No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

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Which is your favorite book?

Book One: TIAJNAD
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12%
Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal
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Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further
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12%
Book Four: The Big City And Bob!
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3%
Book Five: No Place To Run
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No votes
All Of Them: Book One: TIAJNAD, Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal, Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further, Book Four: The Big City And Bob!, And Book Five: No Place To Run
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73%
 
Total votes : 33

Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat Dec 31, 2011 3:43 am

I need more! GIVE ME MORE NOW! please? (^w^)
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Dec 31, 2011 2:56 pm

Kayla wrote:MOAR

As you wish! :)
katomorakwarrior wrote:*ahem* I just happen to despise Pete.
Anyway, Keep on writing, JF.
Not right now, though.
The story keeps getting more and more interesting.

*Gasps* Why do you despide him?
And I will! Don't worry!
And thanks! :)
Ellies wrote:Almost time for a new book ^^ (yay)

The last one was 14 pages! I CAN't Wait!!

Yup, almost time! :D
xxazul63xx wrote:I need more! GIVE ME MORE NOW! please? (^w^)

Don't worry, look below for more TIAJNAD! :)

























I fell and fell down the volcano. I screamed the whole way down. Suddenly, I fell onto something. Luckily, it wasn't lava. Rhubarb was now standing beside me, laughing histerically.
You......... you should have......... seen your...... your face!
He kept on laughing.
Okay, okay. You can stop now. So, what happened? Where am I?
You're in my factory.
I had a puzzled look on my face.
My factory. Where I build all my things.
I still had a puzzled look on my face. Rhubarb growled, frustrated.
I build things!
Ohhh! That makes more sense. But why is it in a volcano?
'Cause nobody goes down here.
I looked around. I realized that I had fallen onto a ledge, and Rhubarb must've flown down before I hit it.
Oh, here it comes.
What?
You'll see...
A mine cart suddenly rolled beside the ledge. I hadn't even noticed the tracks standing beside the cart. Rhubarb hopped into the cart.
Come on!
Okay....
Rhubarb helped me into the cart.
Hold on.
I held onto the bar, and the mine cart rolled in a straight line. It suddenly started going up, up, up. This could only mean one thing. If it goes up, somewhere it goes down. And then I saw it. As we reached the very top of the track, I looked down. Never look down. I saw the long drop down. And then it happened. The cart tipped forward and we zoomed down. I felt the wind blow my fur back, and I think I fainted for 2 seconds. When we FINALLY reached the bottom, the minecart slowed and stopped.
Here we are.
Rhubarb hopped out of the cart with ease. I wobbled out of it, and fell over from dizziness. I soon got better and could walk straight. We walked forward, and into a room.
What are we doing here?
Don't worry, it will be..... alright......
Rhubarb suddenly grabbed me and flipped me over onto the ground and knocked the wind out of me. He then grabbed me before my breath came back and chained me to the wall. The breath finally came back.
What are you doing?!
Working for me.
My mouth dropped open as Suzi stepped in front of me. She was grown. Not a puppy anymore. She had escape prison.
What?! How did you escape?!
A certain dog named Indah gave me a medicine that made me bigger and 3 times stronger. So I broke out of prison, and Rhubarb here captured you for me. I wasn't going to let that fat dude kill you before I got to!
I was chained to a wall with Suzi in the room. This wasn't going to be good.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:27 am

Suzi! let me aqt her! i gonna kill her! *Snarl growl, hiss, screech, howl* .............................. Ahem.......... sorry for that
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby maroon. » Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:50 am

Omg!Moreeeeeeeeee.......

That's an awesome entry JF.No,wait what am I saying...all your entries are AWESOME!
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:32 am

I tallyed up the Write mores in the all books!

THE ANSWER IS = 78 + (lost count ;___________;)
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:55 am

xxazul63xx wrote:Suzi! let me aqt her! i gonna kill her! *Snarl growl, hiss, screech, howl* .............................. Ahem.......... sorry for that

lol!
.R u e. wrote:Omg!Moreeeeeeeeee.......

That's an awesome entry JF.No,wait what am I saying...all your entries are AWESOME!

Aww, thanks! :D
Ellies wrote:I tallyed up the Write mores in the all books!

THE ANSWER IS = 78 + (lost count ;___________;)

OMW.... that's a lot of "Write Mores". XD

ANNOUNCEMENT! ANNOUNCEMENT! ANNOUNCEMENT! ANNOUNCEMENT! .... Okay, if you didn't catch it the first time, this is an announcement. This book is almost done, and I will be needing TITLE SUGGESTIONS for the sixth book ( :shock: OMW! That's the most books I've ever written!). But do not post the suggestions HERE or anywhere else. Make sure to PM them to me, and don't post them anywhere else. But I really need help for the sixth book title. Please help and send me a PM (you can send more then one suggestion for the title)! Oh, and I will also write more later. I promise! :D
Last edited by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • on Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:19 am, edited 1 time in total.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:17 pm

That hurt my eyes~ (the are very sensitive)
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:20 am

Ellies wrote:That hurt my eyes~ (the are very sensitive)

Sorry, I edited it. Is it better?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:18 pm

Thanks ^^ way better! i have bad eyes! i hade to get out of a disco once! (darn bright lights)
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby kaypatts » Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:21 pm

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