'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
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4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
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12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
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4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
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16%
Still hate her the same.
1
4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
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No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
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16%
She still needs anger management.
4
16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
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24%
 
Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 13, 2012 11:59 am

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote::O

:o
xxazul63xx wrote:woah...................

*Dun dun dun*
Artemis's Arrow wrote:
    Coolio! ♥

Coolio! :)

MORE TIME!!










What would you say if your ex-boyfriend suddenly dropped dead in the middle of the room? Well, for me, I couldn't say anything. Nothing at all. But Suzi could.
Pete? Pete?
Suzi ran and knelt beside Pete. She shook him.
Pete, wake up!
He didn't stir.
Brother?
And then I remembered. Suzi had said once that Pete was her brother. And then another memory came. Suzi had once said that my parents had killed her parents and that she missed them, but now she was saying that they had sold her and she hated them.... this was all too confusing!
Wake up, you lousy cow!
Pete didn't stir.
Please, wake up.
A tear rolled down Suzi's cheek. What was it with her and crying lately? She was one of the strongest dogs I knew.... up until now. Usually nothing (and nobody) could break her. But now.... it was a different story.
PETE WAKE UP!
And he didn't. He was gone. Suzi moaned. I watched her carefully. She tried to stand up, but wobbled a bit.
Suzi?
Suzi groaned and collapsed onto the floor.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun May 13, 2012 12:02 pm

Ok things are going from weirdness straight into creepytown
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 13, 2012 12:06 pm

xxazul63xx wrote:Ok things are going from weirdness straight into creepytown

Yush, but what do you expect? It's almost the end of the world.... *Dun dun dun* (.... how many times have I written the *dun dun dun* thing? XD)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Sun May 13, 2012 12:20 pm

    Why is everyone dropping DEAD?! It's CREEPY!

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 13, 2012 12:38 pm

Artemis's Arrow wrote:
    Why is everyone dropping DEAD?! It's CREEPY!

Yes, yes it is.

New entry! :)







I knelt beside Suzi quietly. I touched her, then quickly stepped back. She didn't stir. She was standing next to Pete, and they were both in the same position; standing still, not breathing. It was creepy.
Pete? Suzi?
No sound. And then I remembered something.
Gish, are you still there?
Right here.
What happened to them?
I don't know. I've never seen anything like this happen before.
A few tears rolled down my cheek. Why was everybody dying or leaving me all of the sudden? First Jessy died (but then she came back), then Pete died (or so I thought), then Indah died (as far as I know, anyway), then I found out my mom (who wasn't my mom at all) was evil (and then Desperado had killed her), and then Jenette left, and now Pete was actually dead (that I know of, anyway), and now Suzi was dead also? What was going on?!
But.... I do think I might have a hypothesis.
A hiwhatathis?
Hypothesis. It means idea.
Well why didn't she just say idea?
The end of the world is nearing, and things are changing. Which means-
Suddenly, there was a loud boom (which interrupted Gish). I looked out the cave entrance, and stared in horror at what I saw. Meteors were falling from the sky (and it wasn't even nighttime) and crashing onto the ground below. There was whimper, and the Giant Killer Lizard ran into the cave and stood beside me. He had a slight burnt spot on his back, and I knew he had been hit by a medeor. But he was okay.
Gish....... what is that?
A very big meteor shower.
I gulped. Wasn't a meteor shower supposed to stay in the sky?!
So it has begun.
What?
The end of the world.
WHAT?! Man, you think you know the world, and then it goes off and ends itself!
Wait, the beginning of the end of the world? How long will the end of the world last?
I had always thought it would just be something like a big boom and we were all dead, just like that, or that Jesus would come and take the believers and stuff. I didn't think it would take awhile...
Oh yes, it will take awhile. But that means that you have more time to prepare for the very end of the end of the world.
That was a very long and confusing sentance.
Um.... okay. But how am I going to prepare for the end of the world if we can't go outside (unless you want to get hit by a falling rock)?
Simple. We will train here. And, we will use the meteors outside to train. And the meteors will stop soon enough. But after that, more disasterous things shall happen.
More bad things? And I, Amy (a dog who was scared of a whole list of things [escpecially cowboy hats]), was supposed to save the world? How? How was I? I wasn't strong enough!
Jenette should have done this! She is stronger!
Stronger in fisical strength, but you are stronger in heart and mind.
Okay, that sounded totally weird.
You must pay attention, Amy. You must save the world, weather you want to or not.
What if I refuse?
Then the world shall perish, and all will be lost.
That was pretty big. I sure didn't want the world to end (even though it was already starting to), and I didn't want any more sadness. But could I really save the world? Could I really do it? I guess that was up to my fate.









That is the end of book 8! Hope you liked it! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Sun May 13, 2012 12:40 pm

    ... SUZI IS DEAD (I think). YAYAYAYAY!
    I need new book NOWZ.
    BOOK 8 WAS AWESOMESAUCE!

    Now I need the new book. O.O

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun May 13, 2012 12:49 pm

Yay! new book! *dances* OH NOEZ! THE END OF THE WORLD!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 13, 2012 5:53 pm

Artemis's Arrow wrote:
    ... SUZI IS DEAD (I think). YAYAYAYAY!
    I need new book NOWZ.
    BOOK 8 WAS AWESOMESAUCE!

    Now I need the new book. O.O

And you shall have it! :)
xxazul63xx wrote:Yay! new book! *dances* OH NOEZ! THE END OF THE WORLD!

*Dun dun dun* (wow, I really DO say/type that a lot...)

And..... RUNNING OUT OF TIME: NINTH BOOK IN THE TIAJNAD SERIES!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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