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Who's your favorite EVIL character (thank you katnisshungergames10 for the idea of this poll)?

The Demon Queen
9
26%
Andrea
1
3%
Alexa
1
3%
Aurauria
1
3%
Rhubarb
15
44%
Fuego
1
3%
Leonardo
0
No votes
Anger
3
9%
Tallon
0
No votes
Santa
3
9%
 
Total votes : 34

Re: After Saving The World - First Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby VesVes » Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:15 am

Suzi: Nobody move or I shoot!
Amy: Yeah, nobody shoot 'cause I don't want to die!
XD Loved that quote.

Wait, aren't they all still in school? How on Earth did Suzi manage to get a gun in there? O.o
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Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:32 am

D: nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu suzi
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Postby star star. » Sun Oct 21, 2012 3:15 am

Very interesting, Rebel. You forgot to add 'very'





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Postby Lunala » Sun Oct 21, 2012 3:57 am

Once evil, always evil. Can't wait for more!
It took a while to read the four books I missed, but scrolling through the pages was worth it. These series are just epical.
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:01 am

Rebel Faery wrote:Suzi v Demon Queen... Intresting...

Yush, very interesting. :)
Nyota Hyena wrote:Suzi: Nobody move or I shoot!
Amy: Yeah, nobody shoot 'cause I don't want to die!
XD Loved that quote.

Wait, aren't they all still in school? How on Earth did Suzi manage to get a gun in there? O.o

They were in the schoolyard when they were talking, then Suzi and Jenette fought and ended up moving farther away while fighting, and then they dragged Suzi far away. They are no longer on school grounds. And Suzi probably used her demon powers to make a gun right then and there. :)
xxazul63xx wrote:D: nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu suzi

Sadness. :(
katnisshungergames10 wrote:Very interesting, Rebel. You forgot to add 'very'

:)
Rotten Banana wrote:Once evil, always evil. Can't wait for more!
It took a while to read the four books I missed, but scrolling through the pages was worth it. These series are just epical.

Aww, thank you! :)

Since all you stalkerwans have been very nice to me, I shall write MORE!!















We all stood there, not sure what to do but not wanting to be the one who left first. I suddenly thought of something.
Jenette? How did you know that Suzi was evil still?
Once you're evil, evil never leaves you. I didn't think of it until a few minutes ago. Anything can trigger evil if you've been holding it back for a long time, and Suzi had been, hence why she sort of exploded like I did.
So what now? She's obviously still got that Demon Queen inside her.
We have to make sure she's kept under control. If anything bad happens to her, then who knows how evil she will get.
I nodded.
But to do that we gotta find her first, right?
Right. I think we've given her enough time, so let's go and find her.

It's alright, Suzi. We know it was an accident. I blew up too.
Yes, but she's still inside me! And she won't ever leave!
Suzi was in tears. It was the first time I had seen her cry hard. Oh, and we were sitting on a hill (away from school) and talking to Suzi. All five of us.
I thought she was gone for good! But no! I'm still her prisoner!
Jenette rubbed Suzi's back gently. I don't know how Jenette was so calm and.... and.... loving, but she was doing good.
What are you talking about, Suzi?
Once you let her in she never goes out. I know that now. She can control your mind, your thoughts, and keep the good side of you hidden away for however long she likes, probably forever. She had kept me prisoner before, but then Amy got the good me out, but now she's back for I don't know how long! She could come at any moment, could strike at any time!
Suzi cried again. Man, I had never seen her cry. Why was this so bad for her?
Shh, it's okay, Suzi. It's okay.
No, it's not. I'm dangerous now.
A new thought suddenly occurred to Suzi and she sat up quickly.
You have to go! Leave! Go now!
No, Suzi. We're not leaving. Not until you feel better.
No, you don't understand. We're standing on-
There was a low rumbling sound, stopping Suzi in mid-sentence.
Oh no.
The grassy ground suddenly opened up beneath us and we fell down, down, down.
AGAHGAHGAHGHAHGAHGAHGAHGHAHGAHGAHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I crashed against the flooring hard. I saw stars and felt dizzy.
Everybody okay?
I'm alright.
I'm good.
I guess I'm okay.
Ow.
I coughed from the dust and dirt that was everywhere and looked around. We had fallen into a big, dark hole.
Suzi, do you know where we are?
Suzi growled. We all turned and looked at her.
Suzi?
Suzi hissed (she actually hissed) and lunged at Jenette. Jenette quickly put up her arm and blocked Suzi's attack, but got a large scrape on her shoulder from Suzi's claws.
Suzi, snap out of it!
Suzi lunged at Jenette again. What was going on?
The Demon Queen will not be ignored!
And Suzi turned into the Demon Queen within one millisecond, scratching and clawing Jenette. Jenette suddenly let out a cry as Suzi clawed Jenette's throat. Jenette choked and fell to the ground, blood flowing out of her throat.
Jenette!
I ran to her.
Jenette, are you okay?!
Suzi!
Jenette suddenly lunged her claws at my chest and I flinched. I heard a slicing noise, but no pain. I opened my eyes. Jenette's claws weren't on me. They were beside me. I whirled around and faced Suzi with Jenette's claws in her stomach. Suzi fell to the ground and moaned.
She crept up behind you and would have killed you.
I nodded. She had saved me.
You'll be alright, right, Jenette?
I don't know. I'm hurt pretty bad.
Gish!
Gish was already there, kneeling beside Jenette.
Can you help her?
Yes, but you must go.
Why?
Because you will not want to watch.
I blinked a few times, then got up and went to the corner of the hole. I looked over at Suzi, and Ginger was kneeling beside her, whispering something. I shrugged it off and sat down in my corner. I had to make myself not look at Jenette. I knew that whatever Gish was doing, she didn't want me to look. And I didn't. I could hear Jenette moaning in pain, though, and I had to do everything in my power not to run over to her. She was my sister. If she died, I would never forgive Suzi. Never in my life.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby daz » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:33 am

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Postby star star. » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:33 am

O.M.S.

