The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

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Would this be something you would read? Should I make this "book"?

Definitely would read it and nothing needs to be changed!
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43%
This sounds like something I would pick up though it sounds a bit off?
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14%
A bit cliche for my taste, no need to change anything though.
1
14%
Why would I read this? It's horrible!
1
14%
It's ok but you should re-write or switch some stuff around.
1
14%
Your all over the place! Let me know when you start making some sense.
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Total votes : 7

Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:41 am

Ok. Well I'm writing what I was gonna make the prologue. I'll put it up when I'm done so you guys can judge on which one.
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And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
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A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Character intro and synopsis)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Wed Jul 25, 2012 10:42 am

awesome can't wait bast :)
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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:10 pm

Prologue is up!
Credits:
Plushie made by Cerestes
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Avatar Base by BronzeHalo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Bast » Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:42 pm

^
Credits:
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Pixel by lunamoth19
Avatar Base by BronzeHalo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Thu Jul 26, 2012 4:45 am

wow bast i really like the prologue it is great :D
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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Bast » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:00 am

Well I still need to go over it. I kinda just mashed it together and somewhat went over it though I need to go back for any errors I may have missed. I know that I have some grammar errors in there I always do. Lol.
Credits:
Plushie made by Cerestes
Pixel by lunamoth19
Avatar Base by BronzeHalo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:06 am

yai saw a few but other than those i thought it sounded great :)
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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Bast » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:30 am

I went back and changed some stuff around though most of it is still the same. At least it makes a little more sense.... I think I was half asleep when I did this. Lol.
Credits:
Plushie made by Cerestes
Pixel by lunamoth19
Avatar Base by BronzeHalo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Tamberea Wolfspain » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:37 am

lol well atleast it's fixed now right? lol :D
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Re: The Devil's Son (Prologue(?) Added)Poll

Postby Bast » Thu Jul 26, 2012 6:42 am

For now. Lol.
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Plushie made by Cerestes
Pixel by lunamoth19
Avatar Base by BronzeHalo
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Saamura is my character so
DO NOT steal her.


Prayer to the lost soul:
By the blood of our ancestors,
The breath of the present,
And the will of the future,
In the name of the holy trinity
I pray for your soul
A safe passage to Valhalla.

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