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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby WhiteWinterWolf » Fri May 06, 2011 10:13 am

This is one thats not really scary at all but plays on your mind. I was told this when was upset at an old ex-friends house. I cant quit remember the begining but here goes.

There was this deep dark cave that was told to be haunted in the woods. One day 3 friends came across it, not knowing the tales of it. One ventured in to see if it was safe and heard a menicing voice "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" he ran out totally afraid running behind a tree. The second friend went in calling the first a coward. He went in a little way more than the first but again heard the same voice "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" and ran out scared joining the first friend behind the tree. The last one was much braver and went into the cave. He heard the voice "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" but continued in not afraid. "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" again the voice echoed louder. "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" This time he saw that the voice was coming from a dimly lit cove. When looking round he saw a child by a small fire. The boy picked his nose and pulled out a boggy saying "Got you, got you. Now I'm going to eat you!" promptly eating it afterwards.

Kids are nasty scary gross things XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Sun May 08, 2011 3:05 am

WhiteRoseWolf wrote:Well at school I walked into the bathroom then a stall. I stood up looking at it. I saw a hole in the ciling. It scared me so much I ran out screaming LOL


I swear Im haunted By my uncle,At school I always here Footsteps coming in the toilet door then I here My name getting called and it sounds like him...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby JDsalamander » Sun May 08, 2011 3:34 am

great stories you guys


here's one based on the 'guy calling form upstairs' one that i wrote


Chelsea sighed. She was never gonna finish this research paper. She looked at the clock. 10:30
"Great," She said. "I might actually get a few hours of sleep." Suddenly, she got an e-mail.


'Hi'

she wrote back, 'who the heck are you?'

'that's not the question'

'then what IS the question?'

'you'll see, soon enough'

'look, i've got a lot of homework, so stop emailing me, k?'

'ok. i won't email you anymore.'

Suddenly, the phone rang.

"Hello?!" Chelsea asked, annoyed.

"You said not to email you."

"How do you know my number?!" She shouted, worried.

No reply, just the buzzing noise the phone always makes.
Then, Chelsea covered the end of the phone that made the noise.
She could still hear it, from upstairs.
Terrified, she bolted to the door.
The next morning, her parents came home to find Chelsea gone, but the computer reading,

"REMEMBER TO FINISH YOUR HOMEWORK,CHELSEA"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby In The Darke » Sun May 08, 2011 4:27 am

The Legend of Alisa Winter.
Alisa was a sweet girl, always smiling. She was going to turn 15 in a weeks time. Her grandfather had died of a heart attack a month ago, but she didnt like him very much, he was mean. But sadly her grandmother had just past too. She had loved her grandmother, more than anyone. She was the one to find her. In her own home. Laying dead in a pool of red with a knife producing from her chest. No one knew who could have killed her, and after 3 months of searching, no one was accused. One of Alisa's friends had told her about ouija boards, and how you can talk to ghosts if you use one. The next day Alisa bought one from an antique shop on her way home from school. When she got home her parents werent in. She went up to her room, took the ouija board from her bag and set it on the floor. She called out to hergrandmother. "Are you there granny? I miss you." She waited, but nothing happened. "Gran?" She was just about to give up and cry when the speller started to move. Yes it read. "Oh gran I've missed you so much!" It began to spell something. Alisa read hte letters out as they came. "D. I. E." Her heart sped up. "Your not my gran, who are you?!" D. I. E. D. I. E. D. I. E. D. I. E. "No! NO!" She jumped up and through the board out her bed room window. After standing, looking at the board from her room, she turned to sit on her bed. And walked into her grampa, holding the same blood covered knife she seen in her grandmother. "Goodnight deary." He whispered into her ear. She screamed.

This was in the news the next day.
'Girl found dead in locked house, serial killer suspected. Details are being withheld for now.......'

