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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:11 pm

Li Syaoran wrote:oh no, the next segment is the last, this cant be possible NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO, lol, I cant believe hes dead, they defeated the argoth, YAY, uh-huh,n thats what you get when you mess with stars story characters lol, yay, hes finally gone, satisfy that argoth, satisfy that.

cant wait to read the final segment

LOL. I can't wait for it too. Definetly tomorrow it will be finished. I promise. I'm SOOO excited to write it tomorrow.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:38 pm

He's dead? Argoth is dead? Part of me can't believe it, but I'm happy he's gone. I'm excited for the conclusion as well!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:52 pm

*Madame Lotus* wrote:He's dead? Argoth is dead? Part of me can't believe it, but I'm happy he's gone. I'm excited for the conclusion as well!

Me too. I just LOVED writing these and im sad that I won't anymore. But it was fun. Cant wait to write the conclusion. Usulally scary stories end with "They never saw them again." Or "Then the *something* threw *the charachter* down a hole." Or anything else to make you scared for your life forever. But I think I might gradulally make it lighter. Or maybe I won't. I dont really know yet. It might be a gradual ending, or shocked forever. Im not totally sure yet.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Thu Jan 13, 2011 1:54 pm

I love surprizes, so I'll probably love the ending.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:07 pm

i definitely agree, i think everyone will love the ending
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:13 pm

I want to write it now. But I sorta want to keep you excited for it. Soo, check tomorrow! It will be there!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Fri Jan 14, 2011 12:59 pm

((last but not least. *falls on the ground and starts to cry.* Its been a great run, but its ending.))
Satisfaction ((Last segment))

Or so we thought, just then the Argoth stood up very slowly and looked at us. Our expressions went from joy to horrified in one second. I guess the giant stick through his body wasn't good enough. I did some quick thinking and took the stick and pulled it out of his body. He howled in pain and fell to the ground, dying of bloodloss. I poked him with the stick to make sure he was gone for good, he was. We fell down on our backs and breathed heavily, now it and he was finished. Then, I sat up and looked over at where Cleo... well...yea. I start to cry, I stand up and pick up her sweatshirt and wash it off into a little stream nearby. Mike stands up and pats the sweatshirt."You were a good friend." He says to it.
"We'll miss you." I say sorta hugging it. It was weird, but I didnt care. She was our best friend, and she was gone...forever. We walked out of the woods, silently and slowly. When we almost got to the road Mike stopped, turned around, and bolted into the woods. Then coming back with his brothers shirt. Then, we head out to the road and there was three police cars, six police men, the group of kids, Mikes mom, Cleos mom, my grandmother, and a criminal investigator with the tape that we put on my door to keep others out from seeing my mom. We stop in our tracks, I hold Cleos sweatshirt down y my side, and Mike with Johns shirt. Then the criminal investigator walks up to us and hold out this hand.
"C'mere, lemme see 'em." He says to us. We hold out our hands and give him the shirt and sweatshirt. I saw out of the corner of my eye that Cleos and Mikes moms were bursting out in tears. I felt really bad for them, lost their beloved children. I wanted to go over and talk to them, but the investigator wanted to ask us some questions. He asked typical questions like, what happened? What did it look like? Where is it now? We ansewerd them truly, but he thought different. He asked us to show him where we "killed" the Argoth. So, we brought him to the scene of the...lets say attack. But we were stunned to see what we found.

There was his brother, Cleos...blood, and the Argoth's blood. But the actual Argoth wasnt there. We looked around to see where it might of went, maybe shifted by the wind. The investigator laughed at us telling us we were joking but then we showed him Mikes brother and Cleo. He was shocked."You...wern't kidding, were you." He said to us. We shook our heads.
"No sir." Mike said to him with a sad face."Do you think that we would be joking at such a serious situation?" He said sternly. The inspector shook his head rapidly.
He cleared his throat."Lets go shall we?" He asks. We nodd our heads slighly. When we reach the road Mikes mother runs up to him holding little Johns shirt. She flung her arms around him and he did the same. Then Cleo's mom walked up to me and looked at me with a sad face.
"I-I'm so sorry." I said to her. "Sh-she w-was a g-gr-great friend." I said to her, my eyes watering and my voice cracking. Then, her mom walks up a little further and puts her arms around me. Then after Mike and his mom are finished she walks up to Mike and hugs him too. Then she walks to her car and talks to a man who I didn't notice before, it was a funeral worker. She wa arrangins the proper berial of Cleo and John. Well...their clothing.

Mike and I were sitting on the hill, talking. "So...where do you think he is now?" Mike asks me.
"I dont know, I dont really care. All I know is that he's dead." I say to him
"But he dissapeared when we came back." He said to me worried.
"His dead carcass will show up someday, don't worry. We checked and he was dead. You need blood in your body to survive." I say to him, trying to calm him.
"Yea...I guess you're right." He says resting his back on the hill. Then we heard a car horn and knew it was time to go.

The funeral was sad and depressing, We stood there in the cemetary wathing Cleo's sweatshirt get put into a casket and lowered down into the hole. Same with little John's shirt. We put flowers on Cleo and John's grave, sadly. We cried and gave them our words. Then we read the toumbstone. I read it out loud.
Here lies Cleo Faithaven
Loved and cherished by all
September 25, 1997-August 13, 2010
R.I.P


We started to cry again, then after I put a little toumbstone next to it I made from scratch in about an hour. It read:
Our dear friend Cleo Faithaven
best friend we could ever have
now, the worst day of our lives is
Friday, August 13.
when we lost our dear friend...Cleo
you're in our hearts forever


Cleo, you will be missed
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:24 pm

Hehe, Raven thinks Friday 13 is her lucky day.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Li Syaoran » Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:20 pm

OMG, I cant believe the argoth wasnt there, where did his carcas go, if they are right about him being dead and if not, why did he play dead, he didnt get fully satisfied, maybe hell be back one day I cant believe shes dead though, goodbye cleo and john
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Imperial Epsilon » Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:24 pm

Li Syaoran wrote: maybe hell be back one day

Maybe, maybe not. Thats up to your mind. Or..... hmmm *secret*
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