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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:52 am

Ahhh, a nice, long, satisfying section : P

Hmm... maybe he's related to someone from the Regime Change?... I dunno xD
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby 11zoey11 » Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:43 am

It seems like Break knows much more than he's letting on......
I wonder who he really is............
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:29 pm

Ah yes, he tis be another mystery :3
I give you some words with missing letters that contains a hint.

G_ _ GS
_ _ LT_
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Mon Feb 07, 2011 12:53 pm

And unfortunately, you are incorrect, though not too far from the truth I suppose.
And Ser, you lazy bum :P Ah, happy you guys are happy I'm back XD
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Ser'reth » Mon Feb 07, 2011 1:07 pm

Hey! xD

Gangs
Cults?
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Mon Feb 07, 2011 1:09 pm

I can't do hangman to save my life xD But Ser seems to have gotten it : P
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby blue. » Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:00 am

Your story is awesome :D You should publish it! I can imagine the cover, Pinnacle in fancy black letters then Roses with their thorny stems, Daggers, Ice, Jarrah Trees, Badgers, Grass surrrounding it.... getting carried away here but you totally should :D
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Tue Feb 08, 2011 12:11 pm

XD bwahahahahaaa
I wish, I wish XD
BUT THANKIE MUCH FOR WATCHING :D

And why yus Ser. I proclaim you UNLAZIFIED.

Mooooooo
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Ser'reth » Tue Feb 08, 2011 1:12 pm

*fistpump* I have special. eue
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:56 am

I WRITE MOAR <3
Wow. I actually made a heart. I never do that.
WELL!
Onwards...
LE GASP *Ser, your speechy patterns are affecting me :P*
I'm on Chapter 2 now :D
Not too big a piece but something to keep teh hounds at bay

Chapter 2-Home
Ice stood up and swept down the ladder. I watched, feeling sort of stunned. He went to Badger and spoke quickly to him. Badger nodded and went over to get Flyby. Grasswhistle and Rosethorn smoothly leapt onto the first floor and told everyone the news. Were we evacuating? What the heck? Just on the slim chance we were going to get found out? I watched as Dagger filed out, yanking Coon along behind him.
Snapping out of it, I examined Break, hoping he'd get back to the mood he was in just recently, no matter how malicious and creepy. He stirred briefly, and sat up, hugging his knees to his chest. I felt a throb of sadness. He probably had a personality, a life before his incident. But now he was a broken shell of a person.
I coaxed him into standing up before Badger appeared, Flyby sitting contentedly in his arms.
"I can get him," He said, gesturing that I take Flyby. Gratefully I put my arms around the toddler and left Badger to take care of Break.
I climbed down the ladder with one hand (which is not easy with a toddler in the other arm, by the way). Laurels stood, waiting at the bottom.
"Do you need something?" I asked.
"Nah. I'm just waiting for Break," She said, narrowing her eyes and looking up behind me. Glancing back around, I see Badger's having better luck trying to get Break to move.
I hurry out the door to find Ice, to see and ask if this is really necessary. Everyone besides Badger, Break, Laurels, and of course, me and Flyby, is sitting around the firepit, listening to Ice speak quickly and urgently.
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My kismesis is Coastal Kid, so ignore us if we're arguing. Hope to get something nice up soon c:
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