•Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

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I'm Loving It!
14
50%
It's Weird
4
14%
It's ... eh
3
11%
No Dont like it
0
No votes
HORRIBLE
3
11%
It Doesn't Make Any Sence
4
14%
 
Total votes : 28

Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Mon May 28, 2012 8:23 am

Awh but okay -_-
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Mon May 28, 2012 7:25 pm

ok so I wrote #9 but I'm on my phone and I can't edit it into the first post, so i will do that first thing tomarrow ;)
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby Lazeling » Mon May 28, 2012 9:00 pm

I laughed when I read #8 just now. It's awesome! Keep going!
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Tue May 29, 2012 6:24 am

#9 is now up
The story line will pick up soon :)
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Tue May 29, 2012 7:56 am

Cant wait
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Tue May 29, 2012 10:45 am

Ok Just a warning, The story getts darker #10+
& i'm about to post # 10
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Tue May 29, 2012 11:02 am

#10 POSTED
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Tue May 29, 2012 11:39 am

Whoa. mind = blown
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Tue May 29, 2012 2:20 pm

bum-bu-bump :)
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Lazeling » Tue May 29, 2012 6:25 pm

Does the story end there? Or is there more? Either way, it's still one of the best stories I've read, including Harry Potter, etc.
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