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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:44 pm

♥SilverRose♥ wrote:Hmm......Well, I suppose I could write a fairly good one, off of personal experience. ^.^ I'll explain the personal experience meaning afterward.
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Once, there was a young girl, maybe 19 years old (lets call her.... violet.)....who had a friend of the same age (lets call her....victoria.). They were best friends...they did everything together, along with their other friend (lets call her....april.). They had all been best friends for years, and none of them ever suspected that something was terribly wrong.
One night, on the new moon, Victoria and Violet went down to a feild they knew in the woods, to play some soccer. It was a dark night, and Violet wasn't looking. Victoria's eyes glowed red, and she thrust a knife into Violets back, killing her. Victoria drobbed the rusted dagger, and left to find April, her eyes turning hazel once again.
It took many weeks for Victoria to organize another plan, to kill April, but eventually she did. And now, as she roams the world, looking for more prey, the monsterous killings left their mark. For, now, both of the courpses had two, small, aberely noticeable holes in their necks, their blood drained, fueling Victoria's strength....
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Okay, a bit of an explination is definantly in order. Unfortunately, this is SOMEWHAT of a true story. Let's get the characters in order fist, I am Violet, my old friend named Victoria is Victoria (i didn't bother to change her name), and My other friend named Angela is April.
Victoria did indeed try to murder me, but she obviously did not succeed. All I have is a scar on my leg from the attack. Victoria did, horribly, kill Angela. I miss her everyday. Victoria is not a vampire, I just made that up to make the story more creepy. The story isn't all that fritening, but the experience and the fact that it really happened is.
R.I.P, My dear friend, Angela. We'll allways remember you, Sunny....



im so sorry for your friend (Angela AKA April). i hope Victoria is captured and put in jail. it must have been a scary experience! but that is realy uncalled for! i would never expect a CS user to be a (almost) murder victam. and the other story w/ the dog is scary! i am so scared of those kinda "humans can lick to" stories! creeeeepy!
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Ryuzaki:. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:48 pm

I know right? The dog story was just terrible...the doll one was too, ugh, shivers.... O.o

Well, I must admit, it wasn't so much that it all happened, as it was one of my most trusted friends that betrayed us so. I thought....that I could trust her.....that I could.....trust her... :cry: That's what hurts. Morse than my scar, more than Sunny's death, more than all of it.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:50 pm

ahh yes... the doll one also gave me the creeps! "five finger, finger" i will have that in my head all night!
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
Neon Trees; Animal


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Twix :3 » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:52 pm

@SilverRose--thats scary...Stay safe. I know what you mean...broken trust is the worst thing besides death. I would be so scared...

@humans can lick- i guess thats scary, but i dont get easily scared. XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Mon Sep 27, 2010 1:17 pm

To SilverRose, Yeah i know what you feel like my best friend died a few years ago...well she was murdered
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shy » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:22 pm

Is it safe?

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chapter.Eleven » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:54 pm

Here's something i thought up just a moment ago. None of it's real.

Lisa walked along with her dog down to the park, like always. Every evening in the summer, at sunset, she'd walk down the street to the park and play with her dog until it was dark, then go back home. Today, though, it was raining.

She grabbed her dog's leash and started back, then realized she forgot the frizbee that she tossed around for her dog. She knew her dog wouldn't like it if she forgot it, so she started to go back, tying the leash to a tree. "I'll be back in a minute, Pups." She said, smiling brightly, and ran off to the park to grab the toy.

About two minutes later, sshe came back with the toy, and walked up to the tree. The leash was gone.

"Very funny, Pups. Come on, here boy! I got your frizbeeeee!" She called, but when Pups didn't show up, she started to get worried. Then she saw a small drop of blood fall with the rain, and looked up at the tree.

There, she saw Pups, or, at least, what seemed to be Pups. All the skin was inside out, bones were sticking out, and the poor dog's heart was hanging fron a single vain. It wwas still pulsing, and the dog was making short, gurgling sounds of pain. She screamed loudly.

Then, she heard the voice of something.

"You said you'd be back in a minute. You lied. You were gone for two." Came the voice of something.

