At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

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What do YOU think should happen next (see page 14 [2nd post] for latest entry)?

You should make an army of Jenettes. ARISE JENETTIANS!
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29%
Make an army of Anger's (I like his ebilness....).
1
3%
Make them go to Disneyland!
5
14%
Make Suzi appear and kill them all! MWAHAHAHAHA!
1
3%
Have Amy eat some pie... or cake.... or BOTH!
2
6%
Jessy should die! She's a little brat!
0
No votes
BRING PETE AND INDAH BACK TO LIFE TO SAVE THE DAY! WOOHOO! GO TEAM PETE/INDAH!
6
17%
Have a chef come in and bake a cake.
1
3%
Make some pie!
3
9%
*Hums tune* Amy should sing!
6
17%
 
Total votes : 35

Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Betta132 » Fri Feb 03, 2012 7:15 am

xxazul63xx wrote:No! Jeanette must not die!
>:( <me by your bed, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr............

Me sitting on your bed as a winged hellcat, grrrrrrrrrrr........... Have someone jump on Anger and sit on him until he brings Jeanette back! I volunteer as the jumper-and-sitter-on!
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby TPDebate » Fri Feb 03, 2012 12:48 pm

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Jeanette!!!!! Amy!!!!! Anger is evel!!!
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:04 am

Ellies wrote:ummm :cry:

:cry:
Kayla wrote:I do karate. Does that count? YOU KILLED JEANETTE!

lol, I guess so. XD
xxazul63xx wrote:No! Jeanette must not die!
>:( <me by your bed, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr............

:shock:
Betta132 wrote:
xxazul63xx wrote:No! Jeanette must not die!
>:( <me by your bed, grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr............

Me sitting on your bed as a winged hellcat, grrrrrrrrrrr........... Have someone jump on Anger and sit on him until he brings Jeanette back! I volunteer as the jumper-and-sitter-on!

lol
whoa gal1 wrote:NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Jeanette!!!!! Amy!!!!! Anger is evel!!!

Yes he is. :evil:

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby katomorakwarrior » Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:39 pm

Strictly speaking, I'd love it if Jenette died.
She reminds me somewhat of a character I made a long time ago and who to this day manages to stay alive.
But as I say every time I talk about TIANJAD, JF is the author. JF rules TIANJAD. Simple. We can help the plot but we, as stalkers, cannot change it.
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 04, 2012 7:49 pm

katomorakwarrior wrote:Strictly speaking, I'd love it if Jenette died.
She reminds me somewhat of a character I made a long time ago and who to this day manages to stay alive.
But as I say every time I talk about TIANJAD, JF is the author. JF rules TIANJAD. Simple. We can help the plot but we, as stalkers, cannot change it.

I feel the power. :twisted: Just kidding! XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Ellies » Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:36 pm

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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Feb 06, 2012 1:44 pm

Ellies wrote:Image
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Correct! :)






































My eyes opened slowly and I felt pain in my neck. I cringed as soon as I had awoken. I wish I had stayed asleep longer so I couldn't feel this pain!
Where am I?
It was completely dark, and I was very groggy. And then I remembered.
Jenette!
I looked around, but couldn't see a thing. As soon as I moved my neck, pain surged through me and I collapsed. I put up my hands and immediately touched the ceiling. I put my hand down and felt the floor. I put my hand back up. The height of this room was only about the size of me! I started crawling forward. I kept on crawling for about 15 minutes, until finally I felt something. I felt it somemore, and touched something meddle. A doorknob! I turned it, and light filled the room, blinding me for about 5 seconds. I looked back at the room I had been in, and I was right. The height was very small. But the width was very, very long. I couldn't even see where I had begun to crawl! I walked through the door and closed it behind me. Suddenly, I heard someone speak (their words will be centered)
I see you escaped.

I turned around abruptly, which made me crumble to the floor in pain.
I wouldn't move. You are in much pain.

