❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) completed

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omg so pretty and yesssssss
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Tue Jun 07, 2016 10:13 pm

      yo bae you cray and everyone knows it

      dw dw a new part is in the making, now that my exams have just finished I'll be able to catch up on the months I've missed~
      so your heart'll have to wait to be put back together just a little longer ;)))
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) divulge

Postby Asherwy » Thu Jun 09, 2016 8:37 am

seventeen. divulge
APRIL (( VALERIE ))


Billions of stars fluctuated in the darkness, stooges of a fallacious truth. A deep, crimson flame glistered
within each one, and for the longest time, she kept it that way. Then one day, a tentatively defiant
whisper touched every single flickering light like an inscrutable eagle, stuttering the flames into silence.
One by one. No more fire? Just unbearably frigid truths each with a soliloquy to share, blundering around
the darkness of light. Soon enough every truth finished their agonising reverie, and they all stopped
stumbling. Silence shrouded the truths in a quietus, but she was not so fortunate to be given the mercy
of this fraudulent limbo. A sinister fracture scrambled its way across the blackness of her mind, scratching
everything in a manic frenzy, breaking, snapping, cracking, again and again-! Fragmented truths tore away
from one another, pulling apart and smashing together, splintering into an abundance of septic lies to be
handed out for everyone to share. What a jealous girl, to think her obsession with hide and seek would
unveil her revolting shadow.

"Wait..."
Don't bother listening.

She wouldn't believe her childhood snacks anymore; a single measly accolade would mean a banquet
to her, and the moon will never step out of her light. Not that she has any left.

"I'm sorry- I didn't mean..!"
They're all lies anyway.

How ironic, such radiant luminosity withholding these lavish obscurities.

"Please, give me another chance."
...

No one was searching for her, yet she still lost her little game of hide and seek before it ever began.


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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:18 am

      this is getting more and more exciting with every new part O.o
      so much feels
      so much tension
      so much much

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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:21 am

      you cutie pumpkin you~
      too bad it's ending in six short chapters ;P
      to be honest I still have no idea what the ending will be, I mean, I had some sort of structure before but now it's gone ;m;


      thanks to someone's emotions heuhurehuer
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:28 am

      yes I know...I flood you with gifs...but I can't help it....you will have to suffer with me

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      ending?
      what does that word even mean?
      I have heard nothing. I have seen nothing. Nope. Nope. Nope.
      There will be no ending.
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Postby Asherwy » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:37 am

      -snigger-
      you better be ready rae, you better be ready -w-
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Thu Jun 09, 2016 9:48 am

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like seriously, this is too good to ever end
so no, not gonna accept this. not gonna be ready.
nope. nope. nope.
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby calliopë » Thu Jun 09, 2016 10:52 am

      i literally just hyperventilated a little
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby ruse » Mon Jun 13, 2016 9:01 am

    wowowowo w
    so i followed the two above ppl to here out of curiosity and i have to say that i love your writing like holy --
    it's like cherry blossoms and good vocabulary combined and it's like a shoujo manga with more words that paint pictures instead of few words and tenfold the amount of pictures?? i love that and the different povs you've got going too, i had a good time reading them tho i miss joseph (i am late to the joseph party rip)
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Wed Jun 22, 2016 10:41 pm

      and i am super late in replying to you affinity...
      sorry for this, but thank you so much for that! I actually read a lot of manga and I never realised this story that way haha
      it's really flattering you think of it this way <3
      nah joseph can rot away like the coward he is -ahem- yes I miss him too -cough-
      but I've been debating for the past week about the ending
      I'm not sure whether to do a happy end or a sad end, cuz both I really want to do
      help me decide?
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