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Should AJ Have a sequel?

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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby Quiting » Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:26 am

Love it, don't give up, it takes time for people to find you. On certain days, when I have nothing to do, I go browse the story forum. And I click on every story that seems interesting. You just have to wait for people to have those days! :D
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby [Braveheart] » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:06 pm

Wish people would do that for me :(
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:25 pm

Ok, I is offiially back (i purposly messed the grammar up... it makes it sound alot more intresting) :3
Oh gosh.... i so despratly wanted to write while i was away... I have a head full of semi great ideas 8D

picklequeen wrote:Love it, don't give up, it takes time for people to find you. On certain days, when I have nothing to do, I go browse the story forum. And I click on every story that seems interesting. You just have to wait for people to have those days! :D

Thanks! this really makes my day (a common comment.. yeah so what? it still makes me feel great)

Cowgirl! wrote:Wish people would do that for me :(

Just keep on trying, ive written plenty of stories that went unoticed. Infact, add links to any stories in your signiture... oh and constantly bump... that works too. 8)
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:37 am

Ok, I feel like i have left you hanging long enough... letith thee continue thy story...

Entry 7 (In Ash's room)

I'm dreading what will happen next. Scarlet just left me in my room to pack a few essentials.
All they have told me is that I am in danger, and need to be moved. I dont want to leave, not without my family atleast. Mom and Blizard dont deserve to be abandoned.
I dont want to tell you about it AJ, it hurts to much...
My small backpack that I am packing right now will contain a torch, some water, health bars, a pen and you AJ.
Not much, but Lia said only essentials.
Enough of that. Scarlet just walked back in.
"Are you ready yet Ash? Gosh who knew you would take so long packing" She grumbled.
"I was waiting for you Scarlet, but you disapeered."I retorted
"Just hurry up and lets get back to Lia. We dont have much time before they come." The last line she said rather urgently, so i decided to be a good little Ash and follow her outside to my backgarden.
The party was still going on in the front garden. So it would be hard to sneek off. But Lia and Scarlet had other ideas. They nodded to one another as thought they were communicating in their minds.
They jumped over the fence that seperated my home from the forest behind.
"Come on Ash, we have to get moving and meet up with the others" Lia's voice sounded ergently from behind the fence.
"Ok, ok. I'm coming. If only you would just tell me whats going on..." I muttered softly to myself.
I took a step forward to the fence and jumped to the other side where my fate awaited me. From that moment AJ, I knew my life would never be the same again.

Hmmm i find that a bit boring maybe the next entry will be better o.o
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby [Braveheart] » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:22 am

yay!You are back! :D I found the entry as good as the others, Whitekitsune! keep it up!
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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby star star. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:21 pm

Agreed! This is amazing! Lol, I sure am glad this is in your sig, or I nev would of seen it. Amazing story!





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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:40 pm

Thank you! next entry is on its way :3
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby star star. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:42 pm

WhiteKitsune wrote:Thank you! next entry is on its way :3

Coolio!!!!





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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:15 pm

Naaaawww thanks :3 Heres the next entry :3

Entry 8 (in the woods)

I never thought fate could be so cruel. I mean, my friends arent what they appear to be, I had to run away from my family and apparently i'm in 'great danger'.
So here I am now in the woods at the back of my house. Lia and Scarlet are being extremely secretive and I am in no mood to bother them. So I'm going to be content with my back against the fence.
"She doesnt know Lia..."
"And? thats good isnt it?"
"You cant hide her from the truth forever Lia, One day she will find out what she is"
They thought i was asleep, very convenient.
"I'll tell her when shes safe, ok?"
With that Lia turned her back and walked over to me. Still asumeing that i wa asleep she shook me.
"What do you want" I grumbled at Lia.
"We're going to meet up with the others now. And stop being grumpy. Your here for your own good." Lia replied harshly.
"Just tell me whats going on! Why are you doing this?"
No reply. Right. Shes giving me the silent treatment. This will be extremely fun.
"I'm going to scout ahead, see if they have prepared an ambush." Scarlet anounced, walking away and leaving me with the person who turned my life upside down. Lia.
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Re: Ash's Journal (AJ)

Postby WhiteKitsune » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:44 pm

Bump!
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