'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
1
4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
3
12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
1
4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
4
16%
Still hate her the same.
1
4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
0
No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
4
16%
She still needs anger management.
4
16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
6
24%
 
Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:21 am

Sorry for long wait. I've got writer's block. :( Send me suggestions perhaps? :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:24 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwww....................................I'm obsessed with your books (and this word I found in my science homework: Carboxyhaemoglobin IT'S A REAL WORD!!!)
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:30 pm

TheHungerGamer wrote:Awwwwwwwwwwww....................................I'm obsessed with your books (and this word I found in my science homework: Carboxyhaemoglobin IT'S A REAL WORD!!!)

:o :o Big word! XD And, again, sorry for the wait. Very aggravating writer's block.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:01 am

Alright, alright. You've been waiting LONG ENOUGH! New entry time!






















WHAT?!
Okay. So Agent Cornelia knew where Jessy was. WHY HADN'T SHE TOLD ME?!
WHEREISSHEOMWICAN'TBELIEVEYOUDIDN'TTELLMEABOUTTHIS!!!!!!
..... You're starting to sound like Flower.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, there was a loud POOF!
Hello, my puny little pests!
AGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAHAGAHGAHGAH!!!!!!!!!!!
Not Suzi AGAIN! Oh, but that's not the worst part. The worst part was that when Suzi startled Agent Cornelia, making Agent Cornelia drop me, making the wind turn against me. Yup. It felt like the wind was pushing me down as I plumitted to the earth.
AGAHGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAAHGAHGAHAGGAGHAGAHGAHGAHGAH!!!!
I saw blue stuff coming up ahead... and quickly. I then realized it was water, and I held my breath as I landed head first into the water. Luckily, the water was deep so I didn't hit my head on anything. I opened my eyes and swam to the surface. I looked up, and I saw Agent Cornelia gone. Suzi was too. This was bad. Oh so very bad. But of COURSE things had to get worse! Out of the water, a giant lizard roared when he saw me. I decided to scream some more.
AGHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHGAHGA!!!!!!!!!!
Well, this was turning out to be a very good rescue mission.











(Sorry for the short entry, guys.)

Also, thank you Harpest for the idea of the giant lizard and Suzi appearing! :)
Last edited by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • on Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:14 am, edited 1 time in total.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:02 am

Wow. I just realised something. The last entry, everything Amy said was in capital letters. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:07 am

((yay!!! my idea sounds...cool when you write it!!! yayz!!!

yup - everything in CaPiTaL lEtTeRs!!! :D
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:15 am

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
*ahem* to quote amy
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:15 am

Harpest wrote:
((yay!!! my idea sounds...cool when you write it!!! yayz!!!

yup - everything in CaPiTaL lEtTeRs!!! :D

Yerp, I did. AGH! FORGOT TO CREDIT YOU! I hate it when I do that! XD I just went and edited it.
xxazul63xx wrote:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
*ahem* to quote amy

lol

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:17 am

aha!! Azul - one of you're 'h's have been cut off halfway through!!! lol.
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:27 am

Harpest wrote:
aha!! Azul - one of you're 'h's have been cut off halfway through!!! lol.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOW WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE! *runs in circles panicing*
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