My random, odd life, written on paper (A CS Journal)

My gallery · by **cass.** » Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:17 am

Yesh, I'm on the list <3
I'm sorry I've been away for a while, I lost the thread and couldn't remember its name >,<
I love the story so far! Really interesting, the dragon-dogs were a huge surprise, though you 'wove' them in so skilfully I can already see you've got a lot of potential as a professional writer :3
If they have powers, what could the others do..? Just an idea ^_^
Love all the twists and turns you're taking us on!
-Banjo x
@ stalkers, your enthusiasm and energy is amazing, however maybe actual constructive comments may be of more use than MOAR, MOAR!!!!! *whines*?

My gallery · by **Deschy** » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:33 am

ChrissieFoxStar101 wrote:
Deschy wrote:You forgot me on the stalkers list! *sniff*

There there, its okay. *Adds name to stalker list* See! All better now.

YAY! Thankwou.

My gallery · by **ChrissieFoxStar101** » Fri Jan 13, 2012 9:43 am

Banjo2345 wrote:
Yesh, I'm on the list <3
I'm sorry I've been away for a while, I lost the thread and couldn't remember its name >,<
I love the story so far! Really interesting, the dragon-dogs were a huge surprise, though you 'wove' them in so skilfully I can already see you've got a lot of potential as a professional writer :3
If they have powers, what could the others do..? Just an idea ^_^
Love all the twists and turns you're taking us on!
-Banjo x
@ stalkers, your enthusiasm and energy is amazing, however maybe actual constructive comments may be of more use than MOAR, MOAR!!!!! *whines*?

Thanks! And in the last part, you totally read my mind! I don't mind when people ask for more, since it means they like it, but I would also like it if people give me some constructive criticism here and there, since I know I can always do better.

My gallery · by **Desayah** » Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:09 am

Ok constructive criticism go:
Hmmm i don't know
Ok you could be a professional author i agree, you have an amazing imagination, maybe you could put in ...i can't think of anything... More descriptive writing? That'd as good as i can do