When her parents came to find her, they found an inside out, dead girl, clutching the leash to an almost dead dog.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chapter.Eleven » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:57 pm

♥SilverRose♥ wrote:Hmm......Well, I suppose I could write a fairly good one, off of personal experience. ^.^ I'll explain the personal experience meaning afterward.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Once, there was a young girl, maybe 19 years old (lets call her.... violet.)....who had a friend of the same age (lets call her....victoria.). They were best friends...they did everything together, along with their other friend (lets call her....april.). They had all been best friends for years, and none of them ever suspected that something was terribly wrong.
One night, on the new moon, Victoria and Violet went down to a feild they knew in the woods, to play some soccer. It was a dark night, and Violet wasn't looking. Victoria's eyes glowed red, and she thrust a knife into Violets back, killing her. Victoria drobbed the rusted dagger, and left to find April, her eyes turning hazel once again.
It took many weeks for Victoria to organize another plan, to kill April, but eventually she did. And now, as she roams the world, looking for more prey, the monsterous killings left their mark. For, now, both of the courpses had two, small, aberely noticeable holes in their necks, their blood drained, fueling Victoria's strength....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay, a bit of an explination is definantly in order. Unfortunately, this is SOMEWHAT of a true story. Let's get the characters in order fist, I am Violet, my old friend named Victoria is Victoria (i didn't bother to change her name), and My other friend named Angela is April.
Victoria did indeed try to murder me, but she obviously did not succeed. All I have is a scar on my leg from the attack. Victoria did, horribly, kill Angela. I miss her everyday. Victoria is not a vampire, I just made that up to make the story more creepy. The story isn't all that fritening, but the experience and the fact that it really happened is.
R.I.P, My dear friend, Angela. We'll allways remember you, Sunny....


...Your 'friend' tried to murder you? And killed someone else? What was she, effin' crazy?!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Ryuzaki:. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:50 pm

Well, to be honest, I'm not entirely sure. :| She never seemed to be, for the many years I knew her. But, then again, you never truely know a person... :oops:

@I-miss-u, I'm sorry about your friend also. It is very hard to loose someone you're close to. Sometimes we don't realize how close we are to someone until they're gone. :cry:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:50 am

Nekox wrote:
♥SilverRose♥ wrote:Hmm......Well, I suppose I could write a fairly good one, off of personal experience. ^.^ I'll explain the personal experience meaning afterward.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Once, there was a young girl, maybe 19 years old (lets call her.... violet.)....who had a friend of the same age (lets call her....victoria.). They were best friends...they did everything together, along with their other friend (lets call her....april.). They had all been best friends for years, and none of them ever suspected that something was terribly wrong.
One night, on the new moon, Victoria and Violet went down to a feild they knew in the woods, to play some soccer. It was a dark night, and Violet wasn't looking. Victoria's eyes glowed red, and she thrust a knife into Violets back, killing her. Victoria drobbed the rusted dagger, and left to find April, her eyes turning hazel once again.
It took many weeks for Victoria to organize another plan, to kill April, but eventually she did. And now, as she roams the world, looking for more prey, the monsterous killings left their mark. For, now, both of the courpses had two, small, aberely noticeable holes in their necks, their blood drained, fueling Victoria's strength....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay, a bit of an explination is definantly in order. Unfortunately, this is SOMEWHAT of a true story. Let's get the characters in order fist, I am Violet, my old friend named Victoria is Victoria (i didn't bother to change her name), and My other friend named Angela is April.
Victoria did indeed try to murder me, but she obviously did not succeed. All I have is a scar on my leg from the attack. Victoria did, horribly, kill Angela. I miss her everyday. Victoria is not a vampire, I just made that up to make the story more creepy. The story isn't all that fritening, but the experience and the fact that it really happened is.
R.I.P, My dear friend, Angela. We'll allways remember you, Sunny....



im so sorry for your friend (Angela AKA April). i hope Victoria is captured and put in jail. it must have been a scary experience! but that is realy uncalled for! i would never expect a CS user to be a (almost) murder victam. and the other story w/ the dog is scary! i am so scared of those kinda "humans can lick to" stories! creeeeepy!
The almost same thing happened to me!!!!! My friend Mika tried to strangle my friend Chris ( But thankfully failed) and broke my toe ( yes my toe... it was almost fatal!!!) and then jumped to her death of her garage roof. No one knows why she tried to do that and Chris said he did nothing wrong... I can believe him, can't I !!? :shock:
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