Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

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Favorite Character...

Linden
3
43%
Marie - Mouse
2
29%
Oscar
0
No votes
Anne
1
14%
Hannah
1
14%
 
Total votes : 7

Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Tue Nov 20, 2012 10:43 am

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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:59 am

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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:03 am

This books is fantastic. You can really feel the connection between the characters, and I love the variety of personalities. I can't wait to read more!
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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Wed Nov 21, 2012 4:05 am

Gosh, thank you, I'm glad you're liking it so far! :)
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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Wed Nov 21, 2012 9:02 am

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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Wed Nov 21, 2012 9:32 am

I love this drama, but you get the idea that linden likes mouse from her side of the story, but when he actually talks he doesn't mention her. Am I just being stupid? Because I'm confused.
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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Wed Nov 21, 2012 9:38 am

No you're not being stupid, Marie kind of has feelings for Linden, I'm not quite sure if they are any more than friendly feelings, but there are some there. Linden however is rather apathetic and it takes him a little longer to actually care about something. He appreciates her, and pretty much every house mate, but they haven't even hit friends on his scale yet. He's quite clever... But he's also rather stupid at times XD

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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Wed Nov 21, 2012 9:42 am

Yeah, well. He doesn't strike me as the sort of person with those types of feeling straight away, so that makes sense. Although, it would be hilarious if he fell head over heels in love with Marie and she didn't like him in that way. Heh heh, it makes me laugh just thinking about it.
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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby Placebo Effect » Wed Nov 21, 2012 11:02 am

Haha perhaps, I've sort of got the rest of the story planned out - this is the first time I've written a realistic story, and the first time I've written in first person, so writing out hints of love has been hard, but I'm glad it worked :) - and there will be at least some elements of love in there.
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Re: Secrets and Lies... Open to posting.

Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Wed Nov 21, 2012 11:13 am

Cool, because I shall be reading every step of the way, and I like 3 things:
Adventure
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