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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ri bird. » Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:14 am

ShaShaJean wrote:Yayy! Excited like always. <3

Here's the new chapter! c: I'm working on the next one right now. ^^
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Postby [Braveheart] » Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:20 am

GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this. Nora..poor sad Nora...Oh Toby must be ultra shocked.
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Hello! I am a
lady
who
wants to be
called
Ellie,
please? I am
a Leo and a Gryffindor.
I love all
horses, and
animals
(except for hippos)
but my
heart belongs
to my cats and horse Cheyenne.
She\Her or they\them.
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Postby ri bird. » Sun Mar 03, 2013 5:00 am

Lions Are My Life wrote:GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this. Nora..poor sad Nora...Oh Toby must be ultra shocked.

^^ I think I'm stuck. There are so many loose ends that I'm having trouble tying together, (what I get for not having a plot) and when I try to do that it just drags down the story. I'm thinking of ending this by then 25th chapter or earlier. I've had a lot of experience writing this and learned from my mistakes- this was sort of like a test run story, and I think my next one will be easier to write as I now know to have a firm plot before starting. It was my fault for the way this story is unraveling- it takes me days now of thinking how to write the next chapter and sticking to the plot, so there aren't more and more loose ends that need tying up.

What do you guys think? Would you mind if I wrapped this up soon and started something new, or would you be angry/disappointed if I did? I love this story, but I made many mistakes in the plot and there are so many matters unattended to that I'm afraid it will cause this story to have a poor and weak ending.
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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby cookies. » Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:23 pm

ri bird. wrote:
Lions Are My Life wrote:GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this. Nora..poor sad Nora...Oh Toby must be ultra shocked.

^^ I think I'm stuck. There are so many loose ends that I'm having trouble tying together, (what I get for not having a plot) and when I try to do that it just drags down the story. I'm thinking of ending this by then 25th chapter or earlier. I've had a lot of experience writing this and learned from my mistakes- this was sort of like a test run story, and I think my next one will be easier to write as I now know to have a firm plot before starting. It was my fault for the way this story is unraveling- it takes me days now of thinking how to write the next chapter and sticking to the plot, so there aren't more and more loose ends that need tying up.

What do you guys think? Would you mind if I wrapped this up soon and started something new, or would you be angry/disappointed if I did? I love this story, but I made many mistakes in the plot and there are so many matters unattended to that I'm afraid it will cause this story to have a poor and weak ending.


I don't really mind if you wrap up this story early. Though It would make me cry... But, if you create the next one, I am sure it will be awesome as usual!
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Postby MO(PleaseDelete) » Sun Mar 03, 2013 8:23 pm

^ Agree with that above
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Postby ottoline. » Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:57 pm

i would really like you to write some more i would cry if you didn't but if your stuck you could just wrap it up :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Tue Mar 05, 2013 5:20 am

ri bird. wrote:
Lions Are My Life wrote:GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this. Nora..poor sad Nora...Oh Toby must be ultra shocked.

^^ I think I'm stuck. There are so many loose ends that I'm having trouble tying together, (what I get for not having a plot) and when I try to do that it just drags down the story. I'm thinking of ending this by then 25th chapter or earlier. I've had a lot of experience writing this and learned from my mistakes- this was sort of like a test run story, and I think my next one will be easier to write as I now know to have a firm plot before starting. It was my fault for the way this story is unraveling- it takes me days now of thinking how to write the next chapter and sticking to the plot, so there aren't more and more loose ends that need tying up.

What do you guys think? Would you mind if I wrapped this up soon and started something new, or would you be angry/disappointed if I did? I love this story, but I made many mistakes in the plot and there are so many matters unattended to that I'm afraid it will cause this story to have a poor and weak ending.


I'm pretty fine with the story ending after few more chapters, but I wish the best to get some kind of reasonable, bad or good, ending, what hopefully most of the fans will enjoy. I would love to read a new story, if you are going to do one, that is XD Even if it would be fun to read more than 'few' (2-4) more chapters of Cho's epic story, all fun ends sometime. So I'm fine with both options, really. c:
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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ri bird. » Tue Mar 05, 2013 12:50 pm

ShaShaJean wrote:I don't really mind if you wrap up this story early. Though It would make me cry... But, if you create the next one, I am sure it will be awesome as usual!


MinecraftObsessive wrote:
^ Agree with that above


Kida Deathlight wrote:i would really like you to write some more i would cry if you didn't but if your stuck you could just wrap it up :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:


✿Maragold✿ wrote:I'm pretty fine with the story ending after few more chapters, but I wish the best to get some kind of reasonable, bad or good, ending, what hopefully most of the fans will enjoy. I would love to read a new story, if you are going to do one, that is XD Even if it would be fun to read more than 'few' (2-4) more chapters of Cho's epic story, all fun ends sometime. So I'm fine with both options, really. c:


Thank you so much for your support! I haven't chosen how I'll end this, but I'll do my best to make it logical and satisfying. ^^ And yes, there'll definitely be another story :)
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Postby cookies. » Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:55 pm

YAYY!!!! That post made my day. :P Thanks ri <3
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Postby please delete! 535 » Tue Mar 05, 2013 8:57 pm

    Interesting. Unfortunately, I only got to the first chapter. May read again, later on. If I remember.

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