I am suddenly scared.





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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:05 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:oooooo!!!! good one, JF!!! more!

Thanks! :)
katnisshungergames10 wrote:O.M.S.

I am suddenly scared.

lol

MORE!!















Amy?
I looked up. Gish was motioning for me to come. I walked over to him and looked down at Jenette. She laid there, as still as a stone.
Is she-
No, she isn't dead. She's resting.
Oh, good!
So you fixed her?
I think so.
I felt something on my shoulder and turned around. Suzi looked at me.
Amy, you have to believe that I didn't mean to do it. I told you before; she just comes and goes.
I nodded, although I still hadn't forgiven her.
Is Jenette okay?
Yeah, Gish fixed her.
Jenette's eyes suddenly popped open and she jumped to her feet, kicking and punching the air.
Jenette?
Jenette stopped fighting the air and turned to look at me.
What happened?
You fell unconscious and almost died but Gish saved you.
Jenette turned to Gish.
Thanks.
My pleasure.
Now I have to go. I know that I can hurt you, and she's breaking through more and more. Soon she'll control all of me, and then I can't break free again. She'll be me forever.
That's the only reason why you have to stay. If she overcomes you then the world will be lost to her power like it was before. We have to keep you under.
Yes, but how? She can come at any moment without any warning.
Jenette closed her eyes and thought, then she jerked her head up quickly.
That's it! Ginger! Come here!
Ginger walked up to Jenette.
What can I do?
I know what you can do. I need you to do it to Suzi to get the Demon Queen out.
Wait, what? How did Jenette know what Ginger could do? And what could Ginger do?
I don't know, Jenette. If I do it then Suzi could die.
If you don't do it Suzi will be lost to the Demon Queen anyway, and the world will be lost as well.
Ginger looked at Suzi. Suzi nodded.
Alright, I'll do it. Just... stand back.
We all took a step back.
Jenette, what can Ginger do?
If she concentrates hard enough she can turn someone into two dogs.
WHAT THE CHICKEN?!
Yes, she can turn someone into two dogs. Meaning that she can make Suzi one, and the Demon Queen another.
How did you know that she could do it?
Um.... I'm an angel. It's sort of my job to know what people can and can't do so that I can help them.
Oh. Right.
Ginger closed her eyes and put a hand on each of Suzi's shoulders. She muttered something, and suddenly the ground shook. Suzi fell to the ground and Ginger was flung against a wall. Ginger quickly got to her feet and ran over to Suzi. Suzi laid there, unconscious.
Suzi?! Suzi, wake up!
Suzi suddenly started shaking, but then abruptly stopped.
Hello.
We all whirled around and faced not Suzi, but the Demon Queen. I looked over. Suzi was still laying on the ground, but the Demon Queen was here at the same time.
Jenette?
Ginger, you did it.
Jenette suddenly lunged at the Demon Queen and started beating the stuffing out of her. The Demon Queen didn't do anything from shock. Jenette finally threw a punch that knocked her out. Jenette stood to her feet and smiled.
Now we just have to figure out how to kill her for good. But for now, is Suzi alright?
Ginger was kneeling beside Suzi, who was just opening her eyes and sitting up.
She's gone. I don't feel her.
Suzi was smiling happily. She looked probably the happiest I had ever seen her.
Thank you, Ginger!
Suzi hugged Ginger hard.
Good. Suzi's alright. Now what do we do with the Demon Queen?
At the moment you can't do anything.
Why not?
Because she's gone.
We all whirled around and stared at where the Demon Queen had been. And Suzi was right. The Demon Queen had disappeared.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby star star. » Sun Oct 21, 2012 7:08 am

OMS SO SO SO SO SO COOL!!!!!





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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Oct 21, 2012 8:00 am

katnisshungergames10 wrote:OMS SO SO SO SO SO COOL!!!!!

Thank you! :)

More, since Katniss demands it.















My mouth dropped open and my eyes got big.
Oh. My. Chicken. SHE JUST DISAPPEARED OUT OF THIN AIR! HOW SCARY IS THAT?!
Everybody stared at me.
Wait, did I just say that out loud?
Yes you did, Amy.
..... Nuts.
What do we do? If the Demon Queen is out there than the world is lost!
NO! THE WORLD MUST NOT DIE!
Amy's stopped her before, maybe she can do it again.
Wait, what?
Yes.... Amy has done it before. Maybe she can do it again.
Or maybe I'll get the stuffing beaten out of me!
Yes, that actually might work. She might be able to defeat the Demon Queen.
Yeah, did you notice that you said "might"?
It's a brilliant idea, Ginger. We just have to find the Demon Queen and then send Amy out there to defeat her.
Or, here's an idea, Jenette could fight the Demon Queen and I could eat some ham!
They all stared at me.
Oh sure, now you listen to me.
Amy, you have to go out there. You're the one that defeated the Demon Queen before.
Yeah, but you see how well that turned out. She's back and more scary than ever!
Amy, you can do it. We believe in you.
I know you believe in me. But-
AMY!
AGH! WHAT?! WHAT IS IT?!
I swung my arm around all karate like. I'm so awesome.
You see? She's scared by anything. And, I can't believe I'm saying this, but Amy's right. She can't do this. Not again.
I glared at Suzi. She had scared me on purpose.
She just needs practice.
You mean a lot of practice.
Hey!
A ton of practice.
Okay, we get it! I'm not all that good at fighting!
So, what do you say, Amy? Can we train you?
You can try, but I don't know if it'll help.
Oh, it will help. Practice always helps.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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