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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dannydevito » Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:49 am

StarClanThunderClan wrote:heres another:Bloody Mary Returns

My stepmother was vile. I guess most kids think that when their father remarries. But in this case, it was true. She only married Father because he was rich, and she hated children. There were three of us – me (Marie), my middle brother Richard and my youngest brother Charles. We were the price my stepmother Gerta paid for being rich. And we were all that stood between her and inheriting Father's money when he died. So she took steps against us.

She sent my youngest brother Charles away to boarding school overseas. It had a good, scholarly reputation, but it also had the reputation for being a hard school that was full of bullies and strict discipline. Not a place where a delicate child like Charles, who had been sickly as a baby, would thrive. He was miserable there. Somehow, Gerta contrived to keep him there for all but the summer holidays, and when he came home the first year he was pale and thin with dark circles under his eyes that looked like bruises. He cried – he actually cried! – when Father told him he had to go back to the school. But Father didn’t listen to him. Gerta thought it would be good for Charles to go there, and so Charles went.

I did everything I could – encouraging letters and daily phone calls – until Gerta said it was too expensive and restricted calls to five minutes once a month. I even got Father to book me a ticket to Europe so I could visit Charles. Gerta was enraged when she found out. Her blue eyes went so cold it made chills run up my spine, and her pink mouth thinned into a bitter line that bade ill for me since I had dared to interfere. Two days before my plane left for Europe, the school called and told us that Charles had climbed up to the tallest tower and flung himself off. He was dead.

Father was shocked, of course, and Gerta was quietly triumphant. For a few months, Father paid more attention to Richard and myself then he had since our mother died. But Gerta was beautiful and had winning ways about her that soon drew my Father’s attention away. And now that one of her hated step-children was dead, she focused on another. Poor Richard was next.

Richard was a sturdy chap who was about to enter high school, and he was really into sports. He would have thrived at the boarding school that had killed Charles. So Gerta sent him to an arts school instead. He hated it, but Gerta had told Father he had “talent”, so there he went. (You’d think my Father would have learned his lesson with Charles!) But Richard was a survivor, and he grimly practiced piano and violin when he would rather have played soccer and football. But Gerta was clever. She introduced Richard to a couple of high school boys who were everything Richard craved to be – rich, popular, on the football team. And into drugs. Gerta made sure Richard had a very large allowance, and kept increasing it as Richard was drawn deeper and deeper under the influence. Until one day Richard overdosed, and Gerta only had one step-child left. Me.

I was sure (sure!) that Gerta knew Richard was doing drugs in his room that day. She knew he was ill and possibly dying in there. If she’d “found” him even ten minutes sooner, his life would have been saved. So said the doctor, and I believed him. But Father wouldn’t believe me. He was angry whenever I said anything against Gerta, and told me to hold my tongue. Still, I knew I was next, and I was sure that Father would not live long after willing his fortune over to his wife. I decided that if Gerta got too bad, I would run away and live secretly with my aunt in New Jersey until I turned 18.

From the moment Richard’s body was found in his room, I forced myself to be a model child. My homework was done on time, I was polite to Gerta and all her friends, I went on all the family excursions with Gerta and Father – even the dangerous ones like shark-fishing. You can be sure that I took care to be “sea-sick” indoors and stayed away from the edge of the boat. Gerta was clever with her tricks. Everyone thought it was an accident the time we were out shopping and I fell onto the subway in front of an oncoming train. I managed to roll out of the way on time, but it was way too close for comfort.

I had almost decided to run away when my father brought me the sad news that my aunt in New Jersey had died suddenly in her sleep, poisoned by person or persons unknown. I was appalled. How had Gerta known? But she had – I could tell from the smirk on her face.

I went to my room that night and locked myself in to think. I could run away, but the money wouldn’t last long. And I’d need to finish high school or my chances of getting a good job were nil. Besides, Gerta would still be out there somewhere. If she could hire someone to poison my only living relative (besides Father), she could hire someone to kill me, whether I was living at home or not.

