Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Um, I'd like to say something about TIAJNAD for a very long time, and I guess I'll say it now; please don't get mad or anything.
When I first read it, I was younger, and I didn't really look at the quality of the writing.
When I looked at it around the middle of book 1, I started to notice that your writing wasn't all that good. Still kinda applies now. I think it needs more details, and such. Sorry ^^". Please don't take this personally. I also think that you have WAY too many characters, maybe too much to handle. This is a bit of what I think, i didn't get really detailed. Like I said before, please don't get mad; sorry, and thank you for reading. ^^"
Oh, no, of course I'm not mad! I always love it when people give me tips.
I know that there are a lot of characters, which is why there hasn't been too many additional ones lately. It's sort of hard coming up with new ones, anyway. And more details? I've been trying to put more in there, but it's hard to add a lot of details when I have a time limit to be on the computer now. I only have an hour to check all my messages here on CS, Facebook, and my Email, and then with whatever time I have left I write an entry. By the time I'm finished checking everything, it's at least a half an hour, if not more. So that only gives me another 30 minutes to write an entry, and time goes by really fast...Anyway, I appreciate you telling me what to fix. It helps a lot.
