~-Suzi: Broken - A TIAJNAD Backstory

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Ahhhhhh! So amazing! I love it!
I wonder what the "thingy" is....

Thanks!

New picture I colored in on Oekaki:

[Kay the Cat-Fox]

This is amazing. I can't wait for the brand new Amy series.

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This is amazing. I can't wait for the brand new Amy series.

Thanks, and I can't wait to write the next Amy series!!

More, just because I feel like it.






















I awoke again to the door being opened. Another day, I thought. I had lost track of how long I had been in this lab where they tested on me. Two, maybe three years? I had no clue. I just knew that it had been a long time. I was broken and torn in all places, my heart no longer containing happiness. The only thing I knew now was sadness and misery. I was unchained and taken back to the tables. They worked on me some more. Each day what they did grew increasingly worse. In the beginning they just gave me needles. Now they were doing surgery, putting stuff into my system, testing new medicine on me, and much more. A doctor suddenly walked in, smiling, and then he spoke (his words will be black and bold).
I bring good news! There is said to be somebody that will save the world! She is already helping nearly every person she sees, and there are rumors she's even going to every building everywhere and helping everybody! She's helped over 500 people already!
Somebody who helps everybody? I thought. Maybe she'll help me. I guess there's still some hope.
That's amazing! What's her name? Maybe she'll help us get some equipment for our experiments.
Her name is Amy.
I think I've heard of her.
Then he looked over at me, realizing I was still there.
Go ahead and take her back to her cell.
So I was taken back to my cell and chained again.

Days went by. Then weeks. Then months. Years. Nobody came for me. This "Amy" saved everyone but me. She wasn't coming, and I knew it. Guess I wasn't important enough for her. Guess I wasn't as needy as everyone else. Guess I wasn't worth saving.
I was taken back to the tables and chained.
Today we will be adding in something that may change the world forever... if it succeeds.
Yeah, yeah, yeah, I thought. That's what you always say before I get poked and prodded. And that was completely 100% true. Everyday the doctor did say that, and everyday he would give me needles. You'd think I'd be used to the pain by now, but everyday the needle would contain more hurt, more pain, so I would never get used to it. They didn't want me to get used to it, after all. They wanted me to get hurt. They wanted to control me, just like everybody else did. Everybody wanted to control the Amazing Electro-Dog.
The Doctor gave me so many needles that I lost count. I just knew that he put a needle into nearly every part of my body.
Alright, the medicine is in your body now, traveling through your veins and getting close to your heart. It will reach your heart in 5.... 4..... 3.... 2..... 1......
And then the indescribable pain hit me. It felt like my chest was on fire yet being jabbed with millions of knifes at the same time. It was the worse pain I had ever felt, and that's saying something. Finally the pain ceased and I relaxed. I had not screamed, but I had definitely shown in my face that I was in pain. I could tell, because the doctors were smiling devilishly.
Alright, let's see if it works.
He suddenly slapped me across the face, and I felt the sudden sensation of air whooshing past me, and then it stopped. I looked around. I was standing up, and I was no longer on a table chained down. No, I was standing right beside the doctor. The doctor jumped back, but soon got back to his feet, grabbed me, and chained me back onto the table. What had just happened?
It works! I can't believe it works!
There were cheers from the doctor and his assistants. The only problem was that I had no idea what worked. I didn't even know what had just happened! When everybody was finished cheering, the Doctor turned to the other doctors.
Make millions more of this medicine. Send it to everybody in the world. They'll want this transportation medicine.
Transportation medicine? What the heck was that? The doctors nodded, took the recipe for the medicine that had been given to me, and left. All who were left was me, the Doctor, and one of his assistants. The doctor turned to leave, but then turned to his assistant.
Oh, since she can figure out how to work the medicine, she is no longer needed since she could escape easily. Take her to the extermination center.
The assistant nodded and called the guards over. The Doctor left. The guards unchained me and grabbed me. Extermination? So they couldn't use me anymore. but what was this power they had given me? I concentrated and tried to figure out how to work it, but I couldn't. I didn't even know what it did. Wait, I thought. They called it transportation medicine. And when they gave it to me I suddenly appeared beside the Doctor. Which means..... I can transport! My eyes got large, and I concentrated harder. Maybe I could transport. I felt whooshing air, just like I had the first time, and I opened my eyes. But I was still being hauled by the guards through a door and down a hallway. I looked up and noticed that the whooshing had just been caused by a fan we had passed. They hauled me through a door with multiple strange large tubes. They shoved me into the last tube (there were five in total), then shut the door of the tube, locking me in. I could see through the tube and could see the guards leaving. More guards walked in, shoving other dogs that I had seen at the tables into tubes like mine. When all five tubes were filled, all the guards left and a new dog came in.