There was only one thing I could think of. And it was a terrible thing. A family secret passed down from my Mother’s side for many generations. It involved a witch named Bloody Mary, who had once tried to kill my many times great grandmother and use the child’s blood to make herself young and beautiful forever. The witch had been stopped by the child's father (my many times great grandfather) in the nick of time, and the witch had cursed him as she burned at the stake. Cursed his mirror, and the mirrors of all the men who had condemned her to death at the stake, so that anyone saying her name in front of those mirrors would invoke her vengeful spirit.

The story had gotten mixed up over the years, as it was passed down first in their village and then all over the country. These days, school kids everywhere scared themselves silly chanting Bloody Mary’s name in front of darkened mirrors during sleepover parties, and nothing happened to them. So no one really believed in the curse. Of course, no one knew the real story of Bloody Mary. That was a deep secret handed down by the villagers of long ago. But I was a direct descendant, and I knew how to summon the witch. You had to use a mirror owned by someone in the direct blood-line of one of the original families that lived in Bloody Mary’s village. And the witch's name must be spoken by candlelight a certain number of times in their native tongue.

It was an evil thing to do, I knew. But it was the only way to save my life. It was either Gerta or me. If I didn’t fight back, I was dead. So I took my hard earned money and went out to a specialty store to buy hand-dipped, beeswax candles. Black ones. I followed my mother’s directions carefully, placing them at certain intervals around the living room so that they reflected in the huge mirror behind the couch. Then I lit each one, speaking the spell passed down in my mother’s family. And I waited. Father was away on a business trip, and Gerta was out at a party with her latest boyfriend. She came home late, and scolded me for staying up to study. Her voice was playful and light – I hated that voice. It made her sound like she was nice. But there was also a note of suspicion underlying her words, and she stared hard at the flickering black candles.

“Holding a séance, little Marie?” she asked, emphasizing the word little, knowing I hated when she called me that.

“I just like working by candlelight,” I said mendaciously, turning a page in my text book.

Gerta frowned. “You know, little Marie, I think it’s time we had a talk,” she said, walking over to the mirror behind the couch and primping her hair.

“Yes,” I said softly. “We should. You killed my brothers. And my aunt. But I won’t let you kill me.”

Gerta laughed. “As if you stood a chance against me!” she said, fluffing her long blond hair up behind her shoulders.

I spoke the name of Bloody Mary in the native tongue of my ancestors. Once. Twice. Three times. Inside the mirror, the image of Gerta burst into flames, and another face looked out. It was the malevolent face of a twisted old crone, ruined with age, and altogether evil. I ducked behind the chair as Gerta gave a scream of sheer terror, her eyes fixed on the witch. As I watched from my hiding place, heat burst forth from the mirror, blistering her beautiful alabaster skin. I could hear the flames roaring as the witch laughed evilly and held out her arms toward my step mother.

“Gerta,” crooned Bloody Mary. “Come to me, Gerta.”

And she took my step mother into her arms.

Gerta’s terrified scream was suddenly cut off. The flames disappeared as suddenly as they had come. When I peeked out from behind the couch, Gerta and Bloody Mary were gone.

I called Father at his hotel the next morning to tell him that Gerta hadn’t slept at home. (Well, it was true!) He wasn’t pleased. He called a few of her friends from his hotel room, and quickly discovered she had been carrying on with another man. With several, if the truth be known. Father hated infidelity. He flew home at once to confront Gerta, but she was still missing; presumed run away with one of her flames.

Somehow, Father managed to divorce Gerta without ever trying to find her. And since she had no family in the area except us, everyone accepted the cover story, and no one ever tried to locate her. Gerta was gone for good. And Father and I were safe at last.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby BANGCHAN » Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:52 am

I shall give credit to......S.E. Schlosser
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:04 am

starfighter123 wrote:MY WORLD IS EVIL




My name is cleo I live in canada me and my friends had a sleep over one night I said how about we play dares?.the replies where "ok" and "sure" from my 2 friends chris and ailey so we played dares and one of the dares where

cleo I dare you to go out in the woods at night tonight right now

the replie from cleo was "Nooo Its halloween I dont like going in the woods at ALL my mum got killed in there"

chris said "Ohh yeah sorry for that" *chris gets up and hugs cleo "sorry"*Its ok chris


The next day............


cleo sat on the couch with her dad chris and ailey watching TV


there was A knock at the door cleos dad got up and answerd the door


hello he said "hello I was wondering where cleo is" She is sitting on the couch why? "can I talk to her?" sure CLEO!

