy, and it seeped out onto the dying unicorn. I looked at him and saw the ribbons wrap around his chest. The little sparkling lights danced around.
All of a sudden there was a crack, and my magic vanished. The aura around Diamond’s body faded away, and Quartz gasped.
“Come on, Diamond! Wake up!” she said through tears, nudging him. 
“Why won’t he get up?” asked Crimson. He put his hoof on Diamond’s chest. “Oh damn. He’s not breathing!”
“Do something!” Quartz screamed at me. My eyes filled with tears and I gave it another go. But the magic hadn’t even reached the stallion before it broke off again.
“WORK!” I yelled at my horn, sending sparks flying. “Why won’t you work?” I begged desperately.
I pushed and pushed, trying to force it up. It wouldn’t come out! The spell wasn’t working! I levitated a leaf from the tree above us. Well, my powers were working, just not this…
I gasped. We’d have to face the truth.
He wasn’t going to come back.
But I couldn’t say it. My eyes overflowed with hot tears and I looked at the ground.
“What?” cried Quartz, also sobbing. “Why did you stop? Fix him!”
“There’s… there’s nothing to fix. He’s….” I stopped mid-sentence.
“Gone.” Whispered Bolt. I looked up at the grey unicorn, who was staring at me. But not really… more like through me.
“Diamond Stone’s…. gone?” she squeaked. Her lip trembled. I nodded and grabbed her in a hug.
She began sobbing into my chest. She wailed and cried. Her brother was gone. I tried to imagine it. I could never lose Lunar. Never. Poor Grey Quartz.
I conjured up a white blanket, and spread it out. Quartz looked behind her to see the blanket float down and cover up her beloved brother.
I parted with her and she stood over him. Her tears were all gone. She just stared. Crimson came over and hugged her, giving her a kiss on the cheek.
“I love you Quartz, if it feels better.” He whispered into her ear. She looked up.
“I love you too, Crimson," 
Bolt and I walked away. We traipsed along in silence as we walked up to the gates into the courtyard, where suddenly Lunar and Aqua ran up to us.
“What’s happened?” asked Aqua in panic as she saw the tears on both our faces.
“Grey Quartz’s brother…” I said.
“He died a minute ago. I wouldn’t go over.” Put in Bolt.
“What?” said Aqua in shock. Bolt put his hoof around her and they walked away.
I stood and faced Lunar. 
“Really?” she said, her lip trembling. I nodded.
“Come on, we’ll go and see the King and Queen.” I said.
"All the funerals they'll have to organize..." she sighed sadly. "It's just so..."
"I know." I said, glancing over my shoulder one more time at  the heartbreaking scene.
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Wildfire (Final)

