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Which is your favorite book?

Book One: TIAJNAD
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12%
Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal
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Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further
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12%
Book Four: The Big City And Bob!
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Book Five: No Place To Run
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All Of Them: Book One: TIAJNAD, Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal, Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further, Book Four: The Big City And Bob!, And Book Five: No Place To Run
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Total votes : 33

Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:02 pm

Ellies wrote:Thanks ^^ way better! i have bad eyes! i hade to get out of a disco once! (darn bright lights)

Wow. I understand, though. I have very sensative ears.
Kayla wrote:Please please Write moar!

Okay, time for more!

















Mine and Suzi's noses where almost touching, now. I could smell her pepermint breath. What? Not all bad people's breath smells bad, although most people think that bad people's breath would smell revolting, Suzi's didn't. Anyways, she growled at me, and I felt like fainting.
You caused my suffering.
I didn't do anything to you!
You really don't realize it, do you?
What?
Your parents, your REAL parents, murdered my parents.
I stared. No way.
There was once a war between my parents' people, and your parents' people! Your parents' people won, and guess what? My parents weren't killed in the war, but instead they where killed in their sleep! Your parents, Cornelia and Roger, put posinouse slugs in my parents bed, and they died! Your parents couldn't just stop at the end of the war, they had to poison my parents! And they would have poisoned me too, if I hadn't been sleeping over at a friends house! I was only five years old, Amy!
No, no, no! This wasn't true! It couldn't be..... could it?
So, you will fase the same fate as my parents did. Rhubarb, bring me the jar!
A jar. Wow. That seemed really scary. Rhubarb handed Suzi a jar, and Suzi unscrewed the lid. She held wooden tongs and brought a large slug out of the jar. The slug was encircled my electricity, and it had fangs. Okay. Maybe a jar that held poisonous slugs was scary. Suzi put the slug back in and then screwed the lid back on.
Take her to the room.
Rhubarb unchained me, put handcuffs around my ankles and wrists, and led me into a room. He chained me to a bed that was next to another bed. A dog was chained to the other bed, and he was shivering with fear.
Who's that?
I pointed to the dog next to me.
Oh, some spy that I caught. Okay, Rhuby.
It came out "Ruby". Rhubarb growled.
Don't call me that!!!
Just open the jar already!
Alright, alright! I'm going!
Rhubarb opened the jar, and Suzi took out a slug with her wooden tongs. She held it an inch away from the spy's face. The spy shivered in fear. Suzi then threw the slug at the spy's face, and the spy screamed as the slug electrocuted him and started eating him. I wanted to look away, but I couldn't. I couldn't block out the screaming, either. I nearly fainted when I saw the blood. When the slug was finished eating the spy, he was ten times his regular small size. Rhubarb opened up a large pet carrier, and Suzi put the slug in it. Rhubarb put the slug in the pet carrier to the side. Suzi now was standing in front of me, holding a new slug.
Any last words?
She was holding the slug a centimeter away from my nose. I nearly hurled.
Nothing? Alright, sute yourself.
She then threw the slug at me. Just as I felt it's slimy body almost touching my fur, there was a loud explosion and before I knew it, Rhubarb was knocked to the ground, Suzi disappeared along with the slug, and I was unchained from the bed. I looked around, trying to figure out what had happened. And then I saw them.
What are you guys doing here?!
It seems like you're upset to see us!
Ya, what's the deal with that?
I smiled as I looked at Jenette, Pete, and Jessy. Jenette was sitting on Rhubarb, who was trying to break free of her butt. It was impossible. Jenette wasn't even big, but man did she sure know how to make herself heavy. Pete had unchained me from the bed, and Jessy was smiling.
Did you fix Jessy's voice?
Not yet, but I'm hoping we will soon!
You'll be okay, Jessy.
Jessy ran to me and hugged me, and I hugged her back. When we where done hugging, I looked at Jenette.
Where did Suzi go?
I don't know. She just disappeared. And she took that slug with her, thankfully.
I looked at Pete, to Jenette, to Jessy. I smiled at them. They had saved me.

