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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby rachaelcrocks » Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:02 am

i know a scary story:

Ok, so there is a girl who goes to a clearence store with her mom. The girl sees a really cute doll, that comes with it's own box, for only 5 bucks. Since it is near the girl's birthday, the mom says she can get get it, as an early birthday present. But her mom said she would only get it for her, if she locked her doll in the box, every night. And the girl agrees.

So the girl plays with her brand new doll, all day. When night comes, she is lazy, and puts the doll in the box, but doesn't lock it.

She awakes to some one saying: "Five fingers, fingers, I'm in your sister's room. Five fingers, five fingers, she's going to meet her doom. Five fingers, five fingers, I'm on her bed. Five fingers, five fingers, and now she's dead..."
Frightened, the girl peeks in her sisters room, but cannot see anything, since her sisters room is pitch black. So she figures everything is fine, and goes back to bed.

5 minutes later, she hears the voice again. "Five fingers, fingers, I'm in your brother's room. Five fingers, five fingers, he's going to meet her doom. Five fingers, five fingers, I'm on his bed. Five fingers, five fingers, and now he's dead..."
Again, she looks in her brothers room, and sees a little bit of blood, trickling of his bed...

Scared, she peeks into the box she put her doll in, and sees the doll is not there.

The girl, shivering with fear, figures she must be seeing things, and hops back into bed.

But moments later, she hears the voice, again.

"Five fingers, fingers, I'm in your parent's room. Five fingers, five fingers, they're going to meet her doom. Five fingers, five fingers, I'm on their bed. Five fingers, five fingers, and now they're dead..."

The girl, scrambles out of bed, and opens the door to her parent's room. She's sees both her parents, dead, lying in a pool of blood...

Crying and screaming, the girl knows she's next. She runs to her neighbors house, but while she's running, she hears the voice, once again...

"Five fingers, fingers, I'm in your your room. She runs and screams even louder! Five fingers, five fingers, you're going to meet your doom. She sprints away, knowing going to her neighbor's house, is no use! Five fingers, five fingers, I'm on your bed. The girl is feeling weak from running so much, but her fear keeps her running, and running, and running. She comes to a dead end, and stops, and screams to the top of her lungs... Five fingers, five fingers, and now your dead..."

and soon the screaming fades, leaving a trail of silence....


Days later, the police find a girl of the ground, laying in a pool of blood, a heart stabbed through her heart....


The next day, a girl goes to a clearence store, and sees a doll, that comes with a box, for only 5 bucks.


"Five fingers, fingers, who will be next......?"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby rachaelcrocks » Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:04 am

Sorry, i mean a knife stabbed through her heart.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Grell Sutcliffe~ » Mon Sep 27, 2010 11:33 am

oh my goodness that was fricken creepy XD o_o
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Ryuzaki:. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:02 pm

Hmm......Well, I suppose I could write a fairly good one, off of personal experience. ^.^ I'll explain the personal experience meaning afterward.
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Once, there was a young girl, maybe 19 years old (lets call her.... violet.)....who had a friend of the same age (lets call her....victoria.). They were best friends...they did everything together, along with their other friend (lets call her....april.). They had all been best friends for years, and none of them ever suspected that something was terribly wrong.
One night, on the new moon, Victoria and Violet went down to a feild they knew in the woods, to play some soccer. It was a dark night, and Violet wasn't looking. Victoria's eyes glowed red, and she thrust a knife into Violets back, killing her. Victoria drobbed the rusted dagger, and left to find April, her eyes turning hazel once again.
It took many weeks for Victoria to organize another plan, to kill April, but eventually she did. And now, as she roams the world, looking for more prey, the monsterous killings left their mark. For, now, both of the courpses had two, small, aberely noticeable holes in their necks, their blood drained, fueling Victoria's strength....
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Okay, a bit of an explination is definantly in order. Unfortunately, this is SOMEWHAT of a true story. Let's get the characters in order fist, I am Violet, my old friend named Victoria is Victoria (i didn't bother to change her name), and My other friend named Angela is April.
Victoria did indeed try to murder me, but she obviously did not succeed. All I have is a scar on my leg from the attack. Victoria did, horribly, kill Angela. I miss her everyday. Victoria is not a vampire, I just made that up to make the story more creepy. The story isn't all that fritening, but the experience and the fact that it really happened is.
R.I.P, My dear friend, Angela. We'll allways remember you, Sunny....
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby van » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:08 pm