WHAT DAD? your friend is at the door OK

her dad walks to the couch again

cleo shouts CHRIS AILEY COME ERE "ok" the both reply

"Hello saskia" They all say to her *HI I was wondering if you guys want to come to the park with me do you want to?* let me check with my dad *OK*


DAD

what cleo?

can I go to the park with saskia?

yes be back at 11

ok dad


come on guys lets go to the park then


AT THE PARK...........

saskia come here

*ok*

My dad said I have the kiss of death because I kissed my mum and she got killed so what do you think?

chris says "mabey it was weird though" ailey says "I think so" and saskia says"yes how about we try it?" But I dont want yous to die

"i know but on that bug over there?" OK I guess so

cleo walks to the little bug and kisses it 2 seconds later it is dead


"you do have the kiss of death" yeah but its not good to have

"I know so lets get on with anything you guys want"

ok what shall we do?

DARES ailey shouts out

"ok"they all agree

ailey I dare you to..........eat that bug

"ok"

ailey walks to the bug and eats it

aileys eyes go Blood red she has big fangs and little horns and a tail with a large spike on the end

everyone had no idea what was happing to ailey



They all ran home and left ailey there no one knew what was happing to her


DAD cleo cried

"what?"

AILEY IS TURNING INTO A DEMON/VAMPIRE THING!

"what!!!!!!!!!!????? OMG!"

I know what do I do

"I dont know"


chris runs to the phone and dials 999


HELLO!

"Hello how can I help?"

MY FIREND IS TURNING INTO A DEMON/VAMPIRE THING HELP!!!

"OK the police will be here soon"

ok bye

"bye"



The police arrived and looked at ailey she still was like she was when she ate the bug with fangs horns and a tail



cleo ran to one of the officers

what is wrong with her?

"i dont know she is went weird"

I know

"all we can do is shoot her"

i guess so




saskia ran to ailey


"ailey what is wrong with you?"

there was no answer


SASKIA GET OUT HER WAY NOW!

it was to late ailey had ripped her to pieces

THE POLICE TOOK THEIR guns out and shot ailey

after that their was a funeral



on saskia grave stone was

R.I.P My dear friend saskia
you are missed we think of you every day you where a great friend


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(Sorry but that story was very hard for me to keep track of. I mean first it started out in First Person and then went to Third person. And then I didn't know what they were saying (Some of what they were saying was in " " 's most were not...) And I don't see how a bug could turn someone into a vampire or demon. Sorry just what I thought of it.)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:27 am

I-miss-u wrote:
starfighter123 wrote:MY WORLD IS EVIL




My name is cleo I live in canada me and my friends had a sleep over one night I said how about we play dares?.the replies where "ok" and "sure" from my 2 friends chris and ailey so we played dares and one of the dares where

cleo I dare you to go out in the woods at night tonight right now

the replie from cleo was "Nooo Its halloween I dont like going in the woods at ALL my mum got killed in there"

chris said "Ohh yeah sorry for that" *chris gets up and hugs cleo "sorry"*Its ok chris


The next day............


cleo sat on the couch with her dad chris and ailey watching TV


there was A knock at the door cleos dad got up and answerd the door


hello he said "hello I was wondering where cleo is" She is sitting on the couch why? "can I talk to her?" sure CLEO!

