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Kodiak and Ellise
23
70%
Kodiak and Nymeria
5
15%
Alexa and Ellise
1
3%
Ellise and Laurel
3
9%
Other - Post who it is
1
3%
 
Total votes : 33

Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:46 pm

Thanks for the comments, and more added. :)
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:44 pm

Bump!
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Note for mods: Llover is my friend in real life that uses my computers.
Currently trading Growing White July, Nonballoon, Sunjewel Bun and various Advents
Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Lizzy<3 » Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:53 pm

I also think you shoulder post the chapters on the pages as well as the front page the front page for the new beginners of this and the pages for the older people so they can just go to the last page to see the new one.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:07 am

More added. :)

“So she didn’t dump you on sight?” Nymeria asked me, amazement tingeing her voice. It was so nice of her to have so much confidence in my relationship with Ellise.
“Nope, she just got really pissed about the whole mind-reading thing.” I decided to ignore the implication of her question and answered it civilly, but I saw a smile of amusement quirk her lips as she sensed my emotions change. Nymeria was almost too perceptive; if you spent five minutes around her, she would know your whole life story. Actually, it would have probably taken her only two and a half to get your life figured out.
“Which is very understandable. I’m still amazed that she didn’t dump you on sight though.” Nymeria stretched and I heard her shoulders pop.
“You missing hunting too?” I asked her, looking her directly in the eye. I missed hunting more than anything else: I missed feeling the wind in my fur, the scent of panic, acrid and strong, fill my nose, and the adrenaline fill my veins as I closed in for the kill. I didn’t really miss the blood because it was always so messy or the feeling of the kill since I wasn’t a sadist, or at least I fashioned myself not one.
“Yeah,” she said shortly, looking down at her hands. “I don’t miss much else from our past life, but I definitely miss hunting. It was the one thing that made us canine, that made us semi-normal, and now it’s gone. Oh well; we knew that we would have to make sacrifices if we were to live as humans, so I suppose it was to be expected.” She looked back up at me and I could see the weariness in her eyes; she was tired of pretending, just like I was. I had tired of pretending long before that though.
“Someday we won’t have to pretend anymore Ny,” I told her, willing myself to believe it as well.
“You know, I’d like to believe you Kodiak, but I don’t think the humans would be able to handle the fact that their whole lives, they’ve been wrong about what’s fact and what’s fiction. I also don’t think that they’d like the fact that we have twice their intellect and ten or twenty times their strength either; I think they’d consider that a blow to their pride.” She smiled up at me, no humor in her grin. “Humans are creatures of insatiable ego; sometimes I feel like their pride rules them, and those people ruled by pride would have a serious problem with us.”
“Nymeria, not everyone’s like that.” I wished desperately that she would see that truth like I had, that she would realize not all humans are bad.
“I know, but the ones that are ruin it for everyone else that isn’t,” she murmured. “It’s like the children in kindergarten: they all get punished if one does something wrong.”
There she had struck a nerve and really ticked me off. “Ny, it’s not your place to judge people because of what other people do; if you judge the masses based off a small percentage of the population then you’re no better than the humans! That would be uncalled-for stereotyping and discrimination, and that’s exactly what the humans have done to us! Don’t sink to their level Ny; just because they play dirty doesn’t mean you have to. Be the better creature, and remember that you can’t get ahead if you’re getting even.”
“What do you know about being the better creature and not stereotyping? You trust almost less than I do, and most of that is because you’re too blinded by what individuals have done that you seemed forced judge the rest of the population for it! You’re an effing hypocrite Kodiak, and I don’t have any use for those! You practice what you preach or you keep your mouth shut,” she spat venomously, pushing her way past me in a fury.
She stormed down the hallway – I could almost see steam coming from her ears – and slammed the door to her bedroom shut.
I heard a loud crack and an even louder thump and then her tired voice said, “I’ll fix the door later.”
I glanced down the hallway to find her bedroom door lying on the floor, all three of its hinges snapped.
“Like brother like sister,” I muttered to myself, and then smiled despite the broken door. Nymeria and I really were a lot alike; if that was a good thing was up for discussion.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Currently trading Growing White July, Nonballoon, Sunjewel Bun and various Advents
Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:28 pm