i have a new one, i didnt write it, hope that's ok, i dont know who did.... my sister and dad told it to me when i was 9. XD i still remember it...:
Once up on a time [XD] there was a very rich guy with a mantion, he had a dog, and every night, before he slept, the dog would lick his hand. one weekend, he went to bed, turned off the light, he heard his dog walk in, lick his hand, and leave, as he always does. but then he heard a dripping noise. he got out of bed, and checked on of his bathrooms, he had many in his mantion. he saw nothing was wrong, and the dripping stopped, so he went to bed.

the next day, when he went to bed, he turned off the lights, the dog came in licked his hand and left, he heard the dripping noise, so checked his second bathroom. nothing. it stopped. he went to his bed and fell asleep, again.

the day after that, he went to bed, his dog licked his hand, left, he heard the dripping noise. he looked in his LAST bathroom, and there was his dog, hanging from the towel holder, deaad, dripping blood. who was licking his hand?

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Twix :3 » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:09 pm

♥SilverRose♥ wrote:Hmm......Well, I suppose I could write a fairly good one, off of personal experience. ^.^ I'll explain the personal experience meaning afterward.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Once, there was a young girl, maybe 19 years old (lets call her.... violet.)....who had a friend of the same age (lets call her....victoria.). They were best friends...they did everything together, along with their other friend (lets call her....april.). They had all been best friends for years, and none of them ever suspected that something was terribly wrong.
One night, on the new moon, Victoria and Violet went down to a feild they knew in the woods, to play some soccer. It was a dark night, and Violet wasn't looking. Victoria's eyes glowed red, and she thrust a knife into Violets back, killing her. Victoria drobbed the rusted dagger, and left to find April, her eyes turning hazel once again.
It took many weeks for Victoria to organize another plan, to kill April, but eventually she did. And now, as she roams the world, looking for more prey, the monsterous killings left their mark. For, now, both of the courpses had two, small, aberely noticeable holes in their necks, their blood drained, fueling Victoria's strength....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay, a bit of an explination is definantly in order. Unfortunately, this is SOMEWHAT of a true story. Let's get the characters in order fist, I am Violet, my old friend named Victoria is Victoria (i didn't bother to change her name), and My other friend named Angela is April.
Victoria did indeed try to murder me, but she obviously did not succeed. All I have is a scar on my leg from the attack. Victoria did, horribly, kill Angela. I miss her everyday. Victoria is not a vampire, I just made that up to make the story more creepy. The story isn't all that fritening, but the experience and the fact that it really happened is.
R.I.P, My dear friend, Angela. We'll allways remember you, Sunny....


What....? Im so sorry. Thats simply horrible...
Is victoria in jail or something? I hope so. That b*tch deserves it. Was she in poor mental health?

I could never imagine that happening to me...im so sorry for Angela and her family.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:12 pm

Thats creepy.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Ryuzaki:. » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:16 pm

Thanks, but that's the worst part. She is still out there, somewhere. As far as we know, she was sane, she just held some unknown grudge against my friend and I. However, I'm still worried she may come back...to...to...to finish what she started.

@ Fenneckisser, oh, wow, that's creepy. O.o I think the dog's ghost was licking his hand.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Sapphirescript » Mon Sep 27, 2010 12:31 pm

I'm so sorry and that is rather creepy.

Thats an old story =P, normally in the bathroom its written "Humans can lick two" and normally its a girl with a puppy and her parents gone. But still scary o.o..
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