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by Vaera Playrite » Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:24 am
Oh cool!Thanks.
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Singing a song of a n g r y men?
It is the music of a people
Who will n o t be slaves again!
When the beating of your h e a r t
Echoes the beating of the d r u m s
There is a life about to start
When t o m o r r o w comes!
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Lost in the valley of the n i g h t ?
It is the music of a people
Who are c l i m b i n g to the light!
For the wretched of the e a r t h
There is a flame that never d i e s
Even the darkest nights will end
And the s u n will rise!
-Books I need to Finish or Read-
Les Miserables
Lord of the Rings
Septimus Heap: Flyte
The Mortal Instruments Series
The Infernal Devices Series
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by Wolf'sflame » Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:28 am
Here the other two edited, now you can swtich the older ones with these newer versions:

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I usually
write, draw, AND I am making a Video Game (And I'm studying for exams!) and I'm currently watching
*unknown* so be patient when it comes to replying to an rp.
I will get on it. K, thanks!

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by Vaera Playrite » Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:32 am
Thanks you a million times,plus 6.I couldn't edit them myself.
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Singing a song of a n g r y men?
It is the music of a people
Who will n o t be slaves again!
When the beating of your h e a r t
Echoes the beating of the d r u m s
There is a life about to start
When t o m o r r o w comes!
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Lost in the valley of the n i g h t ?
It is the music of a people
Who are c l i m b i n g to the light!
For the wretched of the e a r t h
There is a flame that never d i e s
Even the darkest nights will end
And the s u n will rise!
-Books I need to Finish or Read-
Les Miserables
Lord of the Rings
Septimus Heap: Flyte
The Mortal Instruments Series
The Infernal Devices Series
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by Wolf'sflame » Sun Feb 19, 2012 9:35 am
Welcome, it's no problem. Now let's work at the task at hand, getting students and figuring out the practice roleplays.
I usually
write, draw, AND I am making a Video Game (And I'm studying for exams!) and I'm currently watching
*unknown* so be patient when it comes to replying to an rp.
I will get on it. K, thanks!

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by .Arrow. » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:01 am
There are quite a few coding errors on the front page, if you wish to make this look more professional you may want to consider fixing those. Especially on the 'Creating Your Character' and 'Novice vs. Advanced' posts.
Also, you need to put a space after punction like '.' and ','. Eg. "Hello, I'm new."<-proper vs. "Hello,I'm new."<-improper. People that are interested might see that and decide not to join...
Have either of you participated in a literate roleplay?
I really would like to see the RP School up and running again, so I'm just trying to help out.
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by Vaera Playrite » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:08 am
And yes,I have.From time to time I do use proper grammar etc. outside of role plays. Just not always. I always use proper grammar and such inside of role plays. Would you like to be a tutor or something else?
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Singing a song of a n g r y men?
It is the music of a people
Who will n o t be slaves again!
When the beating of your h e a r t
Echoes the beating of the d r u m s
There is a life about to start
When t o m o r r o w comes!
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Lost in the valley of the n i g h t ?
It is the music of a people
Who are c l i m b i n g to the light!
For the wretched of the e a r t h
There is a flame that never d i e s
Even the darkest nights will end
And the s u n will rise!
-Books I need to Finish or Read-
Les Miserables
Lord of the Rings
Septimus Heap: Flyte
The Mortal Instruments Series
The Infernal Devices Series
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by Vaera Playrite » Sun Feb 19, 2012 11:05 am
Okie dokie
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Singing a song of a n g r y men?
It is the music of a people
Who will n o t be slaves again!
When the beating of your h e a r t
Echoes the beating of the d r u m s
There is a life about to start
When t o m o r r o w comes!
Do you hear the people s i n g?
Lost in the valley of the n i g h t ?
It is the music of a people
Who are c l i m b i n g to the light!
For the wretched of the e a r t h
There is a flame that never d i e s
Even the darkest nights will end
And the s u n will rise!
-Books I need to Finish or Read-
Les Miserables
Lord of the Rings
Septimus Heap: Flyte
The Mortal Instruments Series
The Infernal Devices Series
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