WHAT DAD? your friend is at the door OK

her dad walks to the couch again

cleo shouts CHRIS AILEY COME ERE "ok" the both reply

"Hello saskia" They all say to her *HI I was wondering if you guys want to come to the park with me do you want to?* let me check with my dad *OK*


DAD

what cleo?

can I go to the park with saskia?

yes be back at 11

ok dad


come on guys lets go to the park then


AT THE PARK...........

saskia come here

*ok*

My dad said I have the kiss of death because I kissed my mum and she got killed so what do you think?

chris says "mabey it was weird though" ailey says "I think so" and saskia says"yes how about we try it?" But I dont want yous to die

"i know but on that bug over there?" OK I guess so

cleo walks to the little bug and kisses it 2 seconds later it is dead


"you do have the kiss of death" yeah but its not good to have

"I know so lets get on with anything you guys want"

ok what shall we do?

DARES ailey shouts out

"ok"they all agree

ailey I dare you to..........eat that bug

"ok"

ailey walks to the bug and eats it

aileys eyes go Blood red she has big fangs and little horns and a tail with a large spike on the end

everyone had no idea what was happing to ailey



They all ran home and left ailey there no one knew what was happing to her


DAD cleo cried

"what?"

AILEY IS TURNING INTO A DEMON/VAMPIRE THING!

"what!!!!!!!!!!????? OMG!"

I know what do I do

"I dont know"


chris runs to the phone and dials 999


HELLO!

"Hello how can I help?"

MY FIREND IS TURNING INTO A DEMON/VAMPIRE THING HELP!!!

"OK the police will be here soon"

ok bye

"bye"



The police arrived and looked at ailey she still was like she was when she ate the bug with fangs horns and a tail



cleo ran to one of the officers

what is wrong with her?

"i dont know she is went weird"

I know

"all we can do is shoot her"

i guess so




saskia ran to ailey


"ailey what is wrong with you?"

there was no answer


SASKIA GET OUT HER WAY NOW!

it was to late ailey had ripped her to pieces

THE POLICE TOOK THEIR guns out and shot ailey

after that their was a funeral



on saskia grave stone was

R.I.P My dear friend saskia
you are missed we think of you every day you where a great friend


written BY me

(Sorry but that story was very hard for me to keep track of. I mean first it started out in First Person and then went to Third person. And then I didn't know what they were saying (Some of what they were saying was in " " 's most were not...) And I don't see how a bug could turn someone into a vampire or demon. Sorry just what I thought of it.)




ok the bug got the kiss of death and that kiss of death made it poisonous to eat so then It made her go evil a little


the ** was saskia and ""was chris and ailey
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:37 am

Oh okay now I get it.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby starfighter123 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:39 am

I-miss-u wrote:Oh okay now I get it.



ok im glad! :D
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Mayiamaru » Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:06 am

I've got one :P This is a little something I got out of a book from my bookshelf. I don't really remember it exactly, but the book isn't there anymore so I can't copy it ^_^" I guess I'll just be rewriting it.

.:Knock, knock, knock...:.