Where am I? What happened to Jenette?
Do not worry, I saved a green dog awhile back from dying. She is safe..... for now.

What did he mean "for now"?
Where is she?
It was sort of weird talking to nothing. I couldn't see who was talking. All I could see was light.
She is in bed, resting. She is safe now. But later, I cannot say.

How did you find me?
I follow Anger all the time, trying to trap him. And so I followed him to where you were, stopped him, and brought you here. He had already bitten you by then, though, hence the pain.

I nodded my head, understanding. But then I thought of something else.
Where's Jessy? And, less importantly, Flower?
Ah, the little one. I came just in time to see her pulled into a shadow. I only heard a slight squeal, and then nothing. I looked later, but she wasn't there. I couldn't see who pulled her.

No!
Tears pricked my eyes. But then I thought of something.
That doesn't mean she's gone forever, though.
Good way to think of it.

What about Flower?
The bunny? Oh, she fainted. Then she awoke and ran away and I haven't seen her since.

Just like Flower to do something like that.
There was silence for a few moments.
So, who are you, anyway?
Ah, I've been waiting for that question.

I saw movement, and then a figure stepped out of the light, and I gasped.
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OMW IT WAS A CAT! My eye twitched.
Not to fear. I shall not hurt you if you shall not hurt me.

I gulped.
Okay.
I'm surprised I could talk.
My name is Hanu. I have heard of you. You are Amy, I believe.

I nodded slowly.
How do you know me?
I have heard of you through the agency.

You're an agent?
I work for the cat agency, not the dog agency.

That made sense.
My agency has talked of how great a dog is. They said Jenette, your sister, is very good. They said that you are good as well.

I nodded.
Can..... Can I see my sister?
Hanu nodded.
I'll lead you to her.

He opened a door and lead me up some stairs, and then through another door. And there layed Jenette on a bed.
Jenette!
I ran to her bed, and her eyes opened and she smiled.
Amy. I thought I'd never see you again. Well, maybe in Heaven, but not here on Earth.
Guess what?
What?
A cat saved you.
Jenette's eyebrow went up.
You're joking.
Nope. See?
I showed her Hanu.
How did he save me?
I've been taught how to heal someone of poison. It's pretty easy. All you need to do is use your teeth and suck out the place where the poison is traveling, spit it out, and then make sure the victim is stable.

..... That doesn't sound very easy.
Jenette suddenly sat up quickly.
Where's Jessy?!
I don't know.
I spoke quietly. I was still upset.
What?
And so I told her the story. When I was done, she looked sad, but she pulled herself together and looked at me.
It seems like a miracle I'm asking this, but where is that dukb old bunny?
She bailed.
Just like Flower to do so.
So..... what do we do now?
I'm assuming Jessy is dead. The only thing we have left to do now is find Suzi..... and destroy her once and for all!
Jenette was right. We had to destroy Suzi..... once and for all. But how? How could we? She could poof out of things if she was about to die, she was super powerful, and she had an evil henchman with a name that reminded me of pie!
How do we defeat them, Jenette?
I don't know if we can. So...... is it probable that we'll destroy her? No. Is it definate that we'll defeat her? Never. Is it highly probable that we'll die while trying? Yes. BUT, we will try. That's all we can do.
She was right (as much as I hated to admit it). We could only try. We would probably fail, but we would at least try. That would be the only thing we could do. And hey, maybe Jessy was still out there. Maybe we could still find her. Maybe she was even waiting for us right now. And maybe we could (99.99999% positive that we couldn't) defeat Suzi before she destroyed the world.... and us. It was possible. Not probable, but possible. And that is all I could keep on thinking. Not probable, but possible.









That's the end of book 6 (sadness..... but gladness)! Sad, because no more TIAJNAD 6! Gladness, because NEW BOOK! YAY! :D Please send me title requests through PM! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Feb 07, 2012 8:34 am

Started seventh book: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1026873

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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