They didnt know who the girl was at first, not even her parents could tell due to the fact she had no skin, no face, just blood and bones... Alisa was a nice girl.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby JDsalamander » Sun May 08, 2011 4:40 am

Once there was a girl named Violet, who was considered a bully at her school. She would always tease another girl at the school, Maria, who died one day, due to unknown causes. Then one day, years later, Violet sat at home, reading. She got a phone call."Hello?" She asked. No reply. Shrugging, she turned around and screamed.Behind her was Maria, holding a knife.Violet screamed.The next day, she was found, her tounge had been cut out, and on the wall, written in blood, was "IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANYTHING NICE TO SAY, DON'T SAY ANYTHING AT ALL!"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby exorcism » Sun May 08, 2011 4:57 am

How could I have missed this?
I've heard this one over and over, and I've told tells of it myself.
It's called~ Hospitals and Nurses

It was only supposed to be a dare. It wasn't meant to turn out like this.
There were four children, all around the age of twelve. There were two boys and two girls.
The girls were nicknamed Crusix and Codex. Their real names were Kestrel and Kristen.
The boys were only called Ian and Kyle. No nicknames.
The boys had dared Crusix and Codex to into what the town deemed The Haunted Hospital.
It was an abandoned hospital, but no one knows why. Some say it was because the patients all went insane after being in there. Some say something possessed the workers. Though all people knew was that people had died in there. A golden sighed was in a hall, people said, that was dedicated to all who have died there.
The girls looked at one other, and nodded. They accepted the challenge, but also challenged the boys to come with them.
The boys, of course, accepted as well. So the four entered.
All color seemed to be drained. Everything in the hospital was grey, white, and black. Even the lights only splashed a white light. Nothing offered any color.
They traveled deeper in. They went up the stairs, through cobwebs, and they found the golden sign.
Crusix held her breath as she read what was on it. There were thousands of names, squeezed onto that one sign. They read the bottom of it.
They all gasped. It clearly stated "You're next..." Though it was not carved into the sign. It was written in a brick-red color.
They looked more closely and backed away, opening their mouths as if to scream. It was dry blood.
Codex looked at Ian and Kyle. "This isn't funny!"
Though their eyes were wide. "We didn't do it!"
"Then who did?" Asked Crusix, darting her eyes around.
Then they heard a moan. Then three more joined in. There were loud thudding noises, as if something was limping. They saw shadows at the end of the hall, the end that was the way out.
The four backed up.
A white hand gripped the edge of the wall, and a female human appeared. She had black hair. Three other humans followed, all looking the same... except...
One was missing an arm, the other was missing part of her face, the other was missing a hand, and another was missing part of her stomach.
Their legs were pushed in it seemed, and they limped while walking. They each had on nurse uniforms. One had a shot in her hand, the other had a knife in her hand, the other had a skinner in her hand, the other one had a shot as well.
They seemed unaware to the four children's presence. Then they looked at the kids. A screech was released. They all ran towards the kids.
The kids were cornered. They had no where to go. The nurses had them. Crusix turned to look at them. They had blood on their uniforms, blood on the things in their hands, their eyes were white if they had any. They were dead. Undead.
The four screamed, and the nurses lunged.
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The parents had come to pick up their kids. But their kids weren't waiting for them. The parents called the police, but any officer who went in their disappeared as well. Screams were heard.
Now inside that hospital, the nurses roam. Looking for a way out. Looking for other victims. And on that golden sign, four names of children were on it.
Kestrel, Kristen, Kyle, Ian.
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Yeah, it's really long, but oh well.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Cunning Fox » Sun May 08, 2011 6:01 am

Alexis sighed, looking down at her textbook. There was a big test tomorrow, and she needed to study.But hen she noticed that her phone was ringing, she picked it up and flipped it open. It was a text from her mother.
Make your lunch and take a bath.
She stood up, and walked into the kitchen. Alexis quickly mde her lunch, then walked into the bathroom. The tub was already full to the brim. "Hm..." she murmured, "I guess mum already filled it for me."
Alexis dropped the towel and climbed in. But soon she felt a burning sensation under her skin. To her hoor, she saw the water staining red. Blood red. She screamed and leaped out, and she discovered that her flesh was peeling. Rolls fell to the floor and scream after scream dropped from Alexis's mouth. The last thing she saw was a man in the doorway. In onhand was her mothers' phone and in the other was a bottled-up container of acid.
"Next time," he purred, "Bathe in water."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby JDsalamander » Sun May 08, 2011 7:32 am