"Hurry up!!"
Nick was waiting in his old, beat up car, his fingers tapping against the steering wheel while he waited for his girlfriend, Lilith. It was October 25th and a costume party was going on at Huthford Hall. Nick was just in a jogging suit, his Nikes with a silver streak down the side thumping against the base of the car floor in a bored rhythm.
"Sorry! I had to finish doing my ha-... What kind of costume is that?" Lilith said as she got into the car, pulling her fake tail into the car and putting it onto her lap before she shut the door behind her. She was looking at Nick with a disgusted look.
"I'm a runner." Nick shrugged, turning the key and turning on his car, pulling the car out of the driveway. "What about you?"
"I'm a cat! Can't you tell?!" Lilith pouted, tucking at her kitty ears and pulling her seat belt into place.
"No I can't..." Nick muttered while in response the car sputtered.
"Fine... How about some music?" Lilith said, then reached for the drawer where Nick kept his CDs. She would rather listen to some music than this old car's polluting potential, both environmentally and noise wise...
With an awkward chuckle, Nick sighed. "CD player's broken."
"That's just great. What do we listen to then?"
"The radio works." Nick said, leaning over and turning on the radio with a flick of a switch.
The road to Huthford was damp. The fog was thick to a four meter radius and the headlights were barely working. The radio sputtered to life, and the only station that was working played this.
ATTENTION... ATTENTION... zzzt... The Hangman has escaped from the custody unit on Jacklyn Avenue.... Vtshhhh.... All nearby persons are advised to... Zttt.... shhhhh....... The announcement was drowned in static then stopped all together... The radio had died.
Liliith was scared. They had to pass that road to get to Huthford. They were just coming across it now, Lilith's fingers and hands crossed that this car could get them there and back safely.... When the car died....
"Oh no... Ooooh no.... W-What if that guy is still around here? What if-"
"Relax, Lil." Nick smirked, acting very nonchalantly about this. "It's just the battery. There should be a gas station just four blocks ahead."
"Four blocks?! Y-You're not going to leave me here alone, are you?!"
"Relax. I've got my runners. I'll be there and back in no time. Besides, you can't run in those." Nick chuckled, but Lilith still wasn't happy, clutching to Nick's hand with a look that said, Don't joke about this... With a sigh, Nick gave Lilith a peck on the cheek and smiled. "There's a blanket in the back. Hide under that and keep the door locked until I come for you."
"But how will I know it's you?..." Lilith said worriedly, lowering her head in fear.
"I'll knock three times. Just like this." Nick said as he opened the car door just behind him and knocked on the roof of the car. Knock... knock... knock... "Keep the keys. It'll be safer." Nick said, then put the keys of his old car into Lilith's hand.
With a nod, Lilith watched Nick get out and jog up the road, soon vanishing into the fog. Lilith then closed and locked the doors of the car, climbing into the back seat and covering herself with the blanket, hiding between the rows of chairs.
It felt like she was waiting for hours. She heard rustling and dripping from outside.
Knock....
Lilith was just about to jump up with joy, but she remembered that there had to be three. "Come on... Again..."
Knock...
"One more time..." She thought, squeezing her eyes shut.
Knock......
"Nick!!" Lilith thought with joy, just about to throw the blanket off, but she froze.
Knock......
Lilith froze and trembled, not daring to move. "N-Nick?..." She said quietly. No answer... Just knocking on the roof of the car.
Knock....... Knock........ Knock.....
With every knock, Lilith felt like a bit of her sanity was being taken away from her bit by bit. Then suddenly, there was a police siren, followed by voices and then the flash of a light through the fog. She could see it through the blanket and pulled it off, looking up. There were two police officers signaling her to unlock the door and come out, so she did.
"O-Officer Jake... Where's Nick?... D-Did you see him?" She asked, frantically.
The officers exchanged uncertain looks and lead Lilith to the squad car. "... We will explain later... Just don't look behind you..." Officer Jake said very lowly.
Lilith nodded, but she couldn't resist. She only took two more steps before she turned her head to look. She couldn't believe her eyes and fell to her knees in tears. Hanging by a rope around his neck just above the car was Nick... His body swinging and his Nike tapping against the roof of the car.
Knock... Knock... Knock...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Lady B » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:16 pm

I've heard so many versions of that story on here, but I have to say, that one was the best :)

I heard this at my school camp last year, around the campfire at night in the bush... still gives me shivers...

"A good friend of mine, a photographer, to be exact, had spent weeks planning five days in a secluded patch of bush to get some nature shots, maybe even capture some endangered wildlife on film. She had a ball, and when she came back, she wouldn't stop talking about it. The fresh air! The snow on the hills! It was amazing. But one day, she got all her pictures printed off, and that was when she came around to my house with her face the whitest shade of pale possible. "Look at this.." she whispered. She had taken about ten or fifteen shots per day of waterfalls, rivers, birds singing, trees, etc.. using a roll of film each day. But in the middle of each roll of film, there was a photo of her sleeping. One had been taken ever night, inside her tent, with her camera."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:19 pm

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Mayiamaru » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:25 pm

... Sorry ^_^"
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