Bump!
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Note for mods: Llover is my friend in real life that uses my computers.
Currently trading Growing White July, Nonballoon, Sunjewel Bun and various Advents
Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:04 am

Bump!
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Rainy Days » Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:27 am

Im not even done with the first page... but I like it!!!
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sisukalat » Fri Mar 23, 2012 11:32 am

Wonderfully written, and beautifully intriguing!! I can't wait to read more! I'd love to be in the fanclub as well. :j
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Re: Kodiak

Postby Sonmi-451 » Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:19 pm

Thanks for the comments guys, and I added you raidallinen.zebra. :)
And here's more:

I jumped the fence that separated Alexa’s house from mine. Well, technically I fell over since my foot got caught, but I got over anyways even though I landed on my face instead of my feet.
“Ow,” I muttered, raising a hand to feel my face. Nothing broken, nothing bleeding; that was good.
I continued on my way to Alexa’s house, walking as quietly as I could since it was nine at night and I wasn’t supposed to be out. I also didn’t want to wake Alexa’s little brother and sister since they could be demons if they wanted to and I didn’t want to have to deal with them.
I climbed the steps of the back deck and let myself in through the sliding glass door. Alexa’s dogs, thank God, weren’t out, so I wasn’t approached by anyone or anything on my way up to Alexa’s room. I crept up the stairs as quietly as possible, wincing as they creaked. I could hear the muffled sounds of a movie coming from upstairs, and I knew that Alexa was awake too.
I snuck the rest of the way up to her room and hissed, tapping on the door, “Alexa, it’s me! Let me in!”
I heard a small shriek of surprise and then the moaning of springs as Alexa got off her bed. “Holy crap Ellise you scared me!” she whispered back after she opened the door. Once I was in her room and the door was shut again, she asked in a louder voice, “Why in the heck did you sneak over to my house in the middle of the night?!”
“Well, it’s not technically the middle of the night-” I began, then shut up as I saw the death glare that Alexa was giving me. It was probably best to just answer the question and not nit-pick details. “I need to talk to you about Kodiak and you aren’t answering your phone or anything so I decided to sneak over to your house and talk to you in person.”
“What’s so important that you would risk being busted for breaking and entering?” Alexa’s voice and stature oozed boredom. She wouldn’t be bored when she heard what I had figured out about Kodiak though.
“Just for your information, I didn’t break and enter; the screen door was unlocked.” I didn’t want to be called a burglar by my best friend; besides, Alexa had nothing worth stealing except for a couple of cute shirts.
“Whatever,” Alexa muttered, obviously very disinterested. “Just get to the point.”
“Well, there’s actually two things. Number one, I figured out what kind of non-human Kodiak is and it’s pretty epic.”
“What is he?” Alexa asked, genuinely curious. I could tell from her tone of voice and the way she stood that she was actually cared.
“He is one-half gray wolf and one-half African wild dog,” I told her. Seeing her confused expression, I added, “He’s a shapeshifter.”
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Sonmi-451 wrote:Perhaps those deprived of beauty perceive it most instinctively.
Sonmi-451 wrote:To be is to be perceived. And so to know thyself is only possible through the eyes of the other. The nature of our immortal lives is in the consequences of our words and deeds, that go on and are pushing themselves throughout all time. Our lives are not our own. From womb to to tomb we are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime, and every kindness, we birth our future.
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Note for mods: Llover is my friend in real life that uses my computers.
Currently trading Growing White July, Nonballoon, Sunjewel Bun and various Advents
Sonmi-451 wrote:I believe death is only a door; when it closes, another opens. If I care to imagine heaven, I would imagine a door opening. And behind it, I would find him there, waiting for me.
Sonmi-451 wrote:Knowledge is a mirror, and for the first time in my life, I was allowed to see who I was, and who I might become.
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Re: Kodiak

Postby CookieRaider » Fri Mar 23, 2012 7:04 pm

I like
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