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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:28 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:cool.

thanks. Sorry for the shortness, she was wacked. So, I shall do another entry.... IAM. (In A Moment)





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby WhiteKitsune » Mon Jul 16, 2012 12:36 pm

This is awsomely epic :D I couldnt decide if it was epic or awsome so i said both :3
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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:13 pm

WhiteKitsune wrote:This is awsomely epic :D I couldnt decide if it was epic or awsome so i said both :3

Thanks. :3 I just need to finish my draft.





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:37 pm

I woke up in a strange place. I glanced up, and saw little light. Lucky and our friends were in the same cage as me, and Faith was thrown in, and she landed next to me. She whimpered, and I growled. The guard just shrugged, and walked off. Wait- that was the same dog who had caused the fire!
Faith and I exchanged glances, and she nodded.
Yikes!!! she mouthed. I nodded. I got up, and looked down. We had rope on our paws, well, at least I did. But- it was chewed off.
I glanced up-ward, and saw a shimmering form. It was wings, and I could've sworn I saw pearls. But I blinked, and the image disappeared. I stared at the spot, but Raining Dew came over.
Ginger, I need to tell you something. I met your sister a long time ago- we're about the same age- and, well, I saw her just now- Gin, she's being tortured.
I shrieked.
WHAT?!?! WE HAVE TO GO GET HER!!!
All the dogs held captive stared at me. I growled, and they turned back around
Okay, that did not just happen. ANYWAYS- oh, I am so freaked out.
I was about to ask why, when I looked up. Sunset was running, blinded. I gasped. A dog chased over with a key, and shoved Sunset in. Then, they disappeared.
WHAT IS IT WITH DOGS COMING INTO SIGHT, IF THEY ARE JUST GOING TO DISAPPEAR?!?!?!?!
I ran up to my sister, and laid a paw on her. Sunset whimpered,and tried to shrink back, when I ripped the blind-fold off her. She opened her eyes.
Ginger! I missed you SO much! she gasped, and hugged me. She then looked up at Dew. (I write Raining Dew or Dew) Dew- thank you for what you did for me all those years ago.
Dew smiled, and nodded. She was teary-eyed, and she squeezed Sunset. I missed you, Sun.
Sunset has a NICKNAME?!?!?! WHAT IN THE NAME OF NINJAS?!?!?!
Sunset smiled back. I missed you too, Dew.
I sighed, and got up. I saw the gleam again, and then an unlocking sound. I blinked, and turned. The door was unlocked!
RUN!!!!!!!





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Mon Jul 23, 2012 5:39 pm

I. Just. Finished. My. Draft. FINALLY!!!! I can FINALLY get to my fav. part!!!!!! Oh StarClan, I forgot. I'm on an iPad. I can't do them all. *face-palm* gr.... I have to wait until Sunday OR Monday to do them.....





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby WhiteKitsune » Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:11 pm

Soo good :3 its awsome epic amazing um.... whats another word for amazing?
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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:12 pm

Dunno.





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:16 am

I am SOOOOO sorry about it being SOOO long ago!!!! I AM going to get the next entry done soon!!!





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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby daz » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:23 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:Soo good :3 its awsome epic amazing um.... whats another word for amazing?

i know one!!! brilliant. OR flawless.
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Re: TJOG: The New Hero Rises

Postby star star. » Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:24 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:
WhiteKitsune wrote:Soo good :3 its awsome epic amazing um.... whats another word for amazing?

i know one!!! brilliant. OR flawless.

waaaa????





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