Neon-Horse wrote:Alexis sighed, looking down at her textbook. There was a big test tomorrow, and she needed to study.But hen she noticed that her phone was ringing, she picked it up and flipped it open. It was a text from her mother.
Make your lunch and take a bath.
She stood up, and walked into the kitchen. Alexis quickly mde her lunch, then walked into the bathroom. The tub was already full to the brim. "Hm..." she murmured, "I guess mum already filled it for me."
Alexis dropped the towel and climbed in. But soon she felt a burning sensation under her skin. To her hoor, she saw the water staining red. Blood red. She screamed and leaped out, and she discovered that her flesh was peeling. Rolls fell to the floor and scream after scream dropped from Alexis's mouth. The last thing she saw was a man in the doorway. In onhand was her mothers' phone and in the other was a bottled-up container of acid.
"Next time," he purred, "Bathe in water."

didn't someone already post that?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Sun May 08, 2011 7:39 am

Forever Silent Hill wrote:
Neon-Horse wrote:Alexis sighed, looking down at her textbook. There was a big test tomorrow, and she needed to study.But hen she noticed that her phone was ringing, she picked it up and flipped it open. It was a text from her mother.
Make your lunch and take a bath.
She stood up, and walked into the kitchen. Alexis quickly mde her lunch, then walked into the bathroom. The tub was already full to the brim. "Hm..." she murmured, "I guess mum already filled it for me."
Alexis dropped the towel and climbed in. But soon she felt a burning sensation under her skin. To her hoor, she saw the water staining red. Blood red. She screamed and leaped out, and she discovered that her flesh was peeling. Rolls fell to the floor and scream after scream dropped from Alexis's mouth. The last thing she saw was a man in the doorway. In onhand was her mothers' phone and in the other was a bottled-up container of acid.
"Next time," he purred, "Bathe in water."

didn't someone already post that?

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby cswolf. » Sun May 08, 2011 7:43 am

Chaos<3Shinji-san wrote:
Forever Silent Hill wrote:
Neon-Horse wrote:Alexis sighed, looking down at her textbook. There was a big test tomorrow, and she needed to study.But hen she noticed that her phone was ringing, she picked it up and flipped it open. It was a text from her mother.
Make your lunch and take a bath.
She stood up, and walked into the kitchen. Alexis quickly mde her lunch, then walked into the bathroom. The tub was already full to the brim. "Hm..." she murmured, "I guess mum already filled it for me."
Alexis dropped the towel and climbed in. But soon she felt a burning sensation under her skin. To her hoor, she saw the water staining red. Blood red. She screamed and leaped out, and she discovered that her flesh was peeling. Rolls fell to the floor and scream after scream dropped from Alexis's mouth. The last thing she saw was a man in the doorway. In onhand was her mothers' phone and in the other was a bottled-up container of acid.
"Next time," he purred, "Bathe in water."

didn't someone already post that?

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chagups wrote:ok not true i think ok

Tiffany was finishing up homework in her room when she got a text on her cell phone. She didn't recognize the number, but the text said "Take a bath and go to bed, it's a school night". Probably a wrong number, Tiffany thought, but she did what the text said anyway. She had already been planning to take a bath soon.

She stepped into the bathroom and found that the bath tub had already been filled for her. Strange, she thought. Maybe Mother had filled it in advance.
Shrugging, Tiffany undressed and hopped into the tub. Her whole body, including her head, was wet before Tiffany became aware of a stinging sensation all over her skin. In a few moments, the stinging turned to burning, and then she witnessed the skin on her arm begin to peel off. She looked at her leg and the skin there was peeling off too. All the skin on her body was coming off! Her blood shed into the tub and soon the bath was red.

Screaming in agony, Tiffany jumped out of the tub. Her blood gushed like a waterfall all over the bathroom. She turned the knob on the sink so she could try and soothe her burning body with cool water, but no water came out. Why had someone turned off the water?
Tortured cries escaped Tiffany's peeling lips as she painfully opened the door of the bathroom and hobbled out to alert her mother about the crisis.

There on the carpeting in front of the bathroom, was her dead mother in a pool of her own blood. Crying uncontrollably and shedding gallons of blood, Tiffany dragged herself to her room and picked up her cell phone to call the police. A text message was waiting for her. It was from the same number she hadn't recognized just minutes before, and the text said, "Next time, bathe in water." She heard laughter behind her and Tiffany turned around to see a tall man dressed in black holding a bloody knife in one hand and an empty container of sulfuric acid in the other.
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