When we where back at HQ, I couldn't look at Agent Cornelia and Agent Roger. I didn't know weather to believe Suzi or not. She was known to be a liar, but what is she was telling the truth, for once? But what if she was lying? I knew that they where my parents once and for all, at least. I decided I had to do something. I walked up to them.
Mom, Dad?
What?
Your my parents.
Roger and Cornelia looked at each other, as if remembering something, and then Roger gasped.
Amy?
I smiled.
Dad.
I hugged him, and then hugged Cornelia. Yes, they where truly my parents. We threw a party in HQ, and we danced alone.... until Pete walked up to me. Suddenly, romantic music was playing. I looked to my left, and there was Jessy, sitting on a CD player, playing the romantic music, and giving me the thumbs up sign. I turned back to Pete.
*Ahem* Uh..... may I have this.... uh.... dance?
I smiled.
Sure.
We danced and danced. The music didn't stop. What, did Jessy have the song on repeat? Finally, when it had been about twentry minutes, I picked up a shoe, and threw it at the CD player. The music only played faster and more annoyingly. I sighed in frustration, and looked at Jenette. Jenette nodded, and went over to the CD player. She took out a baseball bat (how did she get THAT?), and wacked and wacked teh CD player. Then, she smashed it on the ground about twenty times, took it outside, threw it into the street, got it run over by a giant truck, and then threw it in the trash. She looked at me and smiled. Well, at least that was taken care of. I looked over at Pete, who had a distrubed look on his face. I'm sure he was thinking that Jenette was very aggresive. When the party was over, I went into my room and climbed into bed and thought things over. How could I control my power? Did Cornelia and Roger really kill Suzi's parents? Was there really a war? How could I fix Jessy's voice? Could I ever trust anybody again? I closed my eyes and sighed, and knew that only time would tell.



















THAT IS THE END OF BOOK FIVE! Hoped ya liked it! :D
Last edited by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • on Sat Mar 24, 2012 9:00 am, edited 3 times in total.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby kaypatts » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:08 pm

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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:14 pm

Kayla wrote:If U dun start writing the six book i'll flip

.... I JUST FINISHED THE FIFTH BOOK! XD If I didn't know better, I'd think you stalkerwans where part vulture! XD Nah, I'm kidding. I'll try to write it soon, don't worry! :D

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Lunala » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:29 pm

Ellies wrote:I tallyed up the Write mores in the all books!

THE ANSWER IS = 78 + (lost count ;___________;)

Wow... I just wanna say, don't just say "Write moor!!" for a post... That's sort of spam if you don't say anything else. And if one of these books got locked, I'd be sooo sad...

For the new entry, oh my gosh... . . . The books just keep getting better!
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:33 pm

Rotten Banana wrote:
Ellies wrote:I tallyed up the Write mores in the all books!

THE ANSWER IS = 78 + (lost count ;___________;)

Wow... I just wanna say, don't just say "Write moor!!" for a post... That's sort of spam if you don't say anything else. And if one of these books got locked, I'd be sooo sad...

For the new entry, oh my gosh... . . . The books just keep getting better!

Ya, I realized that too (even though I do it myself. XD). Add something else about the book, other then WRITE MORE. Like, maybe make a banner and post that with the WRITE MORE. Or maybe write a theme song and post that with WRITE MORE. Something like that.

And yes, Indah is a backstabber! He is ebil! :evil:

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:36 pm

Stay awsome JF ^^
Hii I'm Ellies (She/Her),
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:34 pm

Ellies wrote:Stay awsome JF ^^

Okay, I shal! :D *Starts to think of awesome things* "OH! I know what's awesome. MY STALKERWANS! :)"

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:53 pm

I've started writing the sixth book: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=969938

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 7:13 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I've started writing the sixth book: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=969938

Quoting it just in case somebody missed it.

Also, look at this:

1st book: *Hawky*
2nd book: Zookrates
3rd book: Manafest (Sorry, she deleted her account, but she's my BFF in real life, so I'll tell her there! :))
4th book: Katomorakwarrior
5th book: *Blackberry*

It's a list on who posted first (besides me) on each book. Now, who will be the first to post on the sixth book (besides me)?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Zookrates » Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:33 pm

Loool, looking back at my comments, so much grammar mistakes and more. Anyway, decided to read your story again, cus I kinda lost it...
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