Kayla wrote:MOAR
As you wish!

katomorakwarrior wrote:*ahem* I just happen to despise Pete.
Anyway, Keep on writing, JF.
Not right now, though.
The story keeps getting more and more interesting.
*Gasps* Why do you despide him?
And I will! Don't worry!
And thanks!

Ellies wrote:Almost time for a new book ^^ (yay)
The last one was 14 pages! I CAN't Wait!!
Yup, almost time!

xxazul63xx wrote:I need more! GIVE ME MORE NOW! please? (^w^)
Don't worry, look below for more TIAJNAD!

I fell and fell down the volcano. I screamed the whole way down. Suddenly, I fell onto something. Luckily, it wasn't lava. Rhubarb was now standing beside me, laughing histerically.
You......... you should have......... seen your...... your face!He kept on laughing.
Okay, okay. You can stop now. So, what happened? Where am I?You're in my factory.I had a puzzled look on my face.
My factory. Where I build all my things.I still had a puzzled look on my face. Rhubarb growled, frustrated.
I build things!Ohhh! That makes more sense. But why is it in a volcano?'Cause nobody goes down here.I looked around. I realized that I had fallen onto a ledge, and Rhubarb must've flown down before I hit it.
Oh, here it comes.What?You'll see...A mine cart suddenly rolled beside the ledge. I hadn't even noticed the tracks standing beside the cart. Rhubarb hopped into the cart.
Come on!Okay....Rhubarb helped me into the cart.
Hold on.I held onto the bar, and the mine cart rolled in a straight line. It suddenly started going up, up, up. This could only mean one thing. If it goes up, somewhere it goes down. And then I saw it. As we reached the very top of the track, I looked down. Never look down. I saw the long drop down. And then it happened. The cart tipped forward and we zoomed down. I felt the wind blow my fur back, and I think I fainted for 2 seconds. When we FINALLY reached the bottom, the minecart slowed and stopped.
Here we are.Rhubarb hopped out of the cart with ease. I wobbled out of it, and fell over from dizziness. I soon got better and could walk straight. We walked forward, and into a room.
What are we doing here?Don't worry, it will be..... alright......Rhubarb suddenly grabbed me and flipped me over onto the ground and knocked the wind out of me. He then grabbed me before my breath came back and chained me to the wall. The breath finally came back.
What are you doing?!Working for me.My mouth dropped open as Suzi stepped in front of me. She was grown. Not a puppy anymore. She had escape prison.
What?! How did you escape?!A certain dog named Indah gave me a medicine that made me bigger and 3 times stronger. So I broke out of prison, and Rhubarb here captured you for me. I wasn't going to let that fat dude kill you before I got to!I was chained to a wall with Suzi in the room. This wasn't going to be good.