He walked over to a machine, looked at us, then back at the machine, and turned multiple nobs and pressed many buttons. I heard somebody screaming. The screaming of the same dog continued for ten minutes. But I couldn't see what was happening because i was in the last tube. After the screaming ceased and all was quiet, a new scream emerged. It lasted for ten minutes, than ceased. Then another one began, lasted ten minutes, and ceased. I looked over at the tube next to be. The fourth tube. I suddenly saw needles emerge from the side of the dog's next to me's tube, and it immediately drilled into the side of their head. The dog next to me started screaming. Other needles came out from the side, and drilled into the side of the dog's entire body. The scream grew as the needle's progressed. After ten minutes, the dog stopped screaming and the needles were pulled out of it's body. The dog collapsed to the ground in the tube. I heard a whirring noise next to me, suddenly, and turned my head. Needles were emerging. No. I couldn't take this anymore! No more pain, no more needles, no more hurt! No more pain! I was done. Anger boiled inside of me. My fingers sizzled. Every ounce of me burned like a fire, yet I felt relief instead of pain. And then it happened.
I exploded, anger raging out of me. Electricity shot everywhere, and one second into my explosion the electricity broke the glass that was the tube. The tube shattered, the needles that had been just centimeters away from my face retreated, and the dog operating the machine looked at me with horror, he began to run away. I shot my hand toward him and electricity surged out of me and shot him down. I looked over at the dead dogs who had been through as much as I had. I closed my eyes, concentrated, felt whooshing, and then opened them. I was back where the tables were. Doctors stared at me. I smiled, then shot electricity at the dogs that were trapped. At first they looked terrified, but then they realized that i had shocked their chains. They were free. They got to their feet and started running.
The exit is just down the hallway. If anybody tries to stop you, show them what you can do!
I knew all these dogs had power of some sort. I could tell by the way they looked. They looked different then other dogs, just like I did. They had a sort of power surrounding them. Just like me. Doctors charged at me. Everything went in slow motion as I jumped high into the air about forty feet, then came crashing down, my fist smashing the hard tile. Electricity burst through my hand, shocking every doctor in the room. They all dropped to the ground dead. I stood up, a new energy and power inside me.
Nobody owns me.
And then I ran to the exit door with the others.

[Rebel Faery]

Cool....

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Cool....

Thank you!

More, 'cause I feel like it again. I think that this is going to be a short backstory.
















Just as I opened the door and went outside of the lab to run after the others, I turned around and took out something round I had snatched from a tray. I planted it on the side of the building and ran. There was a loud explosion. I looked back, and the whole lab was in flames and was crumbling to the ground. I smiled. Oh yes, I planted a bomb on the lab. Nobody could survive that. Nothing could survive that. Meaning that I would be the only one who would ever be able to transport, because all of the medicine was now blown to smithereens.
The other ones who had been tested on all gave me thanks once we were out of sight of the lab.
It's nothing.
Of course they all objected, saying that it was everything. And I guess it was. Who knows how long they had been prisoners. I looked at my arm covered in blood stains from the needles and all they had done to me. And then my thoughts went to Amy. The one who saved everybody.... except those who needed it most. Being me. I would kill that dog. I would kill her for not saving me.
I guess this is where we part.
I looked at all the other dogs that had been tested on. They all nodded in agreement.
Good luck out there.
And then we all turned around and ran in completely different directions. None of us were friends. We had just seen each other on the tables. So why stick together? Besides, who knew what had been inserted into all of the others? Maybe one of them could turn into a gun and shoot five men with one blow. I didn't know. I just knew that something had been put into all of us. For me it was transportation, which really wasn't that bad when you think about it. But all I could remember was them taking that sluggish thing out. What had that thing been, anyway? I shook away all my thoughts and tried to pay attention to everything. I heard someone and looked behind myself. Was it just me or had that dog been following me this whole time? I shrugged and turned back around. But then I heard another pair of feet and turned around yet again. Three dogs now. More dogs kept on coming up behind me. Something wasn't right. I didn't even think before acting, I just took for the hills. I ran fast and hard. I could hear the pounding footsteps behind me. Whoever those dudes were, they were trouble. I was running so hard and fast that I didn't even see the car coming. I ran right in front of it and it crashed into my body. It felt like slow motion as I fell to the ground. Right before my head hit the hard surface and I was knocked unconscious I could see a crowd of people already surrounding me.

[VesVes]

Ooh, getting dramatic. O.o Great work!

Is it bad that when I saw the words 'extermination center' I thought of the Daleks from Doctor Who? XD

[daz]

Oh my gosh.... In one of those entries... Oh gosh i almost hurled myself.
Awesome!!! Mooooooore?!!!

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Ooh, getting dramatic. O.o Great work!

Is it bad that when I saw the words 'extermination center' I thought of the Daleks from Doctor Who? XD

Thanks! And I've never seen Doctor Who, so I'm not sure...

Oh my gosh.... In one of those entries... Oh gosh i almost hurled myself.
Awesome!!! Mooooooore?!!!

Which entry? And of course I'll write more!


