Postby Kodabomb » Mon Feb 18, 2013 7:08 pm

This is written from Princess Wildfire's point of view.
Well, here's Book 1's finale!
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I paced the large room before the big balcony that overlooked the city. Swiftly back and forth. I had no idea what the citizens of the Empire though of me; I hadn’t been out in public out of fear that they might turn against me.
But today was the party to welcome me back. It had been a long time since anypony had actually seen me in my real form, with blue eyes and everything. They'd had fair few days since what happened, to get everything back on track.
My parents were going to call me out onto the balcony at any moment, after giving their small speech to the enormous crowd down below.
Then somepony walked over to me. A grey Pegasus in beautiful silver, blue and yellow armour. The knight I had grown to be rather fond of now.
“Hello, sir Bolt.” I said with a nervous smile.
“Hey, Princess. It’s time for you to come out now.” He said with a bow. I froze and gulped.
“Um… OK.” I replied, terrified. He nodded and I slowly walked to the big, gem-studded silver doors that led onto the balcony. A unicorn guard standing next to it opened it with his hot pink magic, and I closed my eyes to walk out.
“Announcing, Princess Wildfire!” I heard my mother call out, and then, I heard cheering. I opened my eyes quickly, as I walked in between my parents.
The crowd cheered loudly. The booming voices echoed around, filling the air with their roaring sound. Where they… happy?
“Wave, Princess.” Said Whirlwind in my ear. I lifted my hoof and started waving elegantly but shakily, in the polite manner as a royal should. I smiled and looked down upon them.
“Why are they happy?” I whispered to Whirlwind, still looking straight ahead.
“Because you’re the Princess! They missed you terribly, just as we did.” He replied, smiling warmly. “They hated old you, but you’re Wildfire, one of the Kingdom’s favourite royals. After me, of course.”
“Father!” I giggled, with a shake of my head. He smiled again and kissed my cheek.
Soon Aka lifted her hoof to silence the crowd.
“We all know the Empire was put into suffering for the past while. And what happened was not in the control of anypony. Not even Wildfire.” She said, using a spell to make her voice louder. “She did transform herself with her own magic, but we should’ve listened to her. We shouldn’t have said some things that made her upset, but now we know that those things shall not be repeated, and that Wildfire will remain our beloved Princess forever, throughout her alicorn years.” Aka looked down at me and I blushed.
“Would you like to say something?” Whirlwind asked me. I gasped and felt nervous once again.
I looked up at Aka and she nodded and smiled encouragingly.
I drew in a deep breath and walked to the very edge of the balcony to speak.
“I…. I would just like to say… that, I’m sorry. I’m sorry, Jewel Empire, for all the things I did to you. I, I… ruined the towns, sent Fireballs to patrol the streets, abused the foals in the schoolhouses… you know what I did.” I sighed. “And I apologise greatly, for it was terrible of me. But as the Queen said, I won’t be transforming again. I’ll accept that it’s never all me, and that my parents need to spend time on my older, more busy siblings. And that they have a whole empire to rule. An Empire… I don’t need. I have friends, my family, my lovely maids and all the citizens of this kingdom to keep me happy.” I smiled and blushed, backing away.
Suddenly the crown boomed again, their cheering loud and happy. It filled my heart with joy and I waved to them once more. 
As we waved and smiled, there was suddenly a huge bang. I looked down in surprise and saw that every unicorn in the crowd began setting off fireworks. They boomed and crackled, exploding from their horns. Although it wasn’t quite dark yet, the sparks gave off a beautiful glow, lighting the streets, gardens and palace with rainbow light. I gasped and watched them in awe.
Aka then turned away, walking towards the doorsp. Whirlwind gave a final wave, following her. I smiled at the crowd and came too, and as we left the balcony the fireworks became larger, before the guard shut the door behind us.
I smiled broadly and threw my head back. My worries were gone. Everything was fine. The kingdom loved me, my family was happy, and everything was back to normal.
“That went well, didn’t it Wildfire?” said Whirlwind. I nodded.
“Come on, you two. In celebration, we’re going to have a lovely family dinner. There will be no servants, guards, nobles, on-lookers or guests.” Said Aka, nuzzling me.
“Really?” I cried, excited. We hadn’t had one of those in so long. My mother nodded, and we all walked from the room.

* * *
“OK, you may leave now everypony.” Said Aka to the guards and maids, and they backed from the room in a bow. We were seated around our gorgeous dining table, all six of us. Storm and Whirlwind were in lovely suits instead of armour, even though there was nopony to impress. And Fire-Fighter was wearing her lovely shoes, necklace and tiara I was sure hadn’t been worn since we last visited Equestria. She was very self-conscious, not used to it. I shook my head with a laugh. 
"It's a real shame Flare couldn't be here with all this." Fighter whispered in my ear.
"Yeah. This whole time I haven't seen her," I murmured back.
“Oh, this absolutely wonderful!” beamed Sparkle Flame, not hearing our conversation, as she lifted up the wine bottle with her magic. She took off the cork and brought it around the table, pouring the fizzy golden liquid into our glasses. I smiled in thanks.
Sparkle finished, and placed down the bottle. Then Storm spoke. He lifted his glass.
“To the alicorn royal family, us!” he said. I giggled and held up my glass, and we all hit them together with a satisfying ‘clink’ sound. I held the wine to my lips and took a sip.
I was so happy.

* * *
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The End

Postby Kodabomb » Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:38 pm

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So, that's the end of Jewel Empire Book 1! I am so glad you enjoyed it enough to read the whole thing, and if you really enjoy that much, please read Book 2! I really appreciate every single reader I have, and you people are just beautiful. Thanks so much for your support! <3
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Song of Wildfire

Postby Kodabomb » Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:07 pm

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Some might say that change it futile
That a leopard can't change her spots
Once one turns she cannot come back
And the light past is forgot.

Some might say that the darkness lingers
You go in and can't come back
So why is it at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black?

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

All things came and will stay forever
History doesn't forget
Go ahead; come and bring me justice
Your wishes can be met

But let it be known that none was on my mind
A wicked heart I lack
And let it be known at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black.

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

Jewel Empire, my heart comes pure
I'm sorry for what I've done 
Forgive me sweet kingdom's joy
The red and black reduced to none.

And let it be known at the end of a tunnel
The white comes the end of the black.
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