I opened my eyes, but then quickly closed them. Light was everywhere. I opened them slowly and looked around. Doctors surrounded me. But these weren't like the other doctors in the lab. These doctors were.... different. A nurse suddenly walked in and spoke (their words will be in italicized bolded black).
How are you feeling?
Fine, I guess. Except the light is killing me.
My apologies. I will dim them for you.
I stared at her as she turned down the lights.
... Thank.... you.
Don't mind me asking, but why do you seem so surprised?
It's just that most people don't help me.
Why not? You seem like a nice girl.
I smiled.
While that may be so, it doesn't matter in some instances. People can and will hurt you.
The nurse stared at me.
Sounds like you've had a hard life.
Very.
There was silence for a few moments.
I'm sorry to hear that.
Yeah, well it's over now. Nothing more to be said.
Silence again.
What am I doing here?
You got hit by a car. You're lucky you only got a few bruises. Most people would get a lot of broken bones or even die. Somebody called an ambulance still just to make sure you were alright.
So it's alright if I go now?
Yes, but first I'll need to see your parents' signatures.
My parents?
Yes.
Nuts. My parents. Yeah, there's only one problem with that, Nurse, I thought. My parents sold me to this wacko magician and I don't know where they are let alone want to see or even talk to them.
Uh... my parents are unavailable at the moment.
Where are they?
Ugh. And then I remembered something that was very nice.
I don't know.... but I hope I never see them again.
The Nurse's eyes got huge and her mouth dropped open. I smiled, wove my paw at her, shut my eyes, and then transported out of the hospital. I opened my eyes and looked around. Back on the street. I breathed a sigh of relief and smiled. Now, where to go? I looked over to my left and saw a path leading to a forest. I went down the path. No one was there. Perfect. Once I was far down into the woods I climbed up a big tree and rested on a branch. I shut my eyes and fell into (for once in my life) a restful sleep.

[daz]

Woah...

And maybe Amy could call it Bob II? Ooh, please tell me Rhubarb's in it!

*Dun dun dun*
Perhaps. And you shall see!!

More!!






















I had something growing inside me? Okay, now tell me that didn't sound weird.
I have no idea what it is.
Many doctors came over, then, and looked at the screen, all trying to figure out what was inside me.
It looks like it's getting bigger.
I looked at the screen, and sure enough. There was a weird sluggish thing and it was getting fatter.
We need to remove it before it kills her. If it kills her, our research will be ruined!
Yeah. They didn't care about the fact that I would be dead. They just cared about their stupid research. The doctor turned to his assistant.
Get me a knife. I'm getting that thing out. Now.
The assistant handed the doctor a knife.
It looks like it's in the stomach area, heading towards her heart.
And without any warning, he shoved the knife through my stomach and began cutting. It hurt worse than the needles. Worse than the tube that was still in my mouth. But I didn't scream. I would not give them the pleasure seeing me in pain. Never. He kept on cutting on my stomach. Suddenly, he stopped.
Hand me some pliers!
His assistant handed him some pliers, and he shoved them into my stomach, and soon he took it back out. The pliers was holding that sluggish thing that had been in my body. He put the sluggish thing (which was still moving and growing) in a plastic bag. And then I thought of something. How was I not dying? I was bleeding more than I ever had, and I knew I was still losing a lot of blood. Half my stomach was wide open.
Get me a needle.
The assistant handed the doctor a needle, and he quickly sewed my stomach back up.
Well, I think we're done for today.
And they took me back to my cage, my stomach hurting like heck. But I fell asleep, nonetheless, dreaming up nightmares all night.

dis one, and the one before it.... cause of all the cutting, and the kniving... and ewww....
COOL NEW ENTRY!!!

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Woah...

And maybe Amy could call it Bob II? Ooh, please tell me Rhubarb's in it!

*Dun dun dun*
Perhaps. And you shall see!!

More!!






















I had something growing inside me? Okay, now tell me that didn't sound weird.
I have no idea what it is.
Many doctors came over, then, and looked at the screen, all trying to figure out what was inside me.
It looks like it's getting bigger.
I looked at the screen, and sure enough. There was a weird sluggish thing and it was getting fatter.
We need to remove it before it kills her. If it kills her, our research will be ruined!
Yeah. They didn't care about the fact that I would be dead. They just cared about their stupid research. The doctor turned to his assistant.
Get me a knife. I'm getting that thing out. Now.
The assistant handed the doctor a knife.
It looks like it's in the stomach area, heading towards her heart.
And without any warning, he shoved the knife through my stomach and began cutting. It hurt worse than the needles. Worse than the tube that was still in my mouth. But I didn't scream. I would not give them the pleasure seeing me in pain. Never. He kept on cutting on my stomach. Suddenly, he stopped.
Hand me some pliers!
His assistant handed him some pliers, and he shoved them into my stomach, and soon he took it back out. The pliers was holding that sluggish thing that had been in my body. He put the sluggish thing (which was still moving and growing) in a plastic bag. And then I thought of something. How was I not dying? I was bleeding more than I ever had, and I knew I was still losing a lot of blood. Half my stomach was wide open.
Get me a needle.
The assistant handed the doctor a needle, and he quickly sewed my stomach back up.
Well, I think we're done for today.
And they took me back to my cage, my stomach hurting like heck. But I fell asleep, nonetheless, dreaming up nightmares all night.

dis one, and the one before it.... cause of all the cutting, and the kniving... and ewww....
COOL NEW ENTRY!!!

Yeah, there's actually more to her story that I didn't tell but I decided not to post it because it's a bit too